Welcome Poets!
Hoping you are safe and healthy as many of us continue to navigate through these tumultuous times. Thank goodness for this kind, supportive and diverse community we call dVerse. The fireplace is crackling so pull up a cozy chair. I brought treats.
You may be familiar with “object poems” where an inanimate item is the subject of the poem. These poems can center around an every day object, such as a door, a jar, a spoon or something of sentimental value. The object is often brought to life using vivid, detailed descriptions of it’s physical appearance and functions.
Here is an example:
A NAVAJO BLANKET / May Swenson (1919–1989)
Eye-dazzlers the Indians weave. Three colors
are paths that pull you in, and pin you
to the maze. Brightness makes your eyes jump,
surveying the geometric field. Alight, and enter
any of the gates—of Blue, of Red, of Black.
Be calmed and hooded, a hawk brought down,
glad to fasten to the forearm of a Chief.You can sleep at the center,
attended by Sun that never fades, by Moon
that cools. Then, slipping free of zigzag and hypnotic diamond, find your way out
by the spirit trail, a faint Green thread that
secretly crosses the border, where your mind
is rinsed and returned to you like a white cup.
Ultimately, object poems will also create a different perspective of the subject, exposing a deeper representation to the reader. This is where I’d like us to venture poetically today. Let’s focus more on the abstract……SO much so that I’d like you to title or begin your poem with “ THIS IS NOT A _________”
Choose an object from your home or outdoors. Look past the obvious characteristics and uses of this object. Spare us the details. Instead, take us to the connection that it has made with you or what it represents.
What does this object mean? Is their a sentimental attachment? What memories does it hold? (they might not be good ones). How has it’s existence effected you or your life? Does it signify a certain era, event, relationship or transition? What emotion(s) does the object evoke? Is it a symbol of joy, failure, fear, success, childhood, grief, love….? Is there a story? What is this object (to you!) beyond what we see visually.
You may want to add a photo of the object with your poem. Remember to begin with “This is not a ______”
Oh…and by the way. This is not a prompt. It is me reaching out to you, my poetry friends…across miles, borders and oceans. It is a second mug of tea re-heated and peaceful moments in a dark corner. It is hope for inspiration and anticipation for your brilliant words.
Here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the prompt and post it to your blog.
- Click on Mr. Linky and enter your name and direct url to your poem.
- Add a link to dVerse on your blog so others can find us too.
- Visit the work of fellow poets to read and comment.
- Pop into the pub to say hello.
- Have fun!
Wow, I’m so glad to be here before everyone!! haha I never thought I’d get a chance due to different time zones and all.. I love the prompt, thank you Mish! Enjoy your cuppa, I’ll get back to you with my ‘not a poem’ but.. I’m gonna find out what.. hehe
Hello this published ahead of time… I will unpublish and reschedule for later… but you will have a good time to write this time 🙂
lol BR, but I just finished writing a piece, can I link it up?
Go ahead and to it… It seems like we will have to live with an early go live time 🙂
YAY! thanks so much 🙂
Oh NO!!! I didn’t see a a.m. vs. p.m option on the scheduling and I wondered if something had changed. SO sorry for the mix up.
Hello early bird…I guess this worked well for you! Sorry for the mix up.
Yes! it sure did, Mish. It’s alright, I wouldn’t mind some more mix-ups in the future too…hehe
We went live 12 hours early today… this was a small mistake and the Bartender is still asleep 🙂 Let us see what might happen throughout the day.
The bartender didn’t see this mistake until recently. 😦 So sorry for the mix up!
OK, I think I’ve got it.
This is not a prompt.
A spark to rouse the imagination
Suddenly in consternation
I worry that I’ve lost my way
Onward! Into the fray!
😉
Onward indeed!
This early publication has pushed me to publish rather promptly – do I link up yet or wait for the re-draft
Hi Laura, glad you went ahead and linked up. A glitch in scheduling.
Have a piece ready published from phone. Will add it ti mr linky when i ger home this evening via th laptop .
Hi,
I’ve put up a little poem about my ring….
Hello there…looking forward to reading your poem. 🙂
Good, um [checks clock] morning, poets! We’re twelve hours ahead for some reason! Gives me something to do while [squints outside] the sun comes up! (Posts usually show up about 4p ’round here)
Welcome Xan. Your clock was right, I was wrong. Thanks for joining in. 🙂
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It is nice to get an earlier prompt for a change! Breaks up the routine! Great prompt. I will do one this morning and put it up!
Yes, I also appreciate getting the prompt earlier than usual, especially because they usually get posted late at night in Jerusalem. This time, I had more time to sit and think about it during the day 🙂
Thank you!
David
I guess it will be night somewhere no matter what time it gets posted!
Hi Ben..I’m happy it worked out for you!
Thanks Dwight! 🙂
I do love writing about objects, thank you Mish.
Great! Will be by soon to read. Thanks for joining in. 🙂
🙂
A great challenge. I’ve reprised a poem in the style of Wallace Stevens that seems to fit the challenge very well, as well as presenting a sort of walk through history. Looking forward to the work of my fellow poets in what will hopefulleybe a better year!
Sounds wonderful, Bev. Will be by soon. This year will definitely be better!!
Hi Mish and All- A fabulous prompt!
Thanks so much, Linda. 🙂
Drive-by poeming for now, on a busy day. Thanks for the inspiration, Mish! 🙂
De, I’m so sorry for my early publish bumping your Quadrille prompt. MY mistake!!
(See comment below. All good, and glad.) 🙂
I’m here and SO very sorry for the early publishing of the prompt. I must have scheduled for 3 a.m. rather that 3 p.m. I certainly did not mean to step over De’s Quadrille!!
Remember the Quadrille prompt is open all week! 🙂 So sorry, De.
Awww, you’re sweet, Mish. No worries. All poems are a beauty and a blessing. And while Quadrilles sure know how to dance, they don’t have toes to step on. 😉
I loved this prompt, and see that others do, too. For my time zone, earlier is better anyway. 🙂
Yeeow! Just published my poem at 1:44 PM and there are 19 people ahead of me! Wow! Guess this time, the early bird catches the …. post? 🙂 No problem, Mish. I think there are many who were happy to see it up early as it was actually better timing for them. I did enjoy the post and the prompt! Still have my Christmas decorations up….many times take them down on Epiphany, January 6th. But given the insurrection and Covid, I decided I could use all their sparkle and bright lights until later this month – hence m poem for today.
Thanks Lil. Sparkle is good right now! 🙂
wrote my poem on my phone but coud not link to m rlinky on phone so finally got here thank you for waiting. stay safe all
No worries whatsoever! The prompt is open until Thurs. 🙂
Staying safe is key right now. Our province just went into a state of emergency and “stay at home” order.
Us in England are on a lock down so have to stay in .
Yes, here too. Second wave is worse, just as predicted.
Well, interesting. This prompt apparently went up just after micnight? Is this a new schefule?
No Rob. I made a mistake in my scheduling. Did not realize I scheduled for 3 a.m. vs. p.m. So sorry!
Ha.. now I’m late late to the fire. Will have to think about an object,,.
haha..well thanks so much for manning the pub doors that swung open too soon. Again, I apologize. I will have to take another look at the scheduling to see where I went wrong. Never had a problem before.
Wow, a 12+ hour head star, dozens of poems already posted,. This a lot to process for this old poet. I hate being late to the party, but will work on something I guess.
Please do, Glenn. It was my mistake. I scheduled the prompt for 3 a.m. by accident.
Hi Mish and All. Mish, I really enjoyed your “not a prompt” today. Very easy to write this one as the object jumped up and started dancing to be shared. Cold and dreary today but no bitter wind. If you’re pouring, I’ll take a pint of Magners. I see some got drinking early today but it won’t take me long to catch up. Cheers!
Magners coming your way. Cheers!
Cheers Mish!
My first go here at Poetics. Hope I can make meaningful contributions.
Welcome Ron!! I’m sure you will. So glad you can join us. This is a very supportive bunch. 🙂
The early time suits me much better. The prompt doesn’t go up until 9pm for me which is late for starting to think about a poem.
Thank you for the warm welcome, MIsh. This is not a prompt but an invitation to read the poetry of others and to explore a poetic conversation for ourselves. Thank you for the invite. I will ponder. Meanwhile, I hope everyone is staying healthy.
Hi Ali. 🙂 I like your interpretation of the prompt as well. Yes, staying healthy is definitely first and foremost right now.
I finally got around to contributing to the fun prompt. It has been really uplifting reading the poems others have shared.
I appreciate this so much. Thank you, Mish.
This was one of my favorite prompts and all of the poems written to it turned out so well. Unfortunately, I missed that I was supposed to start with “This is not a . . . . I was in a hurry because I was afraid the posting time was about to close. Good work, everyone..
No worries. The prompt should be open until tomorrow. So glad you enjoyed the theme. I enjoyed your poem.
Thanks.
This sparked more than a few memories…thanks Mish. (K)
So glad it did. Thanks for joining in. 🙂
After reading the 38 links (so far), I have come to the conclusion that changing one word creates power. “This is NOT an object” causes both writer and reader to think differently. I do not know how often prompts get recycled here, but I heartily encourage the recycling of this one. I for one would love to do it again sometime.
Hi Ron 🙂 Yes, it’s interesting to see the depth of thoughts, moving past the literal sense of the object. I am still reading them and each one is a gem! Prompt ideas do recycle sometimes when it’s been awhile since we’ve visited them. Thanks for your input!
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Enjoyed this exercise! Thank you 😊