
Welcome to DVerse, Poets! Frank Tassone here, your host for today’s Meet the Bar, where we experience the joy of poetic craft.
November is the beginning of winter in many traditional calendars. If you live in the northern hemisphere, look around outside, and it’s easy to see why. Many varieties of deciduous trees have lost their foliage. The days shorten; the temperatures drop. The harvests are over, and the Earth begins to slumber. This month is truly a testament to death.
What an auspicious time, then, to revisit the Jisei: the Japanese Death poem.
According to Wikipedia:
The death poem is a genre of poetry that developed in the literary traditions of East Asian cultures—most prominently in Japan as well as certain periods of Chinese history and Joseon Korea. They tend to offer a reflection on death—both in general and concerning the imminent death of the author—that is often coupled with a meaningful observation on life. The practice of writing a death poem has its origins in Zen Buddhism. It is a concept or worldview derived from the Buddhist teaching of the three marks of existence (三法印, sanbōin), specifically that the material world is transient and impermanent (無常, mujō), that attachment to it causes suffering (苦, ku), and ultimately all reality is an emptiness or absence of self-nature (空, kū). These poems became associated with the literate, spiritual, and ruling segments of society, as they were customarily composed by a poet, warrior, nobleman, or Buddhist monk.
Jisei were often written in waka (tanka) or haiku, but death poems are not restricted to those forms. What is essential is the expression of both imminent death and the significance of life in the face of it. In this sense, Jisei is the poetry of both memorial and celebration.
Consider some of these exemplars of the genre:
Falling ill on a journey
(Basho)
my dreams go wandering
over withered fields
Oh young folk —
(Haikuin)
if you fear death,
die now!
Having died once
you won’t die again.
Autumn wind of eve,
(Hôjô Ujimasa)
blow away the clouds that mass
over the moon’s pure light
and the mists that cloud our mind,
do thou sweep away as well.
Now we disappear,
well, what must we think of it?
From the sky we came.
Now we may go back again.
That’s at least one point of view
Let us write our own Jisei. Write a haikai (haiku, senryu, tanka, kyoka, Gogyohka) or haikai-esque poem that reflects on imminent death—and the significance of life in light of it. If you are going for the haikai-esque, keep the lines brief (no more than 10) and use the aesthetics of haikai (simplicity, heartfulness, and pathos). If you feel daring, you can attempt the gembun—a one-sentence haibun, but otherwise, keep away from long forms.
New to dVerse? Here’s what you do:
- Write a Jisei
- Post it on your personal site/blog
- Include a link back to dVerse in your post.
- Copy your link onto the Mr. Linky
- Remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
- Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work.
- Like and leave a comment below if you choose to do so.
Have fun!
Thanks for hosting, Frank. And what a challenging prompt!
Hello to all dVerse folks….bright sunshine today in Boston…a bit nippy but then we are coming up on winter. Looking forward to reading some very interesting posts to this prompt!
Thanks, liliian! Great to see you here. What’ll you have? 😉
Hello… I remember that we had this before… but I had not realized that it was that long ago. I remember that there were many great entries…. so hope to read many this time as well.
I hope for the same! Thanks, Bjorn!
Very interesting prompt Frank, thank you for hosting and presenting it. Here in Seattle winter begins on December 21st this year, the Winter Solstice. November certainly feels like Winter though.
It has been blustery this week in New York, too! Glad you made it here, Rob! 🙂
Not certain I adhered precisely to the prompt, but I hope I did…
Welcome, Everyone! The pub is open! 🙂
Hello Frank and All. Very chilly here but sunshine peeking through every so often. Death is something that is never far away these days, hovering and ready to strike it seems. Maybe it’s always been that way but I never noticed until now. Guzzling hot coffee is good company today. Wishing you all a pleasant weekend.
One cup of hot joe, coming right up! Glad you stepped in from the cold, Jade! 😉
Thanks for the top up, Frank, and glad to be here. Cheers!
Good evening all, and thank you Frank for hosting and for a prompt that allowed me to find inspiration in the garden.
Happy to help, Kim! Great to see you!
I just opened my poetry site, and in one night, I received 25 trash comments, full of links snd garbage. They were held for my approval, so they never got posted — but it seems like since I recently upgraded to the new WordPresss platform, I am inundated with garbage. Anyone else having that problem?
I haven’t had that happen recently that I’ve noticed. But I remember once a year or two again when I got tons of spammer posts in one day.
YES, Rob. I’m flooded with spam in my spam folder. It doesn’t get out into the blog but I can only delete them 20 at a time, and sometimes there are hundreds! Thanks, WP for new and improved 😦
Hi Frank and All. An interesting prompt. I’m still pondering. We had a very cold start to the morning. Then the sun came out, but now it’s cloudy and dreary looking.
Great to see you, Merril! 🙂
Thank you. It is a very woot! Death Poems! day here. Thanks for the prompt. I am getting so enamored of these Japanese forms.
Glad you could join us!
For once I read and wrote to the prompt on the same day (even the same week tends to be a stretch for me 🙂 ).
Hi Frank and everyone – a slighlty different aesthetic for us in the southern hemisphere – as the world turns to summer – but a terrific prompt.
Thanks, Peter! Glad to see you! What’ll you have? 😉
Thanks for this great prompt and introducing me to a new verse form, Frank.
Happy you could join in, Ingrid! 😀
I’m a little green and not sure I followed instructions (via email) correctly to share my poem. I wrote one on my blog, included a link to dVerse, but where do I find Mr. Linky (don’t laugh) and the checkbox mentioned?
I am in and I thank you for the prompt. I will do my best to read and comment as well, I look forward to the responses to this interesting MTB challenge.
Frank, so good to see you hosting! Death poems are kinda my thing. I keep saying I won’t skip the prompt, but this time I swear I won’t skip the prompt.
My brain was too tired to read or write last night. I’ve added mine, and I will catch with reading over the weekend. 😀
This is my entry: https://peterbouchier.wordpress.com/english-essays-and-poems-2/ma/
Thank you Frank, a sobering challenge.
Hello All- Joining in this morning. And I am on the reading trail. 🙂
My take on a jisei 🙂 https://relaxitsallwrite.wordpress.com/2020/11/20/jisei-japanese-death-poem/
I can tell dVerse is going to keep me on my toes. Thank you for making me think and dig deep inside.