Lists
One of my favorite techniques to write poetry is the use of lists. I find it amazing how you can create meaning from different parts simply listed after each other.
For example, if you just write:
an apple
a pear
and flowers
my dear
the reader (me) draws up something quite other than just a simple shopping list simply by adding the last line. To me, it’s a little bit like finding constellations from a random set of stars.
I often start my poetry writing random lists and then try to connect them, both using technique of sounds (for instance alliteration) or rhymes (as in pear and dear above).
Often I have a general thought about what the poem should be about. It can, for instance, be used when writing a love poem, like in my latest Quadrille.
Cloudscape
You are the wind-kiss, my goosebumps
the stirrer of silver; moon-spilled in water.
You are the surf-sound, the sand,
and the sage-scent at dusk
You are the river and grass,
the thunderheads lazily racing over the plains.
You are my water, my solitude thirst.
Which is in the essence of the many ways I could describe love in terms of nature-lyrics. I have tried to use both my senses, visuals, scents and sounds. There are some alliteration and repetitions, but at its core, it’s just a simple list.
I also recommend you to use contrasts and even opposites. It often makes the list even more interesting if you let the eye move between opposites.
Don’t say it’s lukewarm when you’re moving between fire and ice.
Remember that the list can be only a part of your poem, or you might combine several lists.
We have many poets at the bar using lists. Why not check out some of Glenn’s poetry for instance.
So be creative, use any type of lists. I recommend writing the first list freely, and then write your poem from that first list. Let it grow, and be inspired by rhymes and metaphors.
When you are done, link up below, read and comment on what others might have written.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Good evening from Sweden almost in lockdown … it’s so nice to be able to go to the bar without leaving my home.
I am working from home, and will probably do so for a while. It’s a bit boring actually.
msjadeli said:
Hello Bjorn and All. “Almost in lockdown” sounds like not much fun. Michigan governor has declared some kind of state of emergency, including stopping students from attending any in-person classes. I like your prompt and will try to do it justice. If you’re pouring at the pub tonight, I’ll take a tall Magners please!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I need to stay a bit away from the bar… but i will wash my hands for 30 seconds before pouring a Manger.
msjadeli said:
Darn that’s too bad about the bar. Cheers on the Magners (thanks for washing hands first.)
Frank Hubeny said:
It is good that we can meet even in lock down. I hadn’t thought of lists as a source of motivation for a poem before.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It is really one of my favorite starting points…
rugby843 said:
Noticed beer was second on the list😃
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Then it’s beer for you
rugby843 said:
Actually I only drank beer on hot summer days☺️
Christine Bolton said:
That was a beautiful quadrille ❤️
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Thank you.. and it’s a list
Christine Bolton said:
That was a great idea. I sometimes jot down thoughts that enter my head but I hadn’t thought of a list. Thanks! ☺️
Christine Bolton said:
Don’t get too bored Bjorn, we are at the end of your fingertips! Living in the ‘senior’ state of Florida we are already in a declared state of emergency because of the average age and the number of cases so far. We are hunkering down with plenty of supplies as if a hurricane was heading this way! Stay safe everyone 🙂👍
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha… I am staying at home and working. But I go and do my shopping if needed.
Beverly Crawford said:
Schools closed, basketball tournaments cancelled, non-necessary gatherings are asked to be cancelled, and we’re to sanitize everything that isn’t moving! Scary times!
Christine Bolton said:
Not forgetting having to watch your investments/savings biting the dust. Who could have imagined this just a few weeks ago? It is scary Beverly.
Jane Dougherty said:
Hmm, pear and dear don’t actually rhyme. You’d have to make it a bilingual poem and rhyme pear with ma chère instead 🙂
I hate lists. This is going to be a tough prompt…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. you start with a list and then wrap some other words around it.
Xan said:
okay, got it: list, poem, post, link, read. (wait I forgot to order my drink!)
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Here is something cold for you
Ali Grimshaw said:
Bjorn, thanks for the inspiration. I shared mine but now that I have read some of what others have shared I want to give it another go. This is the perfect antidote to the news.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
We need antidotes these days.
pvcann said:
I’m on a theme, don’t come round, the sharps are out. enjoyed playing with this, thank you Bjorn.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It’s really fun to play with
Bekkie Sanchez said:
This is so cool because it came at a time when another poem of mine was written from a list of dream meanings. I often write poetry this way and it is fun! If writing for an image, looking up things in the image can give you lists to write with too. I linked up on the 14th but will be around to read even if it’s next week. Funny you mentioned apples, Bjorn. Lol!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Lists shall always contain apples.