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Hello, Frank Hubeny here and welcome to dVerse’s Meeting the Bar. The challenge today is to use the dramatic literary effect of soliloquy in a poem.
Characters in a drama engage in soliloquies when they say something to themselves, perhaps rationalizing out-loud what they plan to do that the other actors in the play can’t hear or hear well. The audience, however, hears them and that helps the audience understand better what is going on. It is also called direct address to the audience.
A famous soliloquy is when Hamlet begins speaking “to be or not to be” off to the side. Only the audience can clearly hear what he is saying. In this way, Shakespeare gives the audience inside information.
Poems in general might be considered soliloquies to the reader of the poet’s thoughts. For this prompt one may want to add a dramatic context perhaps as a brief paragraph explaining the scene and then let the poem express one character’s perspective on that context, or perhaps even more than one character’s perspective on the context with multiple soliloquies.
Or, write a poem where you talk to yourself weighing different alternatives or where you try to find an explanation for something that doesn’t make sense or where you simply express how you feel about something. You are saying this mainly to yourself like an entry in a journal or diary. It is you whom you have to convince.
Here is how to participate:
Write a poem using soliloquy in some way. It may even be a poem you now see could be interpreted as a soliloquy. Post it to your blog. Copy the link to your blog post. Paste the link into the Mister Linky below with your name. Don’t forget to also link back in your blog post to this page so others can find how they may participate.
Then sit back (the hard part’s over) and read what others have written for this prompt. Also, if you like, you may leave a comment below.
The Mister Linky will be open for the next 48 hours.
Frank Hubeny said:
The pub is open! Welcome all!
kim881 said:
Good evening Frank and poets ,one and all. This s going to be interesting, with us all talking to ourselves!
Frank Hubeny said:
Yes, it could be interesting, however, I realize I do a lot of it, although not usually out loud.
msjadeli said:
Hello Frank and All. The temp is 19F this afternoon. The snow is meandering lazily. The cats are curled to stay warm again. Frank, your prompt is challenging as I tend to be long-winded especially with mental rambles 😉 I’ll give it my best shot. A cup of hot cocoa please!
Frank Hubeny said:
Here’s the cocoa! My mental ramblings (at least silently) go on and on.
msjadeli said:
Thank you so much. Hot cocoa is the perfect hand warmer.
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Hello Frank, and thank you for hosting. This is in an interesting prompt. I am going to give this some thought.
Frank Hubeny said:
Great! Just the thinking about it could be turned into a soliloquy.
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Haha! Yes, it could.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello all, I came home late tonight… we went to a concert with a fantastic pianist playing Tchaikovsky’s first piano concert.
You all know the piece I think, but to hear it with Beatrice Rana was something extra. I will come back and read later, it is too late for me and I need to sleep.
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks for stopping by, Bjorn! It is good to hear well-performed music and share that enjoyment with the others listening.
lillian said:
Thanks for hosting, Frank! We are in San Diego, enjoying sunshine and balmy temperatures for the months of January and February, as folks at home in Boston are expecting wind chills below zero.
Well….I for one find myself talking to myself more these days….and afterall, isn’t that what writing in a journal is really all about? 🙂
I shall enjoy reading, mainly in the morning over my coffee while looking out our wall to ceiling windows in our apartment rental…they overlook a wonderful canyon filled with eucalyptus trees and greenery! 🙂
Frank Hubeny said:
I imagine it is beautiful in San Diego. I have only been there once. Long ago. Writing in a journal is like a soliloquy. I sometimes think in dreaming comes answers to the questions posed while we are awake.
Beverly Crawford said:
Your challenge sent me on a nostalgic journey, Frank. When I was 11 or 12, I inherited a series of westerns written by Zane Grey from a boy cousin. I spent one summer reading every single one. Grey was fond of letting his heroes soliloquize, and it was in those books I first encountered the word. Thanks for the trip, Frank!
Frank Hubeny said:
I am glad it reminded you of those. Now that you mention it that is also how I view westerns. The heroes are alone in all that open space and one hears their concerns in their soliloquies.
Xan said:
Ah. At last an excuse for all the talking to myself that I do. I’m just writing soliloquies! Yeah that’s it!
Frank Hubeny said:
I seem to be writing them all the time without realizing it as well.
Vaccinius said:
Ai will have to make the arrest, Frank. 🏳️🌈 Firstly, Hamlet did not address the audience by the famous words “to be, or not to be; …” He spoke to Ophelia. Secondly, that video is a falsum, regarding performance of the play. Putting up a dagger, stating those words, is contrary to the will of Shakespeare. In the play, Hamlets words, here, is his answer to the question initiating Scene 1 in Act 3, being King Claudius asking,
“And can you by no drift of circumstance
Get from him why he puts on this confusion,
Grating so harshly all his days of quiet
With turbulent and dangerous lunacy?”
King Claudius is speaking of Hamlet.
🎭 What would be what you call “Soliloquy” is the end of Scene 1.
Vaccinius said:
Sorry; “is the end of Act 1” it should be.
Frank Hubeny said:
Good point. I think you know the play better than I do. It may well not be a soliloquy in the dramatic sense. Thanks for pointing that out. It gives me something to think about and it helps me look at it in a different way.
I usually think of those lines without placing them in context.
Vaccinius said:
Any thought is in context, and nevertheless, the eminence of the thought might be profound, aI would say. “What made you come up with that,” one says, and so, one will agree with me. 😊
Frank Hubeny said:
Thank you, Vaccinius!
pvcann said:
Thank you Frank for the invitation to soliloquise, enjoyed it very much.
Frank Hubeny said:
Thank you for participating, Paul. Your soliloquy provided a needed warning when you mentioned speaking someone else’s truth against oneself. That is something to avoid doing.
pvcann said:
Yes, the pressure of going with the flow is dangerous indeed.
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