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9/11, allusion, archives, cyclical time, Lawrence Ferlinghetti, learning from the past, looping back around, poetry community, poetry prompt, remembering, revisiting old poetry, September 11, time capsule, transformation
This day, September 11, will always be a dizzying one for how it comes around on the calendar and slings us, willingly or not, back to that fateful day in world history. What better place to convene than at the concentric point of the dVerse Poets Pub and share our own histories?
Many of us have been writing blogs for several years and in doing so, keeping time capsules filled with thoughts and emotions of specific days. The prompt tonight will ask us to loop back around, open up one of these archives of a past September 11, and construct a new poem based on our findings. Extract a stand-out word, phrase, or an entire line and meditate on it for awhile. See if it evokes new images or senses reflecting your own transformation, but even if it does not, write a new free-form poem using the word or phrase from the past. If you do not have anything recorded from September 11, find writing from the same week or month, and if you’re relatively new to blogging you may have to scour old journals and diaries or documents from your computer to find that word(s) of particular interest.
Keep in mind that the poem you’ll write today does not have to carry heavy tragic themes or anything else “9/11” usually conjures up in the psyche. I want to see stylistic and tonal diversity in the poems you collectively submit. For context, you may also choose to link us back to the original piece of writing to which you’ll be alluding, but that is not necessary. However, please highlight the repeated word/phrase/line so we readers know what inspired your today piece, an archive for a future loop.
Have a look at the Ferlinghetti piece below that, in itself, revolves around our application of the airplane and that which “fill[s] the air.” The poem is germane to today, a day that asks us to remember the worst of humanity, and then the best.
I hope you’re not too dizzy yet, bar just opened!
History of the Airplane
by Lawrence Ferlinghetti
And the Wright brothers said they thought they had invented
something that could make peace on earth when their wonderful
flying machine took off at Kitty Hawk into the kingdom of birds
but the parliament of birds was freaked out by this man-made bird
and fled to heaven
And then the famous Spirit of Saint Louis took off eastward and
flew across the Big Pond with Lindy at the controls in his leather
helmet and goggles hoping to sight the doves of peace but he did not
even though he circled Versailles
And then the famous Flying Clipper took off in the opposite
direction and flew across the terrific Pacific but the pacific doves
were frighted by this strange amphibious bird and hid in the orient sky
And then the famous Flying Fortress took off bristling with guns
and testosterone to make the world safe for peace and capitalism
but the birds of peace were nowhere to be found before or after Hiroshima
And so then clever men built bigger and faster flying machines and
these great man-made birds with jet plumage flew higher than any
real birds and seemed about to fly into the sun and melt their wings
and like Icarus crash to earth
And the Wright brothers were long forgotten in the high-flying
bombers that now began to visit their blessings on various Third
Worlds all the while claiming they were searching for doves of
peace
And they kept flying and flying until they flew right into the 21st
century and then one fine day a Third World struck back and
stormed the great planes and flew them straight into the beating
heart of Skyscraper America where there were no aviaries and no
parliaments of doves and in a blinding flash America became a part
of the scorched earth of the world
And a wind of ashes blows across the land
And for one long moment in eternity
There is chaos and despair
And buried loves and voices
Cries and whispers
Fill the air
Everywhere
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Source: http://www.corpse.org/archives/issue_11/manifestos/ferlinghetti.html
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Bar’s open! I’m looking forward to remembering together and seeing what little treasures you all find. And may we bow our heads for those who cannot be here today, for whatever reason.
Hello Amaya … took me a little bit to find a 9/11 poem… well I never really found one, but I found a piece of fiction on the statue of Liberty… and we should take liberties, shouldn’t we?
Absolutely take liberties. That was a good Warhol find too!
Hi everyone. I’m going to make this very brief as I ‘m having intermittent problems with the internet and it keeps dropping out when I’m in the middle of something. The engineer will be coming on Thursday so I’ll do my best at reading and commenting.
Hi Kim, good to see you and thanks for dropping in. I know those internet problems well.
Not even going to try after the Ferlinghetti.
It’s never the aim of one poet to silence another. But yeah. Tough act to follow.
I posted it on FB. I only post about once a year. I don’t want to get over those last lines. Just try and breathe.
This is for you… https://www.commonwealmagazine.org/poem-witness
I feel this. “I said I will not violate my silence with prayer.
I said Lord, Lord
in the speechless way of things
that bear years, and hard weather, and witness.”
And can understand why you don’t want to violate your silence.
Great prompt! In looking back at a poem from last year I realized I didn’t write anything around the 9/11 anniversary. Bummer! But, In keeping with the spirit of the prompt I selected a random poem from last year and let it speak to me. What it inspired was not a revision of the poem itself, but an essay regarding it’s substance and so that’s what I posted on my blog today.
For the stated reasons It doesn’t qualify for the rules of linking in, but I’ll still make the rounds and read what others have submitted. Maybe next week I’ll be able to join back in. Have a great week everyone!
Hi, great to have you joining us, even if you bent the rules a little. So glad we could provide some inspiration to kick off a whole new essay. Could you reply to this comment so I and others reading here could take a look? Enjoy the rest of your week too!
Sure thing- although I think I more than bent the rules, I flat out sent them through the grinder. LOL. But, if you want to take a look it’s here: https://kmcgeepoet.wordpress.com/2018/09/11/unnecessary-evil-revisited/
I did include the poem that I revisited at the bottom of the essay.
Hello Amaya, good to see you here and this was a such a beautifully written prompt, I hope I achieved something. Maybe I got to the pub too early!? Cheers!
Thanks Gina, I read yours earlier in the day and I’m glad you linked up. Yours made me think a lot about how we respond to catastrophe.
Found something Amaya. Nice idea. I like especially how the prompt makes us ponder transformations. I think we can transform this day through the years. my post has more to do with transformation than remembrance, personal rather than 9/11 writ large and tragic. thank you for the prompt my friend.
Exactly, transformation was what I was hoping to read with this prompt.
Love the painting!
I suggest you check out more of Hortal’s work. Those brushstrokes!
It is fascinating in its design and color!
Phew! This was a tricky one. Somehow I published it before I wrote my poem, so viewers must have seen the poem as it evolved. After two comments, someone finally told me I had already published, so I brought it back to drafts. I guess once I reblogged, it automatically published. Did anyone else have this problem? At any rate, finished and posted. I hope, correctly. Fun prompt, Gospel Isosceles!!!
Thanks for being here. I remember a couple years ago I was having problems with making drafts. They just went right to published! So I figured out to stop making drafts and just schedule finished or near-finished writes. Glad it all worked out.
I started composing in sticky notes on my mac and only copyingwhen I was finished. But every once in a while I backslide.
What a great prompt. It was good to go back and look at something from a year ago (I haven’t been blogging that long). The original poem was for a quadrille prompt by De – the word was “free”. Reading it, though, I was obviously writing in awareness of the date, even though I don’t specifically mention it anywhere, and it’s not mentioned in the original prompt.
Mine was from that quadrille prompt too. Fitting, in a way, seeing as how freedom is what certain radicals try to eradicate.
Good morning. An intriguing prompt and an excellent way to mark September 11. A very painful topic so the option to not poem it directly is appreciated…I could see myself trying this again down the road.
It’s definitely sensitive. I wanted to pay tribute but not in a what-were-you-doing-on-that-day type of way. Thanks for your participation. I was hoping to see a variety of takes.
I am late to the pub – rolling in after the last of the drunks staggers out – but i think this prompt has so much value that I spent extra time composing. We are travelling at present and my time is limited, but I will be back to read the mix. Cheers all (said quietly so as to not disturb any hangovers.)
Keeping dVerse a priority while traveling — props to you. I changed your link on Mr. Linky because you originally linked back here. Who’s the drunk one? J/k, thanks for being with us.
thanks for fixing it – it’s senior brain
I have worse: mom brain. I hope it gets better after these toddler/newborn years!
Oh, I remember those days. It does get better….or so I seem to remember, lol.
Great idea Amaya. I found one from last year dated 9/11, which was my first year of blogging. Posting soon!
Glad you found one, Linda.
that image is shockingly gorgeous – took me a while to compose something from your thought provoking prompt – for once have touched on yesterday’s anniversary which until now I have avoided out of respect
It’s been 17 years, and I was 17 went it all went down. I’ve been quiet too, but as my day hosting, I didn’t want to show disrespect by outright ignoring it, painful as it still may be. Great to have you here, Laura.