Friends, we have a guest blogger for today’s Haibun Monday, qbit/Randall – Grace
One’s Self, En-Masse
Photo credit: here
“One’s-self I sing, a simple separate person,
Yet utter the world Democratic, the word En-Masse.” – Walt Whitman
qbit/Randall here as your guest pubtender. Put your face or derrière or other body parts down on the glass of the Xerox and press “copy” one hundred times, and make a collage. OK, no, don’t do that, not worth losing your job. Today’s prompt is called “One’s Self, En-Masse”, by Michael Pettit. It is from the most excellent Practice of Poetry, a collection of writing exercises from “Poets who Teach.”
To paraphrase the book:
Write a description of two or three tight paragraphs in which you describe one particular member or element of a set:
● one sparrow in a flock of sparrows
● one baby in a nursery of babies
● one fish in a barrel of fish
● one scream in a stadium of screams
● one somersault in a series of somersaults
● one Rockette in a chorus line of Rockettes
The challenge is to perceive the qualities of the group, and to distinguish what makes an individual member of that group both a part of it and apart from it. What sets or groups can you observe directly or in your imagination? Aim for clarity and simplicity in your language.
“Perception,” said William Carlos Williams, “is the first act of the imagination.” This exercise is intended to alert you to make distinctions and create particular images. Focus upon concrete particulars, and how they can express your vision to the reader.
Non-fiction in the prose section is generally the norm in Haibun, but alternative realities are welcome. Finish your piece with a Haiku or micro-poem. I ended mine with a micro-poem, so I won’t stipulate that you end yours with a canonical Haiku. Do what sounds/feels right. Use of a Kigo/season word is up to you.
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About our guest blogger: When I was younger I set out to be a poet, which meant (I imagined) that I would need live the life of a poet. So I knocked around the world a bit and lived an appropriately bohemian and dissolute life. Until one day, hungry and playing music in the Paris subway for spare change, I realized that if I gave my only 10 centime coin to the homeless clochard sitting next to me, then I would be the down-and-out person between the two of us, and he could then give it back to me. We could take turns, etc. etc. Which was not at all a low point, but liberating in the way that “well, this is all a dumb plan” can be liberating and I returned home to the US and took up a life of at least outward respectability and industry.
qbit/Randall here. Looking around for the key to open the liquor cabinet. Gotta be here somewhere…
I have it… can you bring me a Laphroaig
Hmm… All I see in the cabinet is some bottle marked “DRINK ME ” and “- Alice” underneath. Not sure this is a good idea…
🙂 the whiskey is on the top shelf…. there is a ladder right to the left
Ah, yes, I see that. Coming right up. Neat or on the rocks?
Neat…no ice with good whiskey.
Certainly! But one never knows, LOL! Hey, any good cognac or armagnac in here? (rummage rummage…)
Thanks for hosting! I love how those tiny birds move so effortlessly together.
It’s truly amazing, isn’t it? They seem to all flow/fly as one entity.
I think this exercise was fun… but at the end I couldn’t come up with anything more original than being on public transportation
It was great! A really good metaphor for it. All of us together/apart. Unified in action but still each alone.
When were you busking on the Paris Métro? I might have met you.
Um, like a really long time ago. Ilke 1982.
Just missed you then. I arrived in 1983.
That’s great!! Where did you busk for the most part, and what did you play?
I didn’t busk, I worked. Probably didn’t earn much more than you did. My first job after leaving university was with a wine merchant in Paris.
Yes, we had little money, but we were in Paris, non? I lived on the back side of Montmartre, in the 18th. Jules Joffrin. Sixth floor walk-up, no hot water, toilet at the end of the hall. It was the best.
When I was pregnant with my second baby, the place I worked only had a toilet in the cellar, reached by going down a ladder. I had the choice of risking the ladder or using the toilet on the sixth floor…
OK, that is slightly too much charm of old buildings and fittings!
That pregnancy was a killer.
That murmuration video is something else, a dance of beauty ! Thanks for hosting and looking forward to reading the haibun. Happy Monday!
Thanks for having me!
Hi everyone, and thank you for hosting with an interesting and challenging haibun prompt, Randall.
Hope you enjoy it!
one for the first – excellent challenge though not as easy as it first sounds! Will look into Pettit – thanks for the intro
It is a wonderful book, many ideas. I’m still only at the very beginning!
OK, I’ve done it, but this was an intellectual challenge. Nice to see your bio – love the idea of you swapping centimes with a down and out. We all grow up, I guess, but not too much. And you are a poet! Obviously. So that’s OK.
Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, a little difficult but interesting (so I hope!). And it is what we do here that makes us poets — writing and reading and encouraging each other.
That’s right. And while I’m here, I’ll have some of that cognac you were searching up earlier. It’s getting chilly here.
Coming right up!
Hey, sir! Nice prompt. I will be in and out from time to time (and other potential cliches). No drinks right now… likely to make me… well, not now.
Soon, though.
I have a little of Svenn’s white lightning left over from that other Haibun. Gonna burn a bit going down, but what the hey…
Maybe sometime… and for real. Emptied my wine glass. Time for port.
Oooh, Port is good!
Port is very good.
Thanks for hosting. Interesting exercise, and as I submit my piece I can hear my therapist calling out: Gestalt.
Gestalt for sure. The whole greater than the sum of the parts.
Giving this a go Q! Thanks for hosting.
Let bed the vultures and the mortality!
Meant “loved the vultures…” dang autocorrect!
Evening, Poets! Thanks, q, for the fantastic prompt! Brought me back to a childhood memory that resonates, especially during Autumn. Now, how about that Burgundy? 🙂
Giving you a long pour! Raise our glasses to that crow.
Here, here! 🙂
a most interesting and challenging prompt! looking forward to reading the haibuns that will evolve from this. Thinking over what I shall write. Very nice Q!
Gina, your link just comes back here in an endless existential loop…
thank you Sarah for the most encouraging comment, it may have been the result of me running too many times around the park this morning!
The link is fixed/corrected. See you in the poetry trail.
thanks Grace, did not know there was an issue
Loved your Haibun, thanks so much for posting it.
thank you for this very provocative challenge, one I had really thought long and hard about before writing, which i seldom do!
This was a hard one for me. I’m not sure if I accomplished the challenge, but, oh well–deer. 🙂
I love the word murmuration–and of course, a murmuration itself is amazing.
If you’ve found your way around the bar, I’ll be back later for a glass of wine.
Your Haibun was so good! Thanks for stopping by.
Thank you!
A late entry.
Loved it. And the grunion Haiku was great!