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Anaphora, Antistrophe, D. H. Lawrence, Epiphora, Epistrophe, Repetition in Poetry, Sydney Thompson Dobell, Uses of Anaphora, Walt Whitman
I first fell under the spell of ‘repetition’ when as a child I obsessively spoke the word “bench” over and over to myself till it lost its meaning and I entered a meditative space that frightened me to such a degree that I had to sit right down upon the original!
“It is often remarked that if you are to read or repeat a word continually in a short period of time it seems odd or loses its meaning or sense altogether.” (Leo Cookman) 1
Thus, one use of repetition in poetry is to dislodge the reader from preconceived ideas and meanings in order to hear the words, as if for the first time. Other poets seek to add a touch of musicality, especially with reiterative sound devices such as assonance and alliteration. Whilst word repetition is a way of being emphatic, dramatic even, to let the reader really hear and consider what is being said. Or perhaps to restate a theme as with the use of a Chorus or merely to round up the poem.
There are technical terms for the 15 or so repetitive devices of both sounds and words. As a young reader of D. H. Lawrence’s poems, I felt uncomfortable with his somewhat constant use of word repetition though have since come to appreciate and view his style rather like a Fauvistic painter in oils – as in “Bavarian Gentians” or here in “Almond Blossom” where he makes use of ‘anaphora’ with the first word repeats in consecutive lines:
“Even iron can put forth,
Even iron.
This is the iron age,
But let us take heart
Seeing iron break and bud,
Seeing rusty iron puff with clouds of blossom
The almond-tree,
December’s bare iron hooks sticking out of earth”…
By contrast, Sydney Thompson Dobell conveys the mood of his poem: “Desolate” by re-referencing images as well as using the repetitive song of a bird and employing the opposite of anaphora with his consecutive end line repeats:
“…’So as it is with thee
Is it with me,
So as it is and it used not to be,
With thee used not to be,
Nor me.’
So singeth Robin on the willow tree,
The rainy robin tic-tac at the pane….
But the wintry water deepens at the door,
And a step is plashing by upon the moor
Into the dark upon the darkening moor,
And alas, alas, the drip-drop of the rain!”
The end-line repeats of epiphora are either exactly the same or sometimes for better effect, varying each time. A device Walt Whitman uses in “Song of Myself” v16
“ I resist any thing better than my own diversity,
Breathe the air but leave plenty after me,
And am not stuck up, and am in my place.
(The moth and the fish-eggs are in their place,
The bright suns I see and the dark suns I cannot see are in their place,
The palpable is in its place and the impalpable is in its place.”
Since Anaphora has already been covered by Victoria (27th June 2013) let us understand the use of its opposite. Epiphora, from the Greek ‘to turn about/upon’, is used:-
- To drive home a point
- To make the words “catchy” or memorable
- To express a deeply held belief
- To convey strong emotion
- To create a regular rhyme scheme
So today we shall write our poem using any style or meter as long as it contains:
1a. Epiphora (aka Epistrophe or Antistrophe). The end line repeats should for the most part be consecutive, although allowances are made for alternates as well as the use of the repeat word with variance. Employ repetitions with the maxim ‘ too often is too heavy’!
AND those who like an extra challenge might like to add in some
1b. Symploce – the combined use of anaphora and epiphora. Here is an example from Eliot’s “Prufrock”:
“The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes,
The yellow smoke that rubs its muzzle on the window-panes
Fun Fact: Epiphora in medical terms means watery eyes due to excess tear production. So you may like to write a tear-jerker, something sad at least. Its optional!
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Linky widget and leave a comment (see below). Then go visiting, reading and sharing your thoughts with other contributors which is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
References:
1. Leo Cookman – The use of repetition in D. H. Lawrence’s ‘Women in Love’
Further Reading:
Epistrophe
Repetition in poetry – The Many Ways to Create Poetic Intensity
Thank you for hosting Laura. I appreciate the lesson on repetition as well as the value of repeated words/phrases from your examples. Enjoyed your challenge!
it was good training for me Grace!
I loved how to use the repetition in this way, it became like a mantra when I started to write it… thank you for this informative article Laura…
good to hear that Bjorn – I began to understand why repetition can be so poetic
It can also be very persuasive… as in a manifesto or a pamphlet. I looked at Howl and saw how efficient (and poetic) it can be.
certainly a tool for oration as Churchill used to good effect
“We shall go on to the end, we shall fight in France,
we shall fight on the seas and oceans,
we shall fight with growing confidence and growing strength in the air, we shall defend our Island, whatever the cost may be,
we shall fight on the beaches,….”
Hello Fellow Poets – I’m often a stranger to MTB as do not readily conform to the strictures of poetry writing but doing this helped me enormously – hope others find this use of repetitions does too
Hello Laura and All. The Lawrence poem is stunningly good. Something to strive for as the ideal. I really enjoyed writing to the prompt and had a good topic to use based upon my day trip yesterday. It was sunny and a little warm on the drive but I’m not complaining. I’m sipping a hot cuppajoe and so will pass on refreshments today.
I agree and am struck with Lawrence’s use of iron to denote something we usually think of as soft – almond blossom! Your day out was inspirational with its curves and curls 😉
Yes, me too, and I like how things morphed along the way in the poem also. Yes it was and I had almost talked myself out of going. I need to be pushier with myself more often 😉
A hard challenge: to do it without overdoing it! I do like to be challenged though, so thank you for the prompt Laura 🙂
you sang beautifully
Hi Laura and All! This is the first prompt I’ve done this week because I’m behind on everything ,but thank you for it. 😀 It sent me out in a quite a different style for me. I combined different forms of repetition, so I hope that was OK.
suffused with juice and gorgeous use of the consecutive repeats plus others
Thank you very much, Laura.
Hi Laura and Everyone!
Thanks for the prompt, hopefully it’s a sufficient enough of a tear jerker to meet the spirit of the prompt.
it was – a veritable Celtic twilight
“Time and the bell have buried the day” as Eliot so aptly said
and now is the time I must go to meet my bed
keep those consecutive end line repeats coming
and tomorrow I shall be coming
to read.
Laura this is a great challenge, well done … hope I did it justice. After all that toil, serve me up a refreshing wine spritzer …. please?
you will have needed that drink to sing your opera!
Thanks for furthering my education with this challenge, Laura! Consecutive felt like overkill so i spaced out my repeated lines 🙂
thats OK Lynn – the consecutive can be hard to hear and handle!
Nice article.
thank you
Thanks for a lovely challenge, Laura. I enjoyed writing to it. 🙂
I could tell that by your poem 🙂
I’ve become increasingly excited about repetition. I’ve posted a villanelle (which doesn’t really meet the prompt), but I’m going to think about this one a lot.
well it does meet the prompt in a way as it employs whole line repeats – and besides your villanelle was pure joy to read
I too, recall as a child repeating a word over and over until it lost all meaning and put me in a meditative state. To the best of my recollection, the first time this occurred was with the word ‘bowman’. Anyway, I am VERY late to the bar, it’s early morning here, so I could use a bloody bloody Mary.
I did wonder then if Bowman was going to be your poem
p.s. A BBM -is that the hair of the dog I wonder.
Darn. Missed the prompt time again, but seeing if it will at least post here. https://judydykstrabrown.com/2021/06/07/the-doggone-doggie-blues-dverse-poets/