
Shakespeare’s Macbeth declares “Is this a dagger which I see before me, The handle toward my hand? Come, let me clutch thee! I have thee not, and yet I see thee still.” Illustration by Anna and Elena Balbusso
Glad to have you here, poets, as tonight we’ll be meeting the bar with poetic apostrophe.
I have to admit, the very first thought that popped up in my mind when considering the word ‘apostrophe’ was not the punctuation mark denoting possession or truncating two words. or even its use in literature as we’ll look at in a minute. My mind went to the Frank Zappa song, ‘Stinkfoot’ wherein someone asked Fido the dog about his conceptual continuity, and Fido replied, “It should be easy to see, the crux of the biscuit is the apostrophe.” No we don’t need to go mulling over that meaning for too long, having originated “in the dark, where all the fevers grow,” after all. However, in the context of tonight’s prompt, I am interested in the actual addressing of the pup—and of course in the pup’s answering back without his usual, “Arf! Arf!”
Poetic apostrophe is prevalent throughout our art form as it is simply an address to someone not present or to an abstract concept. Using apostrophe within a poem, or even a play or work of fiction, usually adds intrigue to the piece as the tone of voice will often change and become more dramatic. The speaker, or voice addressing the dead lover, say, or Love itself, for example, is not expecting a reply. But often, the reader senses an urgency, that if they are not spoken then the speaker will burst with longing, or joy, or love, or whatever overpowering emotion is driving this address out into the universe.
Here’s an example by Emily Dickinson:
Wild nights – Wild nights! (269)
Wild nights – Wild nights!
Were I with thee
Wild nights should be
Our luxury!
Futile – the winds –
To a Heart in port –
Done with the Compass –
Done with the Chart!
Rowing in Eden –
Ah – the Sea!
Might I but moor – tonight –
In thee!
Source: The Poems of Emily Dickinson Edited by R. W. Franklin (Harvard University Press, 1999)
As you might tell, there is often an element of personification that goes along with apostrophe, starting with giving the inanimate object ears to hear soliloquy. Some poems are full addresses to the object or absence, as we saw above, but many poems only interject with apostrophe, as if a spotlight were shown for a moment onto the speaker as his gazed shifted somewhere other than to whom he’d just been addressing. In the poem below, there are different ways to interpret it, but it seems to me as if the speaker is asking himself the hard questions, and turning to his answer at the very end with an eight-word statement that would finally release him.
Prayer
by Eric Pankey, from The Pear As One Example
What then but to give in,
Having felt the rush of the fugitive
Released as easily as a breath,
Having been burnished like beach glass,
Crushed and left whole,
Between spirit, between spear point
And forge? What then but rage
That when spent rages
As dogged surrender? Sweet,
Sweet anchor, how long
Your hook held.
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Tonight, I challenge you to a two-part prompt.
1. Write a poem using apostrophe, and you can name your object/recipient, or choose to be more cryptic than declaring, “O Love…” for instance.
2. This part is optional, or you can skip the first part and just share this portion. Write a response from the perspective of your object/recipient, which will in essence also use apostrophe.

Illustration by David Calcano
When you have completed your poem, link it up to the widget below. Then go and read your fellow poets’ neurotic conversations with themselves, and add to the cacophony of voices with your own comments. Feel free to make even more noise in the comment section here too. Okay, I’m done. Who wants a drink?
Hello Amaya- Thanks for hosting. I hope everyone is doing well this week. I’ll be posting in a few. Have a great weekend all!
Hi Linda, yeah have a great weekend. I’ll be pulling a few late nights in the pub catching up on this week’s readings. Yummy
Hello Amaya and everyone else… I hope I got this right… whenever in doubt I go to the library and aske the librarian for advice… and I just scribbled down what he mumbled to his books.
Seems like a wise move. 🙂
Great idea! My poem took a very dark turn and I’m not sure it’s finished, as is. But that’s the fun of these prompts: they lead you in unexpected ways, and are often potent medicine.
Good evening poets, one and all, and thank you, Amaya, for a challenging prompt. I had done only the first part and was considering posting it as it was, and then I decided to write the second part as a kind of echo, so now I have a duet with my subject! I hope it’s what you had in mind. 🙂
Sounds good, Kim. I don’t expect most of us to do or at least post both parts of the challenge, but we’ll see…
Hi Amaya. Thank you for hosting. I know how to usr apostrophe to indicate possession, but have no idea what a poetic apostrophe is? I will wait to read some of the contributions, hoping to better understand — then I will participate.
It’s easier than it seems. Just address someone/thing not there and without expecting a response. Walt Whitman’s O Captain! My Captain! is another well-known example of how this device is used.
I say thank you for this explanation too as I wasn’t sure what to do – where to go. Something coming to mind. Sincerely hope I can come up with something.
Hello Amaya and All. I appreciate the lesson on the apostrophe and never thought of the pleas and/or responses as having them. Off I go to try to do the prompt justice…
Thanks for taking it on, Lisa!
I am no sure if I got this right. It seems to be a dramatic and theatric style of writing. Oh well. It mine is, it is. If it ain’t it ain’t. Interesting prompt.
I love it when forms that I know have names. I’ve been taking stabs at this all day, but I think I’m not in a good headspace right now to send out words to a poetic something that may or may not be listening. We’ll see. Every time I say “I can’t write this one” out it comes. I’m enjoying everyone’s work, and I think the #mood right now is scotch, neat.
OK, saying I couldn’t do it worked. I did it.
👌
Thanks for hosting, Amaya! I added one somewhat similar to the Emily Dickinson example you provided.
What is this full
Schedule full
Of hectic dissollution
I see before Me?!
Do you lead me on
Into the day
Preventing me from
Playng on this Bar?
Or do you bar me
from this play?
I do not know,
Lead on blood
HSFOD (hectic schedule full of dissolution,)
Will I Meet or
overcome thee so
I can play with Amaya and her
prompting
Prompitness?
TBH, IDK.
😉
Love the prompt, want to play, love you amaya, Love y’all.
Maybe I can scratch sumpin out tonight.
This is all new for me. So, I gather that in poetry, the apostrophe is more in the form than in the actual mark.? This is an interesting concept. I loved the prompt.
This prompt made me think. (K)
What a refreshing invitation Amaya, many thanks for this.
What an interesting prompt – and certainly new to me! I’m off to have a go at it, or maybe find something I wrote a while ago to see if it fits the bill… hmmm…
Well, i had a go!
https://freyawrites.com/2019/12/06/do-you-have-the-answer-dverse-mtb/
Just to let you know, Freya, I’ve added your link to the Mr Linky list of all other participants. Are you familiar with this? If you just link to your poem in comments, others likely won’t see it, as we go off the Mr Linky, which is the little green icon above where it says “25 links You’re next!” If you click on that you’ll see a well-formatted list of everyone’s links to their poems. Thanks for participating!
Thank you for the inspiration and the learning. 👍🏽
So sorry I’m late to the party! I have a new computer and am having trouble putting in the exact, precise URL to my poem….so I had to put in my general address. It’ll take you there….but next week when I post a new poem, it’ll take you there instead. SIGH. Hopefully, I’ll get it figured out by then! Anyway, I enjoyed the prompt and thanks for hosting!
Sorry I had WP gremlins so missed the Mr Linky deadline
http://aroused.blog/2019/12/10/inconvenient-intrusion