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Hi everyone! Today we will learn a poetry form, called Sequidilla.
The Seguidilla began as a popular dance song of Spain. The verse form was established and branched into variations by the 17th century. It has an alternating long short rhythm.
The Seguidilla is:
• stanzaic, written in any number of 2 part septets. (7 lines)
• syllabic, 7-5-7-5 : 5-7-5 per line. There is a slight pause between L4 and L5 suggesting L4 should be end-stopped.
• rhymed by assonance xAxABxB or xAxABAB. x being unrhymed. True rhyme is generally not used.
• composed with a volta or change in thought between L4 and L5.
• sometimes serves as a conclusion for another verse.
Example:
So quiet now, the ripples
lapping on the shore
scarcely disturb the silence
– a whisper, no more.
But who knows the power
the growing breakers may have
in another hour?
– Paul Hansford
And for those interested to know the definition of assonance, here it is:
Assonance is a literary device in which the repetition of similar vowel sounds takes place in two or more words in proximity to each other within a line of poetry. Assonance most often refers to the repetition of internal vowel sounds in words that do not end the same. For example, “he fell asleep under the cherry tree” is a phrase that features assonance with the repetition of the long “e” vowel, despite the fact that the words containing this vowel do not end in perfect rhymes. This allows writers the means of emphasizing important words in a phrase or line, as well as creating a sense of rhythm, enhancing mood, and offering a lyrical effect of words and sounds.
Sources: Seguidilla Assonance
Today’s challenge is to write a seguidilla. You choose your theme and set the mood. If one stanza is not enough for you, you can continue to add, following the seguidilla pattern of rhyme and number of lines.
New to dVerse? Here’s how to join in:
*Write a sequidilla in response to the challenge.
*Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr. Linky below
and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy.
*You will find links to other poets and more will join so please do check
back later in order to read their poems.
*Read and comment on other poets’ work–we all come here to have our poems read.
*Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
See you at the poetry trail! ~ Grace
Grace said:
Good afternoon from a warm spring week from Canada. I am so excited about the change in season. I look forward to reading your sequidilla poems. I hope you all enjoy writing to this form.
Ingrid said:
Good evening everyone! Wow, Grace this is a tough technical challenge. But thank you for introducing me to a new form. I will have a go…
Grace said:
A puzzle to challenge the brain, smiles. Looking forward to reading yours.
kim881 said:
Good evening all and thank you Grace for hosting and introducing us to a new form, which I enjoyed writing.
Grace said:
A delightful new form for me too. Glad you enjoyed it.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
A long time since I did a new form… it was more challenging than I thought at first
Grace said:
My first time to do this too. I am thinking of doing more poetry forms (new ones) for future sessions.
msjadeli said:
Hello Grace and All. Glad to hear you are having a warm spring week in Canada. Need to get busy writing on what looks like a fun and challenging new form. Not sure which critters I will write about that I saw yesterday and today but it gives you a hint on my topic. If you’re pouring something tasty today, will you pour me one please.
Grace said:
Yes finally, we are so happy. I will cheer you on with wine! Looking forward to your poem.
msjadeli said:
Thank you so much and cheers! Just linked it up.
sanaarizvi said:
Loved the challenge, Grace! It’s been a long time since I tried a new form 🙂 hope you like the poem. 💝💝
Grace said:
Me too. I like that its short enough but challenging with the requirements. A bit like tanka&haiku, but with the volta and syllabic pattern. I love your septets !
sanaarizvi said:
Thank you! I loved yours too, Grace 😀
Tricia Sankey said:
This is a fun challenge! I may do two stanzas. Feeling adventurous! 😆
Grace said:
Go ahead, you can write more than 1 stanza. These forms are fun and challenging.
Beverly Crawford said:
I have to admit the restrictions/constrictions of some of the formats seem to stifle free poetic expression. I am always amazed, however, at the talents of my fellow poets.
Grace said:
Bev, so nice to see you. For me, I write short verses and just “fit” or “beat” them into the form, ha..ha… Take care!
merrildsmith said:
Hi Grace–and all! Thank for this new (to me) form. I definitely want to try it, but we’ve been out all day enjoying our unseasonably warm weather. I’ll see if I can get one written later or tomorrow.
Grace said:
Hi Merril! Been out myself after work, enjoying the warm weather. Take care.
Ron. said:
Oy.
Grace said:
Hello!
RedCat said:
Good Evening Grace, and thank you for teaching me a new form. Never heard of this one before, although I’m sure there are a lot of forms I’ve never heard of.
This one was a bit of puzzle and I had to write 3 verses to get a feel for it. 😊
Grace said:
Yes, my first time to try this form too. Lovely theme for your verses. Glad you had fun writing it.
Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing said:
This was fun! Writing Haikus every day is a help!!!
ben Alexander said:
I had the same thought when I got to the last 3 lines 😀
Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing said:
Yes it was like a reverse Tanka! ☺️👍
ben Alexander said:
Grace,
Two things – I love trying new forms! Thank you! And – I think that the poem you gave as an example above is a bit off because it uses exact rhyme. Am I wrong about that?
Yours,
David
anotherkatewilson said:
Oh I’m so glad you said that. I was feeling a bit thick, wondering if I hadn’t understood the idea of rhyming by assonance or if maybe my accent was the problem.
ben Alexander said:
Confused poet at your service!
merrildsmith said:
I noticed that, too, but I assumed rhyme and/or assonance.
Grace said:
Yes, that is correct. It provides a little leeway.
Xan said:
I /ove/ technical prompts. Taking a deep breath and diving in. I’ve got some subject prompts from some friends and will combine them! May take the weekend!
Grace said:
Looking forward to it. Thanks for checking in.
robtkistner said:
Thank you for hosting Grace. I posted a end of winter poem. That is all I had in me. My creative juices are drained. Feel free to dispose of the link if you wish..
Grace said:
Hi Rob. This Mr. Linky is for the poetry form. We always have OpenLinkNight if you wish to link up with any poem of your choice. I will be hitting the trail in a bit.
robtkistner said:
…if you feel it missed your prompt…
Grace said:
Thanks so much for joinining folks. I noticed that some might be confused by the syllabic count per line requirement. You count the syllables per line (it does not mean the number of words though). I will be reading and commenting on your poems throughout the days.
-Eugenia said:
Hello everyone! Wow, a challenging form but a lovely one, as well. I’ll give it a try if I can. Since I started my weekly prompt back up, I’ve been overwhelmed with WordPress activities! Take care!
Grace said:
Thanks for your visit. Enjoy the weekend.
-Eugenia said:
My pleasure, Grace.
Helen Dehner said:
Happy weekend everyone …..
Grace said:
Happy weekend Helen.
kittysverses said:
Hi Grace,
Thank you for hosting the challenge. I enjoyed trying this new form very much.
navasolanature said:
Dear Grace, am very inspired by your post and interested in the form. I have posted on open link night a poem I wrote for a Spanish occasion and it was translated. It’s not quite a seguidilla but I think I was driven in the right direction by other Spanish poetry examples. I love Neruda’s style and Antonio Machado but I was searcing for a form and did not find anything. So thanks this fits perfectly with some of the future work I want to do in Spanish and English.
5thgenerationgirl said:
Thanks for sharing and introducing me to something new.