Hello, this is Frank Hubeny. The prompt today is to identify some poetic technique, theme or style that you enjoy and would like to try yourself by imitating it. Let us know what it is you are trying to practice or imitate. Some of us may want to try imitating it ourselves after seeing what you find enjoyable in a poem.
If you can’t think of anything, don’t worry. In the rest of this prompt, I will try to explain what I would like to imitate. You are welcome to use that.
What I found interesting recently was a stanza from The Lady of Shalott by Alfred Lord Tennyson that De Jackson (aka WhimsyGizmo) used in Quadrille #90.
Here is the stanza from a lavishly illustrated by Howard Pyle book of the poem available on the Internet Archive.
Willows whiten, aspens quiver, Little breezes dusk and shiver Thro’ the wave that runs forever By the island in the river Flowing down to Camelot. Four gray walls, and four gray towers, Overlook a space of flowers, And the silent isle imbowers, The Lady of Shalott.
What interests me in this is the hypnotic sound of the meter. There are four beats per line, but rather than being the expected iambic, ta-dum, ta-dum rhythm with an unaccented syllable followed by an accented syllable, it is backwards. The accented syllable comes first followed by the unaccented syllable making a trochaic meter.
This means the line ends on an unaccented syllable and it does so in seven of the nine lines. At the end of the fifth and ninth lines the final sound, -lot, is accented.
The rhyme pattern is also unusual for me. I am not used to hearing the same rhyme sound in three or four lines one right after the other.
So what I am going to try to do is write a stanza like that one: nine lines with a rhyme pattern AAAABCCCB and using four trochees per line.
Now it is your turn. Either use Tennyson as an example to imitate or find something that you are more interested in trying. Write a poem, note what you have focused on practicing in your poem and post the poem to your blog. Copy the link to your blog post and paste it in the Mister Linky below.
Don’t forget to come back and read what others found worth practicing through imitation. You may find something you would like to try imitating in one of those posts much as I did after reading just a few lines from The Lady of Shalott.
Welcome! The pub is open. The challenge is to find something poetic to imitate and provide an example of it in a poem of your own.
Hello Frank and thanks for hosting. This is such an interesting prompt. I’m going to try Working with your example and rhyme scheme. I struggle with meter at times, so we’ll see where it goes!
Great! I find it rather challenging especially because it contains a meter I’m not used to writing in.
Hi Frank and thank you for hosting tonight! I posted a piece earlier today that was inspired by the style and spirit of Saigyõ, even though I can only base it on translations. I look forward to seeing what else comes up and will swing by in a moment to read.
Very nice tanka, Xenia. I like how a feeling can be described vividly with few words using such forms.
Thank you kindly Frank 🙂
Interesting prompt/exercise, Frank. Thanks!
Thanks, Merril! I hope I kept it open enough for a large variation of links.
Hello Frank… I went for another alternative and took thirteen looks at a blackboard.
That was very nice. I may try imitating Wallace Steven’s thirteen ways of looking at a blackbird.
Hello Frank and All. Late to the party but still game to give this a try. Now to go out and find a model of something poetic that I like.
The party has just started.
🙂
I love playing with rhyme but meter is not my forte … will try it 🙂
Thanks for an interesting challenge Frank
You can pick something else to imitate besides something with rhyme or meter. Meter can be difficult.
Sorry Frank I had a super busy Friday … will see what time allows me over the weekend 🙂
No problem! I know how busy things can get. I can’t get to all of the prompts myself.
hopefully 🙂
ouch missed the linky cut off by 2.5 hours 😦
http://aroused.blog/2019/11/24/potential
I like how you imitated the rhyme and meter of Tennyson’s poem. Thanks for linking it here even if the Mister Linky expired.
thanks 🙂
Thank you for hosting. Interesting prompt Frank, and open for freedom of interpretation. I was thinking I would do an “ee” free form imitation – but I can’t ge that damned galloping Tennyson meter out of my head! Oh well…
Free form is fine. Whatever you want to imitate. That Tennyson meter is captivating.
For shits & giggles, I have added a 2nd piece. This one is a stream-of-consciousness surreal rant. Could easily be wrapped! 😉
I enjoyed the rant. 🙂
Thank you for hosting Frank. I did an imitation of Wallace Stevens and Basho – 13 ways of looking at Autumn Leaves and haiku on some. I love the simplicity of Japanese style poetry and I am all worn out from ranting and raving of poets.
So I stuck to something peaceful. Nice prompt! And one doesn’t always have to look at blackbirds!
Very nice! After yours and Bjorn’s imitation of that poem, it seems like something worth imitating.
Frank, what an intriguing prompt! I actually keep a list of forms to try, but then I always cheat lol. Will work on this tonight, not sure when I’ll get it to posting readiness.
I sometimes cheat with forms as well. I get tempted to modify them a bit here and there, but why not? If the end result is pleasing that is all that matters.
This is a great prompt, Frank. We learn so much by imitating and by trying out different techniques.
I’ve found a couple techniques in what people have posted that I would like to try. The 13 ways to see something and the American sentence are two that sound interesting.
Great prompt, Frank. (K)
Thank you, Kerfe! I like how you use color framed in a circle in your art. It is very beautiful.
Thanks Frank. Watercolor can do magical things.
Thanks Franks for this prompt. I took an old plum 😉 Yes that one of William Carlos Williams. But did you know Kenneth Kock, also an American poet, did a parody on that poem. I went with the later version.
Those variations were enjoyable. The pattern of confession, asking for forgiveness and excuse could be used to form a structure for other poetry.
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