Welcome to the dVerse Poets bar for Tuesday Poetics. I’m Kim of Writing in North Norfolk and I’m your bartender for today.
I’ve been thinking a lot about animals recently and what kind of animal I would like to be, if it were possible. I love all kinds of animals, there aren’t many that I evenly mildly dislike, except perhaps sharks. But I understand that they all have their place and purpose on the planet. And then I found a poem by Delmore Schwartz, entitled ‘The Heavy Bear Who Goes With Me’, which you can read at the Poetry Foundation: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/42637/the-heavy-bear-who-goes-with-me.

Ryan Fowler – Polar Bear – Wall Mural in public domain – found on Pinterest
What I love about this poem is the man-ness of the bear and the bear-ness of the man; the way the poem lumbers; and the acceptance of the fact that humans have bodily needs. It is a debate of our dual nature. The only creatures on earth possessing a sophisticated consciousness that gives us a moral sense and an understanding of the consequences of our actions, we are compelled to exist in material bodies. All animals crave the physical comforts that this bear seeks. And we are all, animals included, often embarrassed by our bodies.
The challenge is to write a poem, of any length or form, about an animal in a human way or a human in an animal way, highlighting some trait of the animal/human that either sets us apart or brings us together – it’s up to you, just as long as the poem is new.
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Let’s go animal crackers!
Hello all… Kim is at hospital and we all wish her well. We will take turns in manning the bar..
This is such an interesting prompt Kim ~ Please take care of yourself ~
Happy Poetics everyone ~
Taking an empathetic look at animals is a good thing to do. We can maybe see ourselves better.
I think we can always find an animal to match our mood.
Hey, Y’all! Sending a healing animal for Kim.
Wonderful prompt – will muse a bit and return.
Is your muse a mouse maybe?
Hahaha! My muse growls & yowls & screams. And then sits down to the computer and mouse 🙂
a muse amuses 🙂
Thank you Jill – your healing animal has done its job!
So glad to hear that, Kim!
This was a great prompt you set out for us and I had every intention of posting and then my animal muse got tangled in a snare set by my internal editor. They wrestled for days – no clear winner.
Listen to the internal editor, it usually makes sense. 😊
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Good evening everyone and thank you Kim for this lovely prompt. So sorry to hear you are at the hospital and we send you healing thoughts xxx
Many of your haibun are from the perspective of Eivor and Pearl right in line with this prompt.
Thank you Frank, it is such a nice prompt and I love looking at life and the natural world through their eyes 😉
Thank you so much, Xenia. All the healing thoughts and prayers have done their work. I seem to be on the road to recovery and ready to do some serious reading and commenting. xxx
That is great news Kim, hope you continue to feel better and better! ☺💖 xxx
🙂 xxx
I challenge you to be a jellyfish or centipede….:-)
Lately I’ve felt like a centipede…hubby still having back issues. Sorry I haven’t been around as much as I would wish. I have about an hour before his next appt.
Cheers for the inspiration Kim, and please know you are in my thoughts. Much love to you.
Anna :o]
Thank you so much, Anna 😉
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Very fun prompt, Kim. Please know we are here to support you and sending you healing thoughts and prayers.
Thank you so much, Victoria, Your kind thoughts and prayers worked!
😆❤
Yup, health issues complicate so many of our lives–sending white light to Kim ! I went with Bear for my piece. Fascinating to consider that bear are related to apes and man, three branches of the same primordial group-=-thay are to canine, as I once thought.
I didn’t know we were so closely related to bears. i heard about the apes before.
Somewhere along the line, we must all be related to any number of animals – after all, we originated from the sea.
Thank you for the white light, Glenn! I’m home again!
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A great prompt! Healing thoughts and prayers for Kim. I’ve posted my animal side, and look forward to visiting among the menagerie. Cheers, y’all!
Nice formatting in your poem, Charley!
Again, thank you!
Thank you, Charley. I’ll be reading shortly.
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A fascinating prompt, Kim! Thanks! I’ll be back to read and respond tomorrow.
Nice coyote poem, Frank!
Thanks, Frank!
Thanks Frank. I’m just about to start some serious catch-up reading.
The poem I linked today is Chicken Pecken’ . It illustrates how we are like chickens who pick their wounded to death.
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Great prompt, Kim. Never good news to hear somebody as at the hospital. Sending you all good vibes, and hoping all is OK.
Thank you so much Sarah. I’m glad to be back online again – the temperamental Kindle just isn’t the same as a laptop on a desk with a comfy office chair. 🙂
So pleased to be connected again!
Me too!
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Sending good vibes, Kim and hope to get back. Internet problems.
Thank you, Jane. I’m back from the hospital now. I just hope your Internet is back to normal.
Glad you’re out and I hope you’re warm! Can’t say if internet is behaving, I’ve been having a family day and have just tuned in.
Time got away from me and now at airport — going for long holiday weekend to Chicago. You’ve been on my mind, Kim. Hoping all goes well today for you. Will try to write for this wonderful prompt and use for a future OLN.
Sending healing thoughts your way.
And Happy Thanksgiving to all our US dVerse writers!
Thank you, Lill, and belated Thanksgiving wishes. I’ve been home a couple of days and think I’m beginning to recover. I just hope it doesn’t come back too soon.
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Interesting prompt !
Imagining oneself as an animal seems like a good way to change perspective.
Hi Frank! Maybe we should try an inanimate object next time!
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