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Amy Lowell, fragment poetry, John Ashberry, modernist, Postmodern Poets, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Sappho, T. S. Eliot
“Many works of the ancients have become fragments
Many works of the moderns are fragments at birth“
~ Friedrich Schlegel
This calendar year is drawing to a close and is perhaps, a little tattered at the edge. Many of us are suffering ennui as a result of Northern darkness, pre-festive fatigue, and the sense that our societies are not holding together well.
And so what more apt poetry term to match the mood than that of the Fragment.
“A part broken off, something cut or detached from the whole, something imperfect. Much of the work of the ancients comes down to us in fragments and tatters, cut pieces.” (A Poet’s Glossary ~ Edward Hirsch)
Indeed, from Sappho we only have fragmented manuscripts, where decay has eaten away words, uncoupled the meanings, as here in “Fragment 16”:
“…Helen, left her most noble husband
and went sailing off to Troy with no thought at all
for her child or dear parents,
but [love?] led her astray …
lightly …
[and she]
has reminded me
now of Anactoria
who is not here;
I would rather see her
lovely walk and the bright sparkle of her
face than the Lydians’ chariots and armed
infantry …”
And it was to such ruinous classical themes that the early 19th century Romantic poets turned. And from their own context of European social upheavals (the French Revolution) and newer influential philosophies (Schlegel) the Romantic Fragment poetry style was formed. Byron, Shelley, Keats and of course Coleridge, published texts as unfinished forms. Thus his interrupted opioid dreamscape “Kubla Khan” is subtitled “Or, a vision in a dream. A Fragment. There are also nine other published fragments of Coleridge which read like something lifted from a notebook and it may be that the editor rather than the writer wanted them published as here in “Fragment 3“:
“Come, come thou bleak December wind,
And blow the dry leaves from the tree!
Flash, like a Love-thought, thro’ me, Death
And take a Life that wearies me.“
There have been many poems since, entitled ‘Fragments’ of one sort or another and it begs the question as to what exactly defines this genre or can it even be defined. Are we to assume ‘the fragment’ is the more that never arose, or the less that is complete in itself, which we, the reader, are at liberty to infill? Amy Lowell explores this in her “Fragment”
“What is poetry? Is it a mosaic
Of coloured stones which curiously are wrought
Into a pattern? Rather glass that’s taught
By patient labor any hue to take
And glowing with a sumptuous splendor, make
Beauty a thing of awe; where sunbeams caught,
Transmuted fall in sheafs of rainbows fraught
With storied meaning for religion’s sake.”
By the time the modernists were writing, the Fragment poem becomes much more literal in the sense of being disconnected, discontinued pieces fished from a stream of consciousness. The prime example beings Eliot’s six part The Wasteland (“these fragment I have shored against my ruin”) but also it appears in his prose poem “Hysteria“:
“As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps, inhaled at each momentary recovery, lost finally in the dark caverns of her throat, bruised by the ripple of unseen muscles…I decided that if the shaking of her breasts could be stopped, some of the fragments of the afternoon might be collected, and I concentrated my attention with careful subtlety to this end”
Eliot from his post-war, turbulent marriage perspective is expressing the anxiety that the whole keeps coming apart and thus the fragment is often inevitable but not necessarily desirable. Post Modernists dispense with that idea and thus the Fragment Poem becomes emancipatory from context, wholeness, meaning and runs on like the glossary of rivers in Ashberry’s ‘Into the Dusk-Charged Air”
So for this prompt we are to write a Modernist/Post-Modernist Fragment poem ~by that I mean
Either:
a poem of several numbered stanzas. Each being complete in itself and having only a passing relationship to each other, if at all
OR
a poem of disjointed images (like listening to conversation in passing, repetitively switching between radio/tv station, random images across a screen, or paintings/photos seen in a gallery)
Rules:
Your poem should NOT conform to any rhyme scheme
Your poem MUST include Fragment(s) somewhere in the title
If you are stuck for inspiration, then why not:
– Utilize pieces of any draft poems you have written
– Take a long published poem or prose and write it as an erasure poem (cite the source of course)
For more clarification, see the Poetry style definition “Fragment”
And Finally – so that others can find you, add your poem to the Mr Linky below and go visiting others, as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Hi All – I look forward to reading your fragments – its bitterly cold here tonight so I’m warming hot toddies and ginger cake
Helen Dehner said:
Thank you for a fascinating prompt! I have been ‘under the weather’ for over a week, beginning to feel almost human again. Something to concentrate on is just what the doctor ordered!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
let your concentration fragment Helen as you Get Well 🙂
msjadeli said:
Hello Laura and All. So glad to be cozying up to the pub again. Wonderful prompt to poem to. It’s chilly here, but the sun was out until about 30 minutes ago. Still going to take a walk and explore a new trail I found earlier this week in a minute or two. Will you please pour me a hot toddy with brandy in it for walk?
Laura Bloomsbury said:
waiting for you on your return – and welcome back Lisa!
msjadeli said:
thank you ❤
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello, we have had winter here for almost a week… this morning the first snow came with a little warmer weather.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
ours has come and gone and due again – your fabulous fragments are like broken ice on a pond
fireblossom32 said:
This is VERY similar to Bjorn’s Cadralor (Meeting the Bar October 8, 2021).
Laura Bloomsbury said:
yes indeed and akin to erasure poetry too but there should be no unifier as in the former
fireblossom32 said:
Love that you quoted Amy Lowell, a sadly neglected poet who was one of my first loves/influences.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
one of mine too though latterly!
Barbara S said:
that’sa bit of a poet’s coincidence: I wrote this fragment as found poetry rewritten this afternoon when I cam across the Hermit Rambling’s #284 where it was part of #284 – when the prompt turned up it was already done… 🙂 Thank you.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
great but do remember the title rule too!
Barbara S said:
mmh – did I misunderstand- I did have a fragment as I understand it in the title?
Laura Bloomsbury said:
yes but your title doesn’t!!
Barbara S said:
my title IS a fragment; if I understand you now you wanted the word ‘fragment’ in the title? tough luck
Laura Bloomsbury said:
its easy to miss what the rules are sometimes especially as yours was already written and you tagged it to here because of the fit. Never mind.
Barbara S said:
I had noticed what you said – namely “Poems MUST include Fragment(s) somewhere in the title” -you could have made clearer what you meant. Never mind.
Ain Starlingsson, forestbathing hermit said:
What an absolutely brilliant prompt….wonderful….
Laura Bloomsbury said:
your enthusiasm is very much appreciated
Ain Starlingsson, forestbathing hermit said:
I just want to add that was a very emotional experience, writing it.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
having read it I can see why!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
the bar is staying open so help yourself but I’ll be back tomorrow to read more –
ByteSizedStudio said:
It’s cold and rainy here as well. I’ve been collecting fragments for years, I call them “Thoughtlets,” so I loved this prompt. I dug out my file, two of the fragments in today’s post came from my thoughtlets file, the rest came naturally. 🙂
I’ll never tell which is which, lol
Laura Bloomsbury said:
hanging on to those thoughtlets was the perfect recipe for the fragment poem
rogblog666 said:
hi Laura,
thanks for an interesting prommpt. it got me reaching into a draw that contains my old note books. this cold evening after work it has lifted my spirits to read some of my old ideas. some have never seen te light of day others became pieces i their own right . goodnight for now #back another time for a read
rog
Laura Bloomsbury said:
glad that these saw daylight after all!
rogblog666 said:
Thanks
Ali Grimshaw said:
Laura,
What an interesting prompt. Thanks for hosting.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thanks for joining Ali
kittysverses said:
Thank you Laura for an interesting prompt. I had fun writing to this. 🙂
Laura Bloomsbury said:
it shows!
kittysverses said:
🙂
Quaranjavirus said:
This is the toughest challenge I’ve encountered so far, also, the most interesting one 😀 Thanks for the prompt!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I agree – it sounds easier than it is but we all got there in the end 😉
memadtwo said:
Thanks Laura.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
perfectly fits your collage too
memadtwo said:
It does!
pvcann said:
I’ll have a post modern whiskey thanks Laura 🙂
Laura Bloomsbury said:
better late than never – like your fragments!
pvcann said:
Whiskey and fragments do go together, but then, so do I – I blame my parents.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
ha!
paeansunplugged said:
It is getting cold here, so ginger cake sounds heavenly! Very interesting prompt. Loved Amy Lowell’s verse.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
terrible service here from me but a very interesting response in fragments from you
paeansunplugged said:
Not at all! I helped myself to the scrumptious cake. Delighted that you enjoyed my response.
merrildsmith said:
I’m sneaking this one in before the bar closes. An interesting prompt, Laura. I’ve written some fragments, but perhaps not a fragment poem. It did make for some fun poetic procrastination though.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
definitely a fragment poem Merril – thrown up by the current of your wonderful imagination!
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Laura. That’s very kind. 💙
Truedessa said:
Laura, I wanted to thank you for hosting and let you know I read your amazing fragments. I am unable to leave a comment on you blog.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thank you – I know you struggle as a Blogger to link to a WordPresser!
SelmaMartin said:
Thanks. Lovely prompt, Laura. Got to a late start. Accidentally broke my reading glasses. 😌 🤦🏻♀️ 👀. imagine!
Be well everyone. Will do what I can in the morning. Peace and merriment to all. xo
Laura Bloomsbury said:
the accident seems to have enabled you seeing some very prismatic fragments 😉
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Lynn’s link is broken – you can read her poem here
https://madhatterpoetry.com/2021/12/04/fragmented-insomnia