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Hello poets….hope you are all safe and well in your part of world.
After stumbling upon this quote I knew this was the direction our poetic prompt would take today.
As we find ourselves trying to cope and navigate through these extremely stressful and unprecedented times, it may seem as though we are watching pieces of our normal life breaking away. Unsettling and unfamiliar? Oh yes….BUT, consider for a moment, that those pieces could also be barriers that have prevented us from experiencing the peaceful and profound truth, the true purpose of life…as difficult as it has been to watch those pieces fall at our feet.
“Barn’s burnt down, now I can see the moon.”
Mizuta Masahide
Enlightening words from Masahide, 17th Century samurai, poet , mentored by Matsuo Basho. In Zen poetry, the moon often symbolizes the truth or ultimate awareness. The burning barn could be the hardship or catastrophic loss we must experience in order for our sky to clear, our minds to clear, creating a new view. Perhaps then and only then, will we be awakened.
What do you see? Something you haven’t before? Something you’ve forgotten? New perspectives, priorities or something much deeper. A revelation in thought? What does the moon represent to you in Masahide’s terse, epiphanous message? What does your burning barn look like? Have you experienced your own personal insight or enlightenment as the world deals with this ongoing crisis? Ponder these questions and pen us a poem.
This is Mish bringing you today’s Poetics.
I wish you love, light and hope.
Good evening all! Thanks for hosting and for a lovely prompt, Mish. I hope everyone is holding up and that poetry is keeping us all sane.
Welcome to Poetics! Serving up some chamomile tea and ginger snaps. Why ginger snaps? I have no idea. I think our supply of snacks is low behind the bar. Just happy to have you join in. 🙂
Mmm, chamomile tea and ginger snaps! I’m holding my mug and plate ready. ;:)
Relax and enjoy, Kim!
Hi Kim! Poetry is one thing we still have. Amen.
Hi Mish- Thanks for hosting. A fitting prompt, as I have been doing a lot of thinking about the situation we find ourselves in. I’ll be posting soon.
Hi Linda….the idea was one of those I couldn’t shake. Looking forward to your poem. 🙂
My first escape into poetry since all this began…. I have to say it feels good. THANK YOU to all of you for continuing your passion to write through these troubling and terrifying times. You inspire me.
Hello… we have an early opening tonight… I know what to write.
Hello Bjorn ……nice to see you, sir.
Early opening?
Hello Mish and All — Chamomile and ginger snaps sound perfect right now, yes, please. Still grey and cold here, the snow has melted. I’m about to go out and run a few errands. Some things have to be done. I love the prompt. Will plan on writing when I get back.
Lots to go around! Be careful out there. We are settling in now with our supplies….to see how long we can last.
🙂 Thanks, Mish. The streets were quiet.
Wonderful idea, Mish! I’m looking forward to reading what everyone comes up with.
Thank you! Me too. 🙂
I’m going to ponder, but in the meantime, tea and gingersnaps sound perfect. Thank you, Mish!
Ponder away Merril…I know your muse is mighty. Tea and gingersnaps for the road! 🙂
This prompt fits so well the poem I wrote on Sunday, so I linked it. Will work on a purpose-written one over the next little while. Thank you, Mish, for a thoughtful prompt.
You are very welcome! So glad it aligns with your recent writing and can’t wait to read more. 🙂
What an inspired prompt. My mind been swirling like crazy lately. Will ponder and see what I can write.
Hi Redcat…thanks for joining in. I can relate to a swirling mind….though sometimes the best state of mind for poetry!
Thanks for coming up with inspiring ideas. 🙂
I think I’m stuck in looking on with a sort of stunned feeling. Hopefully I can start to channel that into writing.
Ok, got an elegy up that I have been working on which seems to fit the prompt.
Sadly, it sounds appropriate. Thanks for joining in, Jedediah. Will be by soon to read. 🙂
Excellent prompt!!
Hello Dwight…thanks so much. 🙂
Thanks for hosting and for the great starting concept! I just couldn’t keep it a short one, but it was kind of therapeutic to write this at least. Should have written it when not so tired maybe, but thank deities it’s not so serious. 🙂 Hope you all are well and safe!
Thanks, anthony…glad it was a therapeutic outlet. I was hoping it would have that effect. Back on the poetry trail today to read. WIll be by soon. 🙂
What an inspiring prompt, thanks Mish!
Thank you, Kate. 🙂
Thanks for hosting, Mish. I like the optimism in the quote from Masahide.
Hey Frank! Yes, I think we all need to find something good to pull out of this mess. Thanks for joining in. 🙂
Hello. I love the prompt. Thank you for it. I managed something in response but will have to return later to read and comment.
Looking forward to the read….:)
This seems like a ray of sunshine in boredom! I can’t wait to read people’s thoughts on this! Maybe I’ll get inspired to write something of my own! Thank you for the prompt.
And you did! Coming around to read it soon. Thank you! 🙂
Thank you for the prompt, Mish!
Hey Mish! The prompt is beautiful I liked musing over the quote and trying to find a silver lining. I’ve submitted my poem, hope you’d enjoy it. Thanks for hosting and stay safe out there 🙂
Jay
Thanks, Jay. So glad you enjoyed the prompt. Have my tea in hand and back out there to read and comment. 🙂
Thank you for this beautiful prompt Mish and I hope you are safe and well. I’ve linked a tanka prose and will swing by later to read xxx
Sounds great! I will be by soon too. 🙂
A thoughtful invitation for the very moment we are in, thank you for this Mish.
Good Morning, Poets! Sorry for the late entry, Mish; your excellent prompt took some contemplation. Not to mention I’m still catching my breath after a week of remote teaching! 🙂