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Welcome to DVerse, Poets! Frank Tassone here, your host for today’s Meet the Bar, where we take a deep dive into poetic craft.
Many of us have written haibun for Haibun Monday prompts. That means we have written haiku. Did you know that you could write multiple haiku that express a similar theme or montage of images? That haikai form is known as the haiku sequence.
Michael Dylan Welch, haiku poet, scholar and host of the National Haiku Writing Month Facebook Page, explains:
One of the haiku arts is creating sequences. They might be narrative, all on a theme, or have some particular creative constraint or central idea.
Here is a sequence of his:
After the Fall
First published in Mirrors 3:4, Autumn 1990, page 23.
winter wind—
a wisp of snow
curls into the well
spring wind—
a cherry blossom
circles the well
summer wind—
the sparrow’s reflection
flies from the well
autumn wind—
her forget-me-not
spirals into darkness
Adelaide B. Shaw’s sequence The Dust Bowl offers a longer treatment:
The Dust Bowl
early morning
before the wind rises
a glimpse of the sunfeeding chickens
the children tethered
to a roperolling dust
the horizon opens
and closeswind gusting—
another meal of potatoes
and gritpicked corn
beneath the dust
more dustclothes on the line
the first dry and dirty
before the lastsheriff’s auction
her good china divided
into sets of twoSunday service
prayers for rain
blown awaysweat down my face—
© 2012 Haiku Society of America
counting the roads
out of town
As you can see, the sequence features a title. This can refer to the unifying idea or framework in which the haiku appear. They can be as short as a pair, or as long as the poet chooses. Note, also, that the poets both juxtapose two images within each haiku. These images relate to the theme or unifying framework of the sequence, as the haiku themselves do, as well.
Now it’s your turn. Write a haiku sequence on any theme that you like. Use a minimum of three haiku.
You can write your haiku using the traditional 5-7-5 syllable count. Alternatively, you can write haiku that can be read aloud in a breath, using a short-long-short format, without a syllable count.
Remember to use a title and be sure there is a connection in the haiku within your sequence.
New to dVerse? Here’s what you do:
- Write a haiku sequence
- Post it on your personal site/blog
- Include a link back to dVerse in your post.
- Copy your link onto the Mr. Linky
- Remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
- Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work.
- Like and leave a comment below if you choose to do so.
Have fun!
Hello Frank! Thanks for hosting. Its been a while for me to write this poetry form so flexing my poetry muscle. Cheers!
Glad you could make it, Grace! Don’t forget to stretch out before you work out1 😉
Good evening all, and thank you Frank for the haiku sequence prompt, one of my favourite forms. I look forward to reading some amazing sequences from pub regulars and poets who have found the bar and wandered in for drink and a poem or two.
The weather is hotting up this weekend in the UK, my shielding is over on Saturday and I can go to the shop and to visit other people for the first time in five months. I have four washable masks ready to wear, but I’m not looking forward to it. I need some Dutch courage, so a gin and cucumber with mint would be most appreciated, Frank. I have no idea if that drink has a name, but I’ve had it in various places in the UK, even though I don’t usually drink. I blame my daughter, she’s the one who introduced me to it. 🙂
Happy to see you here, Kim! 🙂
My, my! What an inept bartender I turned out to be! Mea culpa, Kim! Here is your gin and cucumber with mint! In fact, have two–both on the house! 😉
Thank you Frank, and bottoms up! 🙂
Good afternoon, Poets! The Pub is open!
Hello Frank and All. There is so much going on these days, and being homebound 99% of the time means nature becomes that much more scrutinized. There were heavy showers two nights ago, which greened the grass a little, but not much more than a dent of what is needed. Glad for the haiku series prompt. If you’re pouring, I’ll have some fruity iced tea please.
One fruity iced tea, coming right up, Jade! Happy you can join us, once again!
Thank you and cheers!
Hello Frank – Thanks for hosting today.This is a fantastic prompt- I enjoy writing haiku. I hope everyone is doing well!
Glad you could make it, Linda! 🙂
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Hi Frank, thank you for hosting this lovely prompt! I’m linking a haiku sequence from earlier in the year and will swing by in a moment to read.
Great to see you here, Xenia! I’m looking forward to it! 🙂
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A nice cold white wine spritzer please! It’s a whole haiku month for me, so I cheated a bit and pulled a sequence from the 31 I wrote for July.
Coming right up, Xan! 😉
No worries; any haiku sequence in a storm! 🙂
hah! Also, a storm around here would be nice. Just a shade over 1 1/2″ of rain around here since late June. 😦 Maybe a couple of spritzers in I’ll do a rain dance.
Then I will keep those spritzer’s coming! 😉
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Hi dVerse poets! Thank you for hosting, Frank. This was quite a challenge for me. I think writing haiku are difficult.
Thanks for accepting the challenge, Merril!
Remember, a haijin can feel the haiku flowing through her!
Hmm. . .😏
I can’t resist riffing on Ben Kenobi’s instruction to Luke in Star Wars. 😉
Oh. . . I only see the first ones years ago. Sorry, I didn’t catch the reference. 😀
This is from the original, 1977 release. (They call it episode IV: a New Hope, but it will always be Star Wars to me!)
Luke practices using his light saber. A floating sphere zaps him with stun bolts. At that point, Ben says, “Remember, a Jedi can feel the Force, flowing through him.”
Hello! Great prompt! ✨ I love how short the Haiku is, but the sequence allows you to dig a bit deeper while still maintaining that concise meaning.
Happy you can join us! Yes, that is definitely a strength of the form.
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Great prompt Frank!
Can anyone tell me why it says this site is not secure at the top of the page?
Great to see you here, Dwight! 😀
As for site security? I have no idea.
Maybe Grace or one of the others may know!
Maybe. I didn’t see it on either my phone or my laptop. I’ll pass the word along.
Thanks Frank!
Thanks for a lovely prompt Frank. Really enjoyed this challenge
Much✏love
Thank you for participating in it, Gillena! 😀
That’s it for me for tonight, Poets. I’ll leave the pub open; just leave the place like you found it! 😆
See you back on the poetry trail tomorrow! Until then!
Hello! I would like to write a Haiku sequence. Have never tried a Haiku sequence before, so not sure if my attempt would be good enough. Look forward to the feedback of everyone here. Thanks so much.
Happy you joined us! 🙂
Thank you so much. 🙏
The pleasure is all mine! 🙂
Good morning, Poets! What’ll you have? 😉
Thanks Frank. Something cool, please. (K)
How about a red Sangria? Coming right up! 😉
sounds good!
Thanks for the prompt, Frank 🙂
My pleasure, Imelda! Thank you for joining!
I love this, Frank!! I never knew there was an official name for putting haiku together. Haiku Sequence is fabulous! So sorry I missed it!! I hope to catch it on Open Link Night!!
I’m happy you like it, Mother Wintermoon! I look forward to seeing your sequence on OLN! 😀
Thank you, Frank! 🙏
I created a page in my top menu with a link to my poetry blog if you’re interested in viewing. I loved to write what I call “chaiku.” I sill love it, despite it being my least commented upon posts. I have many more I never posted. 🌻
Thank you for the heads-up!
I’d love to see Haiku Sequence added to D’schedule.
Thank you! 😀
I didn’t realise sitting around a pub I would learn heaps just by reading and listening. I have been sitting in the corner just taking it all in.
I’m with you. I’ve learned so much more about poetry from hanging out in the pub! Glad you’re here! 🙂
🙂
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