Welcome to the dVerse Poets Pub for Tuesday Poetics. I’m Kim of Writing in North Norfolk and I’m your bartender for today.
It would have been Sylvia Plath’s 87th birthday on 27th October. Because so much has been written about her, her marriage to Ted Hughes and her tragic suicide, and a film about her was released in 2003, we think we know all about them, individually and as a couple, but I’m sure there’s a lot that we will never know.
For this prompt I have taken a poem by each poet, which I would like you to read: ‘Mushrooms’ by Plath and ‘Thistles’ by Hughes.
You’ll notice some similarities; for example, they have single word titles, have been written in tercets, and are about things that grow and invade, both poems making use of personification.
There are also differences: Plath’s lines are very short, with nearly every line consisting of five syllables, while Hughes’s are longer and of varying lengths; Plath has used the first person plural, whereas Hughes has written in the third person; Plath’s poem is arguably feminine in tone and has political overtones, while ‘Thistles’ is masculine – Hughes refers to them as men and sons.
It’s interesting to note that these poems were written when the poets were married.
The challenge is to write a poem in the format and style of either Plath or Hughes. It must be about something that grows or multiplies and is in some way invasive. Here are some suggestions, but you are free to choose your own:
Dandelions, nettles, buttercups, brambles, Japanese knotweed, Giant Hogweed, grey squirrels, rabbits (particularly in Australia), water primroses, phytoplankton, cane toads, signal crayfish and zebra mussels.
If you are new to the Poets Pub, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge.
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy. You will find links to other poets and more will join so check back later to read their poems.
- Read and comment on other poets’ work – we all come here to have our poems read.
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
Hello all, I will stand in tonight and open the bar for Kim who is ill with a vicious virus. Hope you are all well and feel inspired by the prompt.
Hello Bjorn (and Kim — hope you get well soon!) and All. Another intriguing challenge. It’s sunny today and two sliders are cracked open to get air flowing through. The cats are feisty and distracted somewhat from antagonizing one another. Bjorn, if you are pouring tonight, Magners please.
Magners is always here for you Lisa… it was an interesting prompt to write to.
Nice to know. Thanks and Cheers!
Nice to know. Thank you. Cheers! (typed once at the pub but it didn’t show up, so apologies if this is a duplicate)
Hello Bjorn and all- So sorry to hear Kim is not well. I am doing a little better today with the toothache. I will try to write something and post in the morning before my next dentist visit. It’s a wonderful prompt!
Maybe you can find some critter to blame your toothache on .
Or wish it on…It’s been so painful.
Linda, so sorry you’re suffering. When a tooth goes bad it wreaks havoc. May the pain end soon.
Thank you Lisa.
You’re welcome.
A wonderful prompt. I don’t know if I can do it in either of their format. I am tempted to write an American Sentence but don’t know it if would be acceptable. Get better soon Kim! Get better Linda!
It is actually tercets which would fit haiku well.. but maybe you can do a series of american sentences…
LOL, then it would not be an American Sentence. I will skip this prompt then. Maybe a haiku. What I have to say is short and sweet, or rather, not so sweet.
Nothing sweet to say about the pests we have today…
Especially about the bane of my existence, poison ivy. Was in hospital with it when I was six. I have remained deathly allergic to it.
Ouch… mine was not sweet either.
LOL. I can deal with rats!
Toni, I can relate to the poison ivy. My dog was bringing it in over and over and I didn’t realize it. It’s a dastardly thing it is.
It really is bad, dastardly, insidious…..
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What an interesting prompt. I often think these more restrictive prompts engender greater creativity. Two great poets, poems to aspire to.
Sorry to hear that Kim is not well – what a bunch of crocks we are – I’m sure this November weather doesn’t help. It’s dark and wet and thoroughly miserable here.
I want tea, please, in a proper china cup and saucer, and a seat by the fire. And a cat to stroke.
Thank you, Bjorn, for stepping in, and for providing tea, fire and cat. What a great pub this is!
Thank you for stepping in Björn. I hope Kim and Linda are both feeling better soon. Sarah–I’m sipping tea now with a cat nearby. Unfortunately, no fire–though I do have bread making, so the kitchen smells great. I’m getting ready for Thanksgiving and also have to start reviewing the copyedited files for my book, so I may have to pass on the prompt.
Hi Björn. Thank you for filling in as host for Kim. Certainly hope she feels better soon!
I took a different slant on the concept of something invasive. I looked at it from the positive side.
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I’m sitting here in the dark, with my candles lit (lamps are too bright), cooking already–cider and cranberry chutney tonight–and doing some more imitating. I’ve got one invasive for each progenitor, thank you for the indulgence of two posts on the Linky, and hope you enjoy!
Hello, I am in, I think. I am not enjoying wordpress with my new iPad. Thank you for the prompt.
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I wrote my poem a few weeks ago when I created the Poetics prompt and, as I felt well enough to get up today, I’ve posted and linked it up. Happy Thanksgiving to all our American friends!
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Such an interesting and hard prompt. Took some work but finally I managed to write something about a plant that to me have looked utterly dangerous since the first time I laid eyes on them.
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Good Morning all- Posting this morning, and then off to the dentist. If I am up to it, I will be back to read later, but if not, will catch up over the weekend. I hope you all have a happy Thanksgiving.
Happy Thanksgiving, Linda! I hope it goes well at the dentist.
Thank you Kim. Finally home. Now to rest.
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