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Good evening, and welcome to dVerse, the Poets’ Pub. It’s Sarah here, posting from the south-west corner of England. Come on in, share a drink and some poems.
Lately, I’ve been thinking about rain. If you look at a map of England, I live just at the top of that south-west peninsular, a long finger out into the Atlantic. It rains a lot here. We have lush green grass, flower-filled hedgerows, and contented cows that deliver clotted cream – cream you can stand a spoon up in.
I don’t usually think about rain very much at all. It’s just part of the background. If it’s not raining today, it probably will be tomorrow, and definitely will be next week. However, over the last few weeks we’ve had glorious sunshine, and hardly any rain at all. Just to put this in perspective, the official definition of a drought in the UK is more than 15 consecutive days without rain.
Let’s just pause for my desert dwelling friends to recover a little.
I get a lot of rain, and for me it’s not particularly exciting, but it is an essential part of my local landscape. For you, rain may mean something very different. I’ve never waited for the monsoon rains to start. I’ve never watched a desert transform overnight. My rain brings mud, not slippery pavements, it rattles on leaves, not the ocean.
Listen to the rain in Seamus Heaney’s poem. He’s from Ireland – he knows rain intimately!
The Rainstick
Upend the rainstick and what happens next
Is a music that you never would have known
To listen for. In a cactus stalk
Downpour, sluice-rush, spillage and backwash
Come flowing through. You stand there like a pipe
Being played by water, you shake it again lightly
And diminuendo runs through all its scales
Like a gutter stopping trickling. And now here comes
A sprinkle of drops out of the freshened leaves,
Then subtle little wets off grass and daisies;
Then glitter-drizzle, almost-breaths of air.
Upend the stick again. What happens next
Is undiminished for having happened once.
Twice, ten, a thousand times before.
Who cares if the music that transpires
Is the fall of grit or dry seeds through a cactus?
You are like a rich man entering heaven
Through the ear of a shower. Listen now again.
and here’s Mary Oliver:
Last Night the Rain Spoke To Me
Last night
the rain
spoke to me
slowly, saying,what joy
to come falling
out of the brisk cloud,
to be happy againin a new way
on the earth!
That’s what it said
as it dropped,smelling of iron,
and vanished
like a dream of the ocean
into the branchesand the grass below.
Then it was over.
The sky cleared.
I was standingunder a tree.
The tree was a tree
with happy leaves,
and I was myself,and there were stars in the sky
that were also themselves
at the moment,
at which momentmy right hand
was holding my left hand
which was holding the tree
which was filled with starsand the soft rain—
imagine! imagine!
the wild and wondrous journeys
still to be ours.
Tonight, I want you to give me a rainy poem. Give me your rain – the city rain, the desert rain, the rain that falls in the forest. Give me your memories of rain – kissing rain-wet lips, rain on a bus window. Give me drizzle, mizzle, a softdaythankgod – give me a raging storm – give me sad rain, or happy rain, or the rain that comes as a relief.
Once you’ve written your poem, you know what to do:
- Add a link back to dVerse – it helps us grow, which brings in more poets and more readers.
- Link your poem up to Mr Linky
- Take a tour of the dVerse poets, though you might need an umbrella with you this time!
- Enjoy some wonderful words.
Thanks for hosting, Sarah! And hello dVerse folks! One of my favorite songs of all time, Barbara Streisand singing Don’t Rain on My Parade from Funny Girl. But you all can rain all over the pub today 🙂 I shall post and be reading this afternoon and evening.
Stay safe everyone. And may there be a bridge over troubled waters….justice….action and justice from the thousands of voices raised in peaceful protest….and an end to the violence by the few.
Some healing rain of kindness would be good all over, but especially for you tonight. Terrible scenes, I hope everyone is safe. It almost seems wrong to be doing something as trivial as writing poems, but that’s what we do.
Not trivial at all, Sarah. Words, getting out feelings, expressing our views….all so very important that we remain sane and ACT in November.
Good evening, Sarah, and good evening dVerse poets. Thank you for this lovely rain prompt, Sarah. We’re expecting showers tomorrow, although it doesn’t feel like it right now. The sun is shining at gone eight in the evening, the plants are thriving, and it’s peaceful. Hard to believe that terrible things are happening across the Atlantic. I think everyone probably needs a stiff drink.
You’ve got that right, Kim. It was frightening to have Mr. Trump tell people maybe drinking bleach would clear your lungs….it is despicable to see him have military clear peaceful demonstrators before curfew, using gas, shields, horses, and pepper spray solely for the reason of posing in front of a church holding a bible. If this doesn’t point out the man is deranged, narcissistic, and dangerous, I don’t know what does. I apologize to the world for having this person as our president. I did not vote for him and sincerely hope he is voted out in November.
So do I, Lill.
I’m not religious, but I get the impression that if Jesus came back to earth, Trump wouldn’t particularly want to hang out with Him, and He would definitely not want to hang out with Trump. He is putting American lives at risk at every turn. I really hope this violence is a means to making the world a better place, but it’s hard to see it at the moment.
I’ve just realised I haven’t officially welcomed everybody yet, but here you are, making yourselves at home – how lovely to see you here! I know there is some terrible stuff happening out there, but I hope people will feel safe enough to write what they need to write tonight, whether it’s scared, or angry, or hopeful, or downright silly.
I will make sure there is a little umbrella in every drink. Even the beer.
I would LOVE a cold glass of chardonnay, please! 🙂
Just to remind you, it comes with an umbrella in it.
🙂
Hello… when thinking of rain I immediately thought about how it was living without rain… I do love some rain every now and then… but Stockholm is quite different from where I grew up on the west coast of Sweden…
Though don’t the Swedes say there’s no such thing as bad weather, only the wrong clothing?
Wonderful. Where would UK poetry be without rain…
I could have picked a hundred examples! We have to make the most of it, I guess.
Oh definitely! We have plenty of examples to chose from. ☔
Hi Sarah – a refreshing prompt and I liked your choice of poems (I love the sound of rain sticks) – glad to have found a way of summoning the rain into a poem
Hello Sarah and All. West MI is intimately connected with rain and all other forms of water. Should be a fun one to write. It fell enough yesterday to water flowers without decimating them, and the newly transplanted tomato plants were happy for a drink. I’m sipping Fresca for a change but heating up a cuppajoe in a minute here.
Nice to see you here, good that you’ve brought your own drinks. Do you want an umbrella in that ‘joe?
An edible chocolate umbrella would be perfect, thank you.
Love it!
Wow, I live in southern California, so that definition of a “drought” where you live is rather shocking! I will think about rain and be back to post and to read others later.
It’s crazy, isn’t it? But we don’t store water well because, hey, we don’t need to!
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Hi Sarah and all- Sorry I had an appointment but sharing something now. It’s what came out of me, and now that it’s down on paper, Perhaps I can write a different poem about rain because I do love it. Although here in the desert at times it is sparse.
my goodness … 15 days literally blew my mind away … 5 years is just pretending, 13 year droughts here devastate our livestock and landscape!
A couple of my favorite things … rain and Mary Oliver! Growing up on a farm, rain was an important part of our life. I loved the rains! Somehow I couldn’t put it all in poem form, but lapsed into prose. Thank you for sending my thoughts to home and rainy days…a blessed relief from the chaos that prevails at present, and the president who persists in pouring fuel on the fire of discontent.
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Great prompt Sarah. I love the idea of listening to the rain stick. I have one that my grandchildren love to play with when they come to visit.
I’m struggling with writing this week, trying to make the words come through the dystopia in which we seem to be enmired . Rain’s a good metaphor, so maybe the prompt will help.
Hello Sarah, thank you for hosting. Monsoon has just arrived in India. I’m linking my first haibun I wrote, it was on last year’s monsoon. Maybe later I’ll link another poem 🙂
Jay
Fantastic, thank you!
You’re welcome. Take care.
Hey Sarah. I’ve linked another poem that I wrote in the morning today. 🙂
Have a great day ahead.
Jay
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Thanks Sarah–we had quite a storm here last night! (K)
Rog! – thank you for linking up to Mr Linky, but something has gone wrong. The link can’t be found, it tells me.
Sometimes you just have to wait for the words to come. I’ve been in such despair over our criminal regime that I’ve been finding it difficult to write. But this did finally bring something out. Thank you.
An invitation to refresh, rain, I chose justice as rain, thank you Sarah.
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I’m very sorry but I’ve accidentally put something from another prompt on your blenza thingy? How can I delete it?
I think I can do it by going into the innards of Mr Linky. I’ll have a go.
Thanks~
sorted it.
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Got a little poem up. All that came to me today, but I still like the prompt.
Sarah, the gorgeous poems made my day here in the high desert. I’ve written many about the lack of rain. But when it comes, it is glorious. Thank you. I myself am in a poetic desert drought. Maybe this will inspire, though I doubt I will have time to post it today. Victoria
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Thank you for the prompt, Sarah. Yesterday–well, I ended up telling my husband that I just couldn’t do yesterday.😀 So, I’ve just posted, and I’ll be back to read later or in the morning.
Hello all and thank you Sarah for hosting this lovely prompt! ‘Rainstick’ is among my favourite Heaney poems and it’s lovely to see it here. We are having some much needed rain too and I’ve just (belatedly) linked up a haiku. Hope you’re all keeping safe and well and I’ll swing by over the next couple of days to read xxx
As I get these in Finnish time and so have missed the deadline I still would like to do a few lines on this great prompt, and thank Sarah for hosting!
Quiet snowfall
Big fluffy flakes
Silence, muffled sound
All landscape
White snow calmly
Like feather
Falling down
I’m so sorry you missed the deadline. Thank you for sharing anyway. I love your poem of calm and quietness.
The Tuesday Poetics link stays up for 48 hours. It opens at 8pm in the UK – I’m not sure what the time difference is in Finland.
Well, from UK not that much actually!
That quiet snowfall is a great experience by the way, heavy snowflakes come down almost weigthless and it sucks all the sound from the air in a weird way..