Hello poets and friend, this is Björn, your host today.
In all types of writing including poetry the point of view is important, often we as poets tend to get stuck in one or a few familiar ones.
Consider the advantages of the various ones, in the first perspective, we are ourselves, we know our innermost feelings and we can also describe ourselves. The poem is strong, and even though we can pretend to be another person we can decide exactly how much we want to tell. Today this is the most common one.
What about if you changed that perspective, write about yourself in third person, while still knowing the inner life, emotions of that person. Do you notice the difference in tone? You become a divine observer of self.
Or do the same talking to yourself, talking to yourself as someone else. What impression do you achieve? Do you maybe become your own counselor?
Or make yourself into a collective, changing the first person singular into a collective we, and notice the difference.
You can do the same thought experiment starting from a poem written in third person, step into that person and write about it in first person. Dress yourself on his or her persona.
As usual in MTB I would like you to go out of your comfort zone and change the perspective.
You can either start from a poem you written before and change its perspective, or simply write from a perspective you are not used to.
When you have done that post the poem and include a short note on how what you felt when going out of your comfort zone.
Then post the poem to your blog, and link it up below. Visit and comment other poems and have fun as usual.
Interesting in terms of technique. I’ve also played with changing genders in poems and stories just to see what happens…
It is so interesting to work with… and one of those we think the least about.
Hello all, i am still on my way home after a Mahler symphony…
Interesting! I have written before from the perspective of Dorian Grey, his butler. and a prostitute in Whitechapel in 1880’s r4unning from the Ripper. LOL can’t think of another perspective at this point but will think of it long and hard.
And I have almost become the aged librarian
He would be cool as a young man or a teenager
This doesn’t surprise me a bit.
Good evening all. Thanks for hosting and for challenging us, Bjorn. I didn’t have time to write much today, so I rewrote a fairly recent poem with a different perspective. Sometimes rewriting makes me focus more than writing a brand new poem.
I think changing a perspective of a poem you written before is very good for this challenge
I’m sorry, I meant to include the comment about how I felt writing in a different perspective in my post. Well, it’s here now…
I’d better add that it was originally in the first person, all-knowing and possible unreliable, and I changed it to second person, the omniscient poet addressing someone unknown and unnamed.
Hello Bjorn and All- Interesting and challenging prompt. I seldom write from a man’s perspective, so going to give it a try.
Hello… the perspective is once thing I always try to play with… a woman’s first perspective is one that’s hard for me… but there are others too.
I had originally written this to be about a wolf, prompted by IGWRT. At your suggestion Björn I changed the perspective to be that of the wolf. It made the poem feel empowering rather that just powerful. Very interesting.
So interesting …. the wolf perspective is one that I could try as well.
I just rewrote the poem I had written for the dVerse Polyptoton prompt of October 24th, changing it from 1st person to 3rd person. It required some other editing to make it work, but the change in perspective made an interesting shift in the essence of the poem. This is cool… 🙂
This is a lot of fun… and I spend quite a lot of time choosing the perspective especially when writing fiction. The other day I wrote a story where my perspective become unreliable when I became two different stalkers converging into one.
Hello Bjorn and All. Late to the pub, as I was at the pet store. It is a winter wonderland here today and will try to remember to add a youtube of it at the end of the poem. Challenging prompt, Bjorn. Will see what I can come up with…
The simplest is to take a poem and rewrite it from another perspective… then compare how they feel…
Too late for the prompt but it doesn’t stop me from doing it for fun. Thanks, Bjorn.
Now I need to go to bed… this was interesting.
HI Bjorn, interesting prompt I took a different approach. I hope it fits the bill.
While you’re slumbering, Bjorn–point of view, or perspective is certainly a tool most of us use often. I have to smile when I use the first person in a fictional setting , and it alarms everyone; the power of poetry.
I think we some of us try to use the first person, and depending on topic I think some persons react differently… as an example if I write that I am a maniacal serial killer people don’t assume anything, but if I write that I have lost my love then people assume it’s true.
Hey Björn, thank you so much for such a creative challenge. I couldn’t write a new poem as I was traveling, so I updated my previous poem. Changed some form and meter to bring a new perspective, but not much. I hope you like it and I apologize for not being able to write a completely new poem.
I really think changing the perspective of an existing poem is a great thing to do… comparing the before and after is so much easier then
How do I link to my poem to here, so I will be involved in the convo? Sorry, I’m new to this stuff…
You click on MrLinky which will take you to the place where you put your link to the poem… welcome to the community 🙂
Late to the party. https://xanhaiku.wordpress.com/2019/11/10/perspectives/