Hello, dVerse Poets! It’s Merril, writing from southern New Jersey, where we’ve been experiencing colder winter weather than we’ve had in a few years. It’s fitting then, that today’s quadrille prompt word is shiver.
Some may shiver in anticipation at the snow, others will shiver from the cold. You might shiver from delight, or love, or fear.
In this beautiful poem, Pablo Neruda imagines the stars shivering:
“Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
Write, for example, ‘The night is starry
and the stars are blue and shiver in the distance.”
–from Pablo Neruda, “I Can Write,”
Maya Angelou used shiver in her description of a woman
“Her jowls shiver in accusation”–Maya Angelou, “Momma Welfare Roll”
And in Tennyson’s famous “The Lady of Shallott” (I just discovered there were different versions!),
“Willows whiten, aspens quiver,
Little breezes dusk and shiver
Thro’ the wave that runs for ever
By the island in the river
Flowing down to Camelot.”
Alfred, Lord Tennyson, “The Lady of Shallott” (1842)
Use shiver–or some form of the word—in a poem of exactly 44 words. The form is up to you. Shiver in rhyme, or shiver in free verse. Shiver in the past, present, or future.
If you’re new to dVerse or the quadrille, it’s simply a poem of 44 words, excluding the title. It can be in any form, rhymed or unrhymed, metered, or unmetered. You MUST use the word “shiver” or some form of the word in your poem. Are you shivering in anticipation? Go and write!
But–please do follow the rules and remember to link back to this post.
When you’re ready, post your poem, and add your link to Mr Linky below so that everyone can find it. Read the poems of others. You may be surprised by all the wonderful poets here at dVerse, and everyone appreciates it when others read their work and leave a comment.
merrildsmith said:
Welcome to Quadrille Monday! The wonderful thing about a virtual poets’ pub is that I can offer you anything you want to eat or drink while you write and read!
Ain said:
Hi Merril, lovely prompt, and nice examples….I’m not at the point of needing the usual fiery warmed up vodka with chili peppers thrown in yet…though am shivering from the cold still…..but I might need something for inspiration…a wee nip…..
merrildsmith said:
Hi Ain–we’re well stocked, so nip at whatever you want!
Grace said:
Hi Merril, thank you for hosting. I am shivering looking outside my window – its snowing again. Well a warm chai tea would be perfect.
merrildsmith said:
One chai, coming up, and I think I’ll join you. It’s actually a bit warmer here today, but there was a cold wind at the river this morning.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Hello Merril – a wonderful photo to match this seasonal prompt. Am keeping warm on this very cold night with imaginings of reading everyone’s poems by a blazing fire –
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Laura. I thought that image was perfect, too–it didn’t look as much like a stock photo either. Sitting by a blazing fire sounds lovely.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
only in my imagination though but where better to sit and read some poetry
merrildsmith said:
Exactly! 😀
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Hello Merril- Thanks for hosting. Fabulous word choice!
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Linda. It actually turned out to be a harder one than I thought it would be. 😀
msjadeli said:
Hello Merril and All. A perfect prompt for the recent weather. Would you please pour me a hot cocoa with Baileys. Sounds really good to sip while watching gentle snowfall and fluffy birds and visiting the poetry trail.
merrildsmith said:
Hot cocoa with Baileys coming up! Enjoy!
msjadeli said:
Thank you, Merril. Cheers!
merrildsmith said:
🍷
Ingrid said:
Hi Merril – phew! I’ve had a very busy day moving house, so I’ve just stopped in for a short read. A ginger and turmeric tea would be nice if you have it 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Hi Ingrid. Of course we have it! 😀
Ingrid said:
Thank you!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Love the word, and I hope I found a creative use for the word. I would love to have something warm tonight
merrildsmith said:
Something warm coming up! I’m sure you’ve found something creative. 😏
Barbara S said:
thanks Merril for hosting and I love me a Nerruda, thanks for the inspiration …
merrildsmith said:
You’re very welcome!
Mish said:
Hello Merril and all…it is a very shivery day here. We woke up to a hefty blanket of snow which definitely helped in sparking a poem. I love the variety of examples you’ve given for the use of “shiver”. Thanks for hosting, Merril. 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Thank you so much, Mish. I’m so pleased you like the prompt!
rogblog666 said:
hi merril
hi all
great prompt . i was caught off gaurd by where it took me. hope i do not upset any one
rog
merrildsmith said:
I thought it was powerful, Rog.
rogblog666 said:
Thank you
lillian said:
Thank you for hosting, Merril. No shivering here in sunny San Diego. Just came in from the deck…finish an engrossing novel while wearing my sleeveless sun dress and sun visor! 🙂 Will be to reading in the AM and maybe a little later tonight.
merrildsmith said:
Stop rubbing it in, Lillian! 😀
I took my cold morning walk along the river this morning, wind in my face and ice down below. . .
Bodhirose said:
Hi Merril, thanks for the prompt for today and it’s apropos for our chilly day in southeast Florida. It was 36F last night, the coldest temp we’ve had so far this winter…brrr!
merrildsmith said:
You’re welcome. That’s almost as cold as it was in NJ today!
Bodhirose said:
Wow!
calmkate said:
Morning Merril, you ignited my passion!
merrildsmith said:
I’m so pleased, Kate! 😀
Gillena Cox said:
😊I’ll have a beer Merril. Its a hot day today and still bright here🇹🇹
Happy Monday everyone
Much love…
merrildsmith said:
One beer coming up. Enjoy your Monday, Gillena. ❤️
rothpoetry said:
Great prompt Merril. Most of us are shivering these days! Need Hot Chocolate today!
pvcann said:
shivers, that was great, a great prompt Merril, thank you.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Paul. It seems to have resonated with a lot of people!
Ronald E. Shields said:
I could not resist the prompt…thank you!
merrildsmith said:
That’s wonderful! I’m so pleased.
Xan said:
I love it when the prompt matches the poem I intended to write today anyway! Perfect!
merrildsmith said:
Wonderful!
whimsygizmo said:
Wonder prompt, Merril, thank you! Drive-by poeming for now; back tomorrow to read!
whimsygizmo said:
Wonderful prompt, Merril. Driveby poeming for now. Back tomorrow to read!
merrildsmith said:
Sounds good, De!
Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing said:
Stay warm Merril ☺️
merrildsmith said:
😀
Ali Grimshaw said:
Thanks for the prompt. It was a great distraction from the frustrations of the day. Poetry to the rescue again!
merrildsmith said:
I’m so pleased!
Liesl Garner said:
Thank you! I look forward to reading through the links.
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Merril. What an apt prompt!
This January has been the wettest in the past 120 years in Delhi and for the past fifteen days we have been having very cold days and barely any sun.
It is morning, so I would love an espresso.
merrildsmith said:
Oh, I didn’t know that about Delhi! How interesting. Sorry for the late response. I hope you got your espresso. ☕️
paeansunplugged said:
Yes, indeed a shivery winter for us! 😊
No worries, I helped myself.
merrildsmith said:
😊
anotherkatewilson said:
Well this was a struggle on a 30C day! I’ll have a G&T please before I head for a swim in the neighbours dam.
merrildsmith said:
I hope you got your G&T and enjoyed your swim!
anotherkatewilson said:
yep, I did. Although one of the kids screamed “leech” so I cut my swim a bit short. 😀
merrildsmith said:
Yikes! That makes me think of the old movie, The African Queen.
iidorun said:
So much inspiration in responses to this prompt – sent shivers down my spine! Or maybe it’s because is 20 degrees right now? Either way – a coffee with a splash of Kahlúa please, or maybe a Kahlúa with a splash of coffee? Great prompt, Merrill!
merrildsmith said:
I’m pleased you like the prompt, and I hope you found the coffee and Kahlua!
Quaranjavirus said:
Ahhh at last,my poem is done,and I have posted it. The weather is quite pleasant here, neither scorching heat nor unbearable cold, a quiet,sunny day….I’d love a nice glass of pineapple juice! I’m gonna go read others’ poems now…
merrildsmith said:
Lovely! Sorry for my late response. I hope you helped yourself to the juice. 😀
Quaranjavirus said:
Ah yes, I gulped down three jugs before rolling out of the bar 🙂
merrildsmith said:
🤣🤣
Zelda Winter said:
Merril, thanks so much for this prompt–I really enjoyed writing for it 🙂 Blessings to you!
merrildsmith said:
I’m so pleased you did!
Zelda Winter said:
🙂
Rob Kistner said:
I couldn’t resist writing one about the beast of thr wolf moon!
merrildsmith said:
Wonderful!
M Jay Dixit said:
Hi Merril, thanks for hosting! I enjoyed writing for the prompt, I’ve submitted my poem and now I’ll read what others have written.
merrildsmith said:
Thanks so much, Jay. I’m pleased you enjoyed the prompt. I’ll be by soon to read yours, but there are a lot of responses to get to!
M Jay Dixit said:
Take your time, Merril. Yeah your prompt has got great response!
merrildsmith said:
I am pleasantly surprised by the response!
memadtwo said:
Perfect word for the season. But so many responses! It will take me awhile to get through them. (K)
merrildsmith said:
Thank you. Yes. I stopped reading before dinner last night, and there are about 40 more responses that have been added. It’s going to take me a while, too!
memadtwo said:
One reason I don’t do dVerse prompts that often any more. I don’t have time to look at the other responses.
merrildsmith said:
Yes, that’s one reason why I don’t do all of them, too.
Charlotte said:
I’m a little late but thanks for this prompt. Merril! My first quadrille.
merrildsmith said:
Not late at all, Charlotte. The prompt is open all week. I’m still catching up with all the links that were added last night and today after I stopped reading for the night!
fireblossom32 said:
I love the doggo with his scarf!
merrildsmith said:
I liked it, too. 😀
kittysverses said:
Thank you Merril for hosting. 🙂
merrildsmith said:
You’re very welcome!
kittysverses said:
🙂
merrildsmith said:
I’m happy everyone seems to be enjoying this prompt! I’m caught up with reading–so far, but I’ll pop back to check, since the link is still open. The pub door is open, so come on in and help yourself.
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