“Poetry is not only dream and vision; it is the skeleton architecture of our lives. It lays the foundations for a future of change, a bridge across our fears of what has never been before.”
--Audre Lorde Quoted on Brainpickings
Hello, dVerse Poets! It’s Merril welcoming you to Poetics Tuesday. We’re almost at the end of poetry month, but I hope you have enough energy to build a bridge or to cross one. Perhaps you might bridge our fears, build bridges over troubled waters, sing about London Bridge falling down, or perhaps whistle while crossing the bridge over the river Kwai.
Bridges are marvels—the physical structures that connect two places, and the metaphorical conceit that links ideas.
Southern New Jersey, where I live, is connected to Philadelphia by several different bridges: The Ben Franklin Bridge, the Walt Whitman Bridge, and others north and south of the city. There are many more famous bridges, of course, among them, the Tower Bridge, Golden Gate, Sydney Harbor, Ponte Vecchio—and there are small footbridges, covered bridges, and hundreds of unnamed bridges all over the world. Bridges have inspired poets in all times and places. Here, William Wordsworth writes about the early morning beauty seen from Westminster Bridge.
However, there is also a modern poetry form call the Puente, which means bridge in Spanish. This form uses a line with a tilde (~) to connect two stanzas. The first and third stanzas must have the same number of lines, but there is no set number of lines, as long as the two stanzas match. They can be rhymed or unrhymed. The bridge line is one single line connecting the first and third stanzas. The last line of the first stanza and the bridge line are a couplet, and the bridge line and the first line of the third stanza are a couplet. The bridge line then often connects stanzas written from different points of view or about different ideas.
I am probably making it sound more complicated than it is, but it really is not. Two stanzas with a middle line that connects them. You can read more on how to write a puente here.
As another example, here is a Puente I wrote recently for the ekphrastic challenge I’m participating in this month. The line “just beyond reach” connects the stanzas before and after, and both of those stanzas are four lines.
Reaching
By Merril D. Smith, April 2021
She walked through the city bustling, teeming–
bodies electric, grumbling, gleaming,
broken hearts and dreamers dreaming
of crossing bridges, the future seeming
~just beyond reach~
she thinks, the glittering stars. The sight
so wondrous and magical. Tonight,
these constellations of silvery-white ignite–
she wishes, then reaches for the twinkling light.
Back in 2017, Lillian asked dVerse poets to write a poem using the word bridge. Today I’m asking you to either write a poem about bridges OR to write a Puente. If you choose to write a Puente it does not need to include the word bridge (but it can). If you do not write a Puente, then it should use some form of the word bridge in the poem or in the title. Since so many are busy with NaPoWriMo or other poetry month prompts, it is also fine to revise a poem about bridges.
New? Here’s what to do:
–Write a poem about bridges OR write a Puente.
–Post it on your blog.
–Enter the link for that post into Mister Linky.
–Read and comment on others’ posts.
merrildsmith said:
Hello, Everyone! It’s a beautiful spring day here in New Jersey. I’m looking forward to reading all of your bridge poems.
lillian said:
Well I blew that one! I’ve been out of commission for about a week with a death in the family and came back to post today. I mistakenly posted for last week’s China Poetics! APOLOGIES!
Merril, please delete my post from Mr. Linky. I’ll get back to your prompt tomorrow….and just save my Winding River for an OLN. So sorry. My head just hasn’t returned to our time zone and I guess the emotional drain is still there.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I removed your link before we went live, thought you would appreciate it…
lillian said:
THANK YOU, Bjorn! Apologies again….guess I’m just not all back yet.
merrildsmith said:
So sorry you’re not “with it,” Lillian. You’ve been through an overwhelming time. Hugs! And thank you Björn!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello… I thought that I had written the puente form before… but I had to look deep. It was fun to do, and loved the exercise.
merrildsmith said:
I’m so pleased you liked it. Yours was wonderful.
kim881 said:
Good evening poets and thank you, Merril, for hosing and for introducing me to the Puente. I really enjoyed this prompt!
merrildsmith said:
You’re so welcome. I’m happy you enjoyed it!
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Hello Merril and All- I love the Puente form. Such a great prompt Merril!
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Linda!
robtkistner said:
Very interesting post Merril, thank you — and thank you for hosting. No idea where to go with this?
merrildsmith said:
I imagine you’ve crossed some bridges real or figurative, Rob. You could just write a poem about that. Or if you want to try the puente form, it can be on any subject. Sometimes I take words from the Magnetic Poetry Oracle to get started: https://magneticpoetry.com/pages/play-online
robtkistner said:
Wow Merril, this became a very honest, personal wander into writing — I did not expect to get so spiritual. Guess I got a void to fill?
merrildsmith said:
Sometimes the writing process leads to unexpected things, Rob. Thank you for giving the prompt a try!
rob kistner said:
Enjoyed it,
merrildsmith said:
💙
sanaarizvi said:
Loved the prompt, Merril 😀 looking forward to reading what everyone comes up with! 💝💝
merrildsmith said:
Yay! I’m glad you liked it. 😀❤️
Grace said:
I love the theme of bridge/s Merril. I am going to offer some more for OLN. Here it is a cold spring weather (what else is new). Thanks for hosting.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Grace. Bridges are wonderful. I might write more, as well. 😀
msjadeli said:
Hello Merril and All. Sheesh, I forgot to say hello and just linked my poem. Merril, I very much enjoyed writing to your prompt and thank you for it. I like that form! First time using it. If you’re pouring, I’ll take a hot coffee with a shot of Baileys please 🙂
merrildsmith said:
You’re very welcome. I’m so glad you like the form. It’s a fun, adaptable type of form. And yes, here you go a hot coffee with a generous shot of Bailey’s. 😀
msjadeli said:
Cheers!
jewishyoungprofessional said:
Joining you for a hot coffee with Bailey’s – I like you virtual drinking style and your poem!
merrildsmith said:
Virtual drinking has the added benefit of no after effects. 😀
msjadeli said:
Thanks, and cheers!
merrildsmith said:
Enjoy!
Ron. said:
Well, that was F.U.N. Thanks, Merril!
merrildsmith said:
You’re welcome, Ron.! I’m glad you enjoyed it. I like what you did with yours.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Struggling to comment on iPad and dodgy connection – just managed to post something – back tomorrow
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Sorry struggling to post on iPad – back home tomorrow to read
rogblog666 said:
great prompt my first attempt at yet another form i have learnt here at the pub
merrildsmith said:
Great! I hope you enjoyed it.
rogblog666 said:
I did thanks
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revivedwriter said:
I thought about writing a Puente today, even before seeing this prompt!
RedCat said:
Good evening Merril and everyone else. Thanks for teaching me yet another new form, can see how this one could be used for conveying so many things and changes.
Speaking of changes I got stuck in writing something really personal and therefor really hard. Have a lump in my throat and a pit in my stomach as I post my link and write this. But I have decided the only way forward is through all the fears that kept me not writing at all for so many years.
And I have started to trust it’s safe to share with this community of writers, which is a new experience for me, and one I’m more grateful for than mere words can convey.
Given how antsy this has made me a soothing cup of chamomile tea might be best.
Xan said:
It’s a gorgeous poem.
Xan said:
Thank you, Merrill. A lovely form. I don’t think I did it right, but on the other hand, the stakes are low. I’ll have a glass of amontillado (yes really) to go with my poem.
merrildsmith said:
Here you go! 😀
calmkate said:
morning Merril, this style really draws me but I’m struggling to grasp it fully. Have bookmarked it and hope to do one for an OLN. Meanwhile enjoyed writing one about my island … hot choc with marshmallows please?
merrildsmith said:
Sorry, I’m just seeing this–but here’s your hot chocolate with extra marshmallows!
calmkate said:
thanks, it will be delicious as I prepare for bed!
merrildsmith said:
😀
lillian said:
Late to post….but I did. Feeling melancholy still tonight.
merrildsmith said:
😘
JosieHolford said:
I think I like this. In fact, I am sure I would. But the background color makes the post pretty much unreadable. So it’s a matter of faith really.
merrildsmith said:
I didn’t choose it, but I’m sorry. All the dVerse posts have the same background.
JosieHolford said:
I know!
jewishyoungprofessional said:
I saw the bridges theme and immediately thought of an old poem to revise. It might be on the borderline re: theme acceptability, but nevertheless, I appreciate the inspiration to get me to relook at my old drafts.
merrildsmith said:
You’re very welcome. I enjoyed your poem.
anotherkatewilson said:
Oh, this brought out the nerdy teacher in me! Love a good bridge, especially an elegant truss bridge.
merrildsmith said:
Hahaha. I’m glad I could oblige! 😀
M Jay Dixit said:
Hello Merril, thanks for hosting. I’ve submitted my poem, it’s an old one but it fits the theme. I loved the prompt, might write a new one later!
merrildsmith said:
Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked the prompt. You can always share another on Open Link Night, if you don’t get it done for this prompt.
Tranature - quiet moments in nature said:
Hi Merril, thank you for introducing us to the lovely Puente form! I’ve linked my first attempt and will swing by later to read xxx
merrildsmith said:
You’re welcome. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
pvcann said:
Thank you Merril, – happy to have a go at bridge building.
merrildsmith said:
I look forward to it, Paul!
tsdwords said:
Hi there! 4 years since I posted. I hope that I did it correctly. Please let me know. Been watching the prompts go by, and there’s been so many good ones. 💕 Happy you are still here.
merrildsmith said:
I will be by to read soon! 💙
merrildsmith said:
Hi, tsdwords. You posted the wrong link. Please post the link to your post on Mister Linky so everyone can read it!
tsdwords said:
Hi Merrill, sorry about that. I think I did it correctly this time. I’m Sarav
Thank you for the quick reply and wonderful prompt. 💕
merrildsmith said:
You’re very welcome. I will go read it now. 😀
Anna Smit said:
Joining you all for the first time, thanks to David for introducing me to d’Verse. This was so much fun to try my hand at, Merril. Thank you for teaching me something new.
merrildsmith said:
You are very welcome, Anna!
robtkistner said:
Hello all! I am having difficulty posting, so until I figure this out, I may be absent for a bit.
merrildsmith said:
Hope you get it worked out, Rob!
memadtwo said:
How could I not? (K)
merrildsmith said:
😀
Mubashshira Rahman said:
Super late to the party but oh well! Happy to have learned about a new form of poetry 😊 looking forward to reading all of yours and seeing what you think of mine!
merrildsmith said:
Welcome! I’ll be over to read in a few minutes.
T.J.S. Sherman said:
T.J.S. Sherman said:
I’m not sure what Mr. Linky is, so let me know if I did this wrong.
msjadeli said:
TJS, scroll up to the top of this page, just above the “like” button and you’ll see “Mr. Linky.” Click on it and put your name and your https// into there, check the accept the terms box and you will be all set.
T.J.S. Sherman said:
I was using the app, I see it now that I’m on the web. Thanks!
msjadeli said:
You’re very welcome 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Thanks, Lisa. I’m just seeing this now.
ms pie said:
i so wanted to try this form…. last day is just as good … https://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2021/04/30/28-bridgework/
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