“What do we call visible light? We call it color. But the electromagnetic spectrum runs to zero in one direction and infinity in the other, so really, children, mathematically, all of light is invisible.”
–Anthony Doer, All the Light We Cannot See
Welcome to Tuesday Poetics, Everyone! It’s Merril at the bar today. I have an assortment of beverages—hot, cold, alcoholic, or not. What’s your pleasure? I think I’ll have a cup of tea now, and some wine later. OK. Are you settled? You might need some special eyeglasses or devices because we’re going to talk about invisibility.
Recently, I saw the trailer for a new movie called The Invisibles. It’s a docudrama about Jews who lived in Berlin during WWII–sort of hiding in plain sight. Then suddenly, I started seeing references to “invisible” everywhere.
One might argue that it’s the poet’s job to make the invisible visible through our words—to make us see a love in a star, or to make us smell a rose that exists only in the poet’s mind. But today I want to explore that idea more explicitly.
There are things that our naked eyes cannot see—light rays, bacteria, faraway planets—and there are things we do not see because we don’t look up or down or around. We often do not see the homeless or the people who clean houses, offices, and streets, or those who do menial labor. I found this poem by Renato Rosaldo who writes of being one of the invisible: “I’m one of the invisible living among the notable.”
Perhaps you want to think about the paranormal—ghosts, spirits, poltergeists, and all the things that go bump in the night (or day). We may sense them, but not see them. Perhaps your smile lingers while you become invisible like the Cheshire Cat? Perhaps you have a cloaking device, like on Star Trek? Or are you a spy using invisible ink?
Being invisible can be a metaphor, or it can lead us to imagine new pleasures, horrors, or adventures. What would you do if you were invisible?
Write a poem in any form that references invisible or invisibility. There are lots of ways to go with this, and I’m eager to see what the dVerse community comes up with. I’ve also just thought that an erasure poem might fit this prompt—erasing words or making them invisible to make a poem visible. So that’s another option. And of course, you might want to continue writing sonnets or rubaiyat.
If you are new, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem (in any form) in response to the challenge.
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy. You will find links to other poets and more will join, so check back later to read their poem.
- Read and comment on other poets’ work–we all come here to have our poems read.
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
Grace said:
Welcome to Poetics everyone! Hope you will be visibly delighted with this prompt. See you in the poetry trail!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I will just dive into the poems… this will be an adventure
merrildsmith said:
Please do, and yes it will! 🙂
Gina said:
hello Grace! it’s a lovely balmy morning here, the acrid smell of fire crackers still in the air, Lunar New Year started with a bang! Eager to read the “invisible” thoughts come to life!
Grace said:
Happy Lunar New Year to you! Been reading and watching red and white celebrations specially in your part of the world. Not much fanfare here though as its still very cold. Hope the travels have been good.
Gina said:
it is a huge celebration here, 2 weeks long to be precise though the first 3 days are the most hectic. travels have been amazing but always so good to come back home. glad we get to share through social media.
merrildsmith said:
How cool! I know there was a midnight Lion Dance in Chinatown in Philadelphia, but that’s WAY past my bedtime. Last year we saw one during the day.
Gina said:
we have it all through the day here, its to welcome the god of prosperity, such energy right!
merrildsmith said:
Yes!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello all… I tried to tell a whole life story in my poem, ending as if often does with invisibility
Grace said:
Clever title and twist too Bjorn.
kim881 said:
Good evening all! I can’t wait to ‘see’ your invisible poems!
robtkistner said:
Hi Merril. Thank you for hosting!!! This sounds like fun! I am gonna go disappear now… 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Hi Rob! I’ll check and see if I can find you in a bit. I don’t even have my poem up yet.
Gina said:
that is one of my favourite books Merril, partly because it deals with the science i work with and also because of the wonderful poetic prose. what a fabulous word – invisible, i wrote a few, choosing one now for your prompt. so lovely to have you host, i need a strong peppermint tea today, too much feasting over the Lunar New Year last night. hope you are well.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Gina. I love that book, as well. Happy New Year. I’m glad you had a good feast. I’ve got your peppermint tea–I’ll just pass it through. 😉
Gina said:
thank you Merill, ahh the aroma is warming my sleepy eyes as we speak, enjoy the poetry trail!
merrildsmith said:
Hi Everyone! Thank you, Grace for opening the pub. I had to take my mom to the doctor–just a check up–but at 96, she can’t go by herself. Then I have to admit, I took a short walk in the park because we’re having a day of spring in February!
sarahsouthwest said:
Sorry, Merril – I can’t see a thing in here! Great prompt. I’ll have a gin and tonic, clear as ice, clearer than water, please.
merrildsmith said:
Coming right up, Sarah. Hmm. . .I’ll tap the glass. Can you hear it?
msjadeli said:
Hi Merril and All. Merril, would you please make me a hot chai tea this afternoon? The sun is shining but it’s still a mite chilly here. The Renato Rosaldo poem reminds me so much of a film I saw recently, “Roma”, which is set in the Roma neighborhood of Mexico City. The main character of the film is one of the invisible. I really like your prompt and will have to think about which way to go with it…
merrildsmith said:
Hot chai coming up! Roma is truly wonderful. We saw it in the theater. You are absolutely right about that character.
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sanaarizvi said:
Thank you for hosting us, Merril ❤️ I truly enjoyed writing to this one 🙂
Hope you like my offering!
Happy Tuesday everyone ❤️
merrildsmith said:
Thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed the prompt. I will be over to look at it in a few minutes.
Maggie C said:
Gotta post and disappear, but I’ll be back to see what others have done.
merrildsmith said:
🙂
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RhScribbles said:
Getting ready to post.
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Suzanne said:
My response to this prompt stretches the idea of haibun – I hope it’s acceptable to the poets of d’verse.
merrildsmith said:
I’m sure it will be. I’ll be over to look in a bit.
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V.J. Knutson said:
Hi all and gracious host! I am in tonight with a bit of a rant – not aimed at anyone here, of course, just a general, WTF, lol.
merrildsmith said:
Hahaha. Welcome!
Truedessa said:
Good Evening – I will out reading leaving visible comments. Looking forward to reading what everyone has created.
merrildsmith said:
Good morning. Thank you for reading and leaving visible comments. 🙂
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rosross said:
What a thought-provoking prompt. I look forward to reading.
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RhScribbles said:
Btw… I use my “smart” phone and the mister linky does not show in the app. Do I need to add an add on?
merrildsmith said:
I don’t know. I just checked from my iPhone, and it’s there. I’m not sure which app you’re using. I just searched for dVerse on Chrome. Does anyone else have an answer?
RhScribbles said:
The WordPress app doesn’t show it. But it does in safari or chrome. Maybe it’s my settings in the app?
merrildsmith said:
Maybe? I don’t have the app.
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memadtwo said:
Great topic. (K)
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Charmed Chaos said:
Hi Merril- Oddly enough, I just finished reading All the Light We cannot See. It was amazing. Joining this morning…
merrildsmith said:
Another bit of synchronicity! 🙂
Charmed Chaos said:
Yes!
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