Greetings dVerse Poets and welcome to Open Link Night! This is Kim, Writing in North Norfolk, your host for the next couple of days.
I recently returned from a short trip to Venice with my husband, where I saw a lot of seagulls.
I find these birds fascinating. They are mostly found on the coast but often find their way inland, where they scavenge for food. I’ve heard of seagulls dive-bombing tourists and emptying out rubbish bins for chips (French fries) and other fast food. When I was teaching, lessons were often interrupted by seagulls squawking as they fought for left-over crusts in the playground.
The things I find enchanting about seagulls are the way they wheel and circle in the sky, their sorrowful calls to each other, and the flash of sunlight on their wings. I admit, I’ve been influenced by Richard Bach’s book, Jonathan Livingston Seagull, a copy of which I have owned since the seventies, and Joni Mitchell’s wonderful ‘Song to a Seagull’. Here’s a link to the song on YouTube:
As most of you know, unless you’re a newcomer here, Open Link Night is when you choose any ONE poem of yours to share. There is no prompt and there are no specific instructions to follow. But if you’re lost for a theme, you could write a poem to a seagull!
Enjoy your time here and pay your fellow pub-goers a visit as everyone makes the rounds of reading and sharing.
Here is how you link your poem:
Write a poem on your blog.
Enter a link directly to your one poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below. There you will find links to other poets and more will join during the next 48 hours.
Read and comment on other poet’s work. We all come here to have our poems read.
Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
Enjoy!
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Happy Thursday, dVerse Poets! Bjorn, you’ve beaten me to it, with your poem, which I will be reading in a moment, once I have poured you a drink. What will it be in the current cold weather? Mulled wine? An Irish coffee?
Oh Irish coffee…that’s excellent… would love it.
Coming up, with cream on the side. 😉
Yes, I know the drill. Open Link Night. I’m so happy and I’ve number 3. 🙂
Great to see you Charlie… you are always welcome here.
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Hi Charlie! You have to get in quickly! So glad you made it.
Happy OLN everyone! 🙂
Happy one back Sanaa
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Hallo there, Sanaa! Pull up a bar stool and join us for a Thursday tipple! 🙂
Definitely!❤️
Hello, and happy Thursday… sometimes ideas just come as I write… maybe it’s like flying for a seagull.
I posted a tanka not about a seagull but about a raven. Björn’s second entry from Tuesday’s prompt reminded me of it. It’s actually the first tanka in a two-part poem, the first about the poet, the second about poetry.
I love the raven tanka and look forward to the second part, Amaya!
I’ve written so many poems about birds these last two weeks, I might give the gull a whirl though I haven’t seen any here yet, left them behind further down river.
I’m a gull kinda gal!
I like them too. Ours are reasonably well- behaved. I’ve just written a gull cinquain. It’s a form I’m practicing with at the moment.
I’m looking for some new forms to try. I’ve been quite busy so I haven’t had a chance to explore yet. I might wait to see what’s in the prompts and challenges next week.
The cherita is another short form I’ve been writing. Like an extended haiku but not so precise.
Yes, I did have a go at one of those, and I like short forms. I usually tend to write between eight and fourteen lines, generally drifting towards the sonnet but I’ve been meaning to try something longer.
I’m always afraid attention deficit would kick in and nobody would read a long poem.
Good point!
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Their’s the nonet. That’s longer.
I admit I only did a nonet once. It was fun — I pictured it as a downward spiral of words following a thought, treating each line as a separate sentence. I dislike haiku that is one sentence chopped into 3 lines, preferring the 3-thought variety. So I did the same with my nonet. Like you,I don’t prefer that form. Senryu’s 3 lines is enough for me. If I did something different now, I’d probably do a Cerita or an inverted Cerita. I think of Ceritas as a haibun in 3 stanzas. It’s more fun. But nonets are good brain exercise, making you use shorter synonyms at the bottom.
All of these forms make a rather arbitrary verse. When the lines are the same length, you get a rhythm, so there’s a point to it. Making lines of a particular length for no apparent reason becomes just a brain exercise. Good in its way, but maybe less of a poem.
nonet is 9 lines. First line 9 syllables, 2nd line 8 syllables, 3rd = 7 syl, 4th=6syl, 5=5syl, 6=4sy, 7=3syl, 8=2syl, 9th & final line=1syllable.
I’ve tried the nonet and didn’t like it that much. It relies entirely on syllable count. The cinquain is syllables too, but it also has stresses which makes it a bit harder and maybe a bit more interesting. I’ll have another go with a nonet though. I might like it better this time 🙂
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Thanks for hosting, Kim! I posted something very short.
I haven’t seen it yet – I was reading and commenting on Amaya’s tanka. I’ll read yours now!
Hi Kim. Thanks for hosting. I’ve written a ghazal for OLN. I’m going to explore this form more fully I think. I’ll have a whisky please…as it comes.
A good quality whisky coming up – and then I’m off to read!
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Happy OLN everyone and thank you for hosting tonight Kim, I love that Joni Mitchell song and we are surrounded by gulls here too! My comments have been ending up in spamfolders again and if this one does not go through I will do the rounds after WordPress have fixed the problem ;o)
Happy OLN back… your comments should now be working
Fabulous! Thank you Björn :o)
It looks like the one on your blog went into the spam folder too …
Now it’s unspammed…
Thank you Björn! :o)
Good evening, Zenia! How are the windy wilds of Scotland? I bet it’s cold up there – it’s bad enough here! I hope you’re keeping warm. How about a hot toddy to make you glow? I’m so pleased you like Joni too 🙂
Oh a hot toddy will be lovely Kim! It is cold here, we have had the odd snow flake but it is not sticking on the ground. The icy wind is fierce though and we are wrapping up very warm for our walks. I have loved Joni’s music ever since I first heard it (mid-seventees) and I hope you are keeping warm too! :o) xxx
Sorry about the Z, Xenia – fat finger syndrome and X and Z are right next to each other!
No worries Kim, I knew what you meant! :o) xxx
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It is so cold here tonight that my fingers are frozen so I have made myself a cup of camomile and honey tea and will have to retire shortly to the warmth of bed and cats! I will return to read more tomorrow.
Thank you Kim for hosting! We are warm and sunny today in the high 70’s –hardly seems like winter!
You are so lucky. I had to go to bed early because my fingers had frozen and I couldn’t type! It’s morning now and the storage heaters have started to throw out a bit of heat. A hot cup of tea has helped.
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Open link morning for me today…I’m drinking “healthy” coffee, made from some kinda mushroom? No, really, it’s a full taste but low acid 🙂 Anyway, good to see y’all and I’m linking a “ghazal”…thanks to Paul for last week’s prompt. Happy Valentine’s Day early, my poetic friends!
Good morning, Lynn! It’s mid-day here in the UK, grey and dreary with some rain, and I’m drinking a de-caff mocha to keep me warm. I’m looking forward to reading your ghazal. I’m slowly catching up with reading and commenting. 🙂
For some reason, I could not post to mr. Linky?
I’ll see if I can link you up, Annell. If not, I know a Bjorn who can 😊
I’ve linked you up. Annell!
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Arriving late Kim – but arriving anyhow 😉
Great ideas and memories about seagulls, they are absolutely fascinating creatures. Intriguing in their social adaptations and majestic in this “hanging in the air” sense in flight. But I went in a different direction. 🙂
thanks for hosting 🙂
Hello… great to have you linking up… nothing is too late… we are still open another 24 hour.
thanks Bjorn – and welcome to the weekend 🙂 hope you have a most amazing one 🙂
Thanks for joining us. I’m off to bed soon but I’ll be back in the morning to read and comment.
no worries or hurries – sweet dreams Kim and Happy weekend 🙂
Thank you – happy weekend and we’ll meet again on the poetry trail next week! 🙂
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Coming in late for another night… will take a glass of whisky and then head off to bed.
I’ll be back again tomorrow morning. Sleep tight, Bjorn.
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Me too, I’m a day late so writing a poem now!
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Yay! My likes are working finally so went back and put likes on the poems that I had read before that I liked. I can’t always think of a comment so I love likes.
I’m the same!
I am so glad they fixed it!