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Edgar Allen Poe, Maya Angelou, Meeting the Bar, poetry prompts, Repetition, Robert Blake, Theodore Roethke, Walt Whitman
Hello Fellow Poets! Jilly behind the bar tonight and we will be Meeting the Bar with
Repetition, Repetition, Repetition!
Repetition is all around us; in music, in advertising, in our everyday conversation. We use it for emphasis, to drive home our meaning, to get the reader/listener’s attention; we use it to make our songs catchy and singable; we use repetition to make our words more memorable.
“Repetition can be one of the most intoxicating features of poetry”
~Theodore Roethke
Poets, like composers and lyricists, make use of repetition; we use repeated words, phrases and even repetition of complete lines.
Repetition of a Single Word
Consider the strength of emotion conveyed by Whitman with the words, “But O heart! heart! heart!” in O Captain! My Captain!
O Captain! My Captain!
by Walt Whitman
O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done,
The ship has weather’d every rack, the prize we sought is won,
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring;
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.
Anaphora is a particular type of repetition; that of a single word or short phrase used at the beginning of succeeding lines that often gives a poem a liturgical feel. Martin Luther King, Jr. employed it in his famous “I Have a Dream” speech, giving us a sense of a poetic and rhythmic quality. William Blake (one of my favorite poets) used anaphora effectively in The Tyger and here, in the second stanza of London:
In every cry of every Man,
In every Infants cry of fear,
In every voice: in every ban,
The mind-forg’d manacles I hear
Repetition of a Phrase
“Quoth the raven…” Of course we all know what comes next; Nevermore! Poe repeats this famous phrase but with differing intent and meaning as the tale progresses, lending the reader a growing sense of unease. Repetition of a phrase can point your reader to a motif or theme to which you want them to pay attention. From the same poem, the twisting repetition of the phrase, “…and nothing more” leads us to that dreadful knowledge that our narrator is left with nothing due to his loss and to the eternal implications for both he and Lenore.
Repetition of Lines
There are forms that require repetition of lines, like the Villanelle, Pantoum or Triolet.
Maya Angelou employed line repetition in Phenomenal Woman with the following:
I’m a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That’s me.
Your challenge, my fellow poets, is to make use of repetition; perhaps select one of the types that I’ve mentioned, or blend several; you might try your hand at a repetitive form like a Villanelle.
New to dVerse? Here’s what to do:
Write a poem as the prompt suggests, and post it to your blog.
Click on Mr. Linky below to add your name and enter the direct URL to your poem
On your blog, please provide a link back to dVerse.
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And most importantly, treat yourself to reading some of the other responses to the prompt and add a short comment or reaction. Everyone likes to be appreciated! The prompt is “live” for two days, so please stop back in and read a few of the latecomers too!
jillys2016 said:
Welcome to MTB!!! The pub is open and I look forward to reading some great poems!
Grace said:
Thank you Jill for reminding us of the power of repetitions. I love the repetitive verses in the forms like villanelle and triolet. Must try my hand at those poetry forms again.
jillys2016 said:
So glad you’ve joined in, Grace! I’m a Villanelle fan; perhaps a future prompt 🙂
kim881 said:
Hi Jill and dVerse poets! Thank you for hosting Jill and for the prompt. I hope I’ve understood it correctly as I’ve repeated sounds. I’ve had one of those days today, so
I might disappear – but I will return. 🙂
jillys2016 said:
Looking forward to reading!!!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello, I use repetition all the time, all the time… but I need to write something new., thinking cap is on.
jillys2016 said:
Can’t wait to read what comes from under that cap!
sarahsouthwest said:
I’m partial to a bit of repetition, too. I might have gone a bit over the top tonight.
jillys2016 said:
I certainly hope there is some ‘over the top’ poems floating around the pub tonight! I’ll swing by to read shortly 🙂
Linda Kruschke said:
I wrote a poem this past weekend at a writers conference. I’m quite happy with how it turned out and planned to share it for the next OLN. Then, lo and behold, we get this MTB prompt on repetition, with a discussion of anaphora, and the waiting is over.
jillys2016 said:
Woo hoo! Love it when that happens! Look forward to reading 🙂
Charley said:
Hi, Jilly! Thanks for posting and thank you for this challenge. I’m not certain I’m ready to start into the beverages yet (cooking and drinking — not a good mix!).
jillys2016 said:
Glad you are joining in!
Charmed Chaos said:
Hi Jill- thanks for hosting! Coincidentally, I wrote a poem this morning for another prompt and while it is not a strict form, there is repetition so I am sharing. Hope that is okay!
jillys2016 said:
Hooray! Love how the poeting world aligns like stars; can’t wait to read!
Charmed Chaos said:
iI must be fate-LOL!
jazzytower said:
Hi Jilly,
Mine was originally for Poetics…but It just didn’t work out for that. The weird thing is I had a repetion at the beginning and the end if it. So it now lives here. 🙂 Thanks for hosting.
Pat
jillys2016 said:
Wonderful! I’m glad it worked out for you to share it!
jazzytower said:
Thanks😊
Dorianna Ric (paint-it-poetry) said:
Repition can really make the words evoke feeling and add to a stronger remembrance. I shall try my hand at it.
jillys2016 said:
So glad!
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks for hosting, Jilly! It is good to be reminded to take advantage of repetition. Songs do this well.
Glenn Buttkus said:
Such a gracious host; cool. Repetition like refrain, like call and respond or echo poetics can strengthen a poem, push into a new realm. Thanks for nudging us in that direction. Frank is right, and often our poetry can become a ballad, dirge, or tribute.
jillys2016 said:
So glad you joined in, Glenn!
Waltermarks said:
Thanks for a great prompt Jilly. It’s great to be able to join y’all tonight. I might have gone a little too far on what I wrote. If I did, I’m sorry. Let me know, or if you need to, just delete it. Election time just brings out the worst in me 😨
jillys2016 said:
It does seem to have that impact on us all. Glad you’ve joined us!
Waltermarks said:
Thanks Jilly. I think I let get to me a little too much. I definitely screen my calls now days
jillys2016 said:
Mine are coming as unsolicited text messages and every time a new number, so blocking doesn’t help. Can’t wait for the election to be over; I want to see them all out taking down their signs 🙂
Waltermarks said:
At least they will all retreat to Washington DC and fight amongst themselves. I think they do the least damage that way
Frank J. Tassone said:
Evening, Poets! Thanks, Jilly, for the delightful prompt! 🙂
jillys2016 said:
My pleasure! Glad you are here, Frank.
Gina said:
greetings Jilly! love repetition, I think I do it quite a bit, i researched some of your suggestions and was pleasantly surprised with my discoveries. I added that into my post as I reworked an older poem for this prompt. eager to go read all the others soon. poor internet connection on my travels is really frustrating! thank you for a most interesting prompt to work on!
jillys2016 said:
So glad you are joining in, Gina!
V.J. Knutson said:
Thanks for hosting Jilly, and I see there are some really creative poems out there. Have to confess I’m too tired to try a villanelle tonight, but maybe another time. At least I am here! Would love a frothy chai tea latté
jillys2016 said:
That, my friend, is my specialty! Perhaps I’ll make two! Glad you have joined in 🙂
peterfrankiswrites said:
Thanks for a great (and timely) prompt Jilly. Have posted on the cuckoo (koel) outside my window…
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syncwithdeep said:
I love you!
you are my favorite mistake
I want to repeat
all over again
I love you!
jillys2016 said:
Nice! Sorry you missed the link on this challenge 🙂
syncwithdeep said:
Oh yea.. Thank u for quoting