Hi everyone!
I hope you are having a good day. We are learning a new poetry form today – sparrowlet.
The Sparrowlet is an invented stanzaic form created by Kathrine Sparrow that she calls a variation of the Swap Quatrain. The defining feature is the inversion of the 2 hemistichs of L1 in L6 of each stanza.
The elements of the Sparrowlet are:
- stanzaic, written in any number of sixains. (A stanza of 6 lines).
- syllabic, lines of 8 syllables each. (Often written in iambic tetrameter.)
- rhymed, rhyme scheme BbabaA.
- L1 and L6 of each stanza is written in 2 hemistichs. (Hemistich means a half a line of a verse).
- The 2 halves of L1 are inverted and repeated as a refrain in L6. The last line MUST be the EXACT SAME as line 1, just switched around. You cannot change any of the words. (Punctuation may be changed to accommodate the meaning).
The pattern of the 6 line stanza:
RRRA, RRRB
xxxxxxxb
xxxxxxxa
xxxxxxxb
xxxxxxxa
RRRB, RRRA
(I made the A in bold, and the B in italics so you can see the pattern-Grace)
Deer in Winter
In winter’s cold, as moonlight beams
and snowflakes drift like crystal dreams–
a sheltered place, beneath the fold
of pine tree branches, where it seems
a covered cave, my fawn may hold…
as moonlight beams in winter’s cold.
My little fawn, be safe and warm,
inside our nest, out of the storm.
Sleep close beside me ’til the dawn,
as all the woods to white transform.
I’ll wake you when the moonlight’s gone–
be safe and warm, my little fawn.
Today’s writing challenge: To write the sparrowlet poem using the guidelines as described above.
Here is how to join us if you are new:
- Write a poem based on the writing challenge as described above. Post it on your blog or website.
- Enter your name and direct link to your poem in Mr. Linky.
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- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
Hello everyone! I hope you had fun writing to this new form. On the table today: Peace by Chocolates, tea and coffee of your choice.
Looking forward to reading your sparrowlet poems.
Hello… a tricky form but I think I did something worthwhile this sad day…
Hi Bjorn. It is a sad day indeed. The form is a bit tricky too.
Thank you for the challenge, Grace: I had to work hard at this one! Peace by Chocolates sound most appropriate today.
Peace by Chocolates is perfect. The form is really challenging, I know.
A fascinating and difficult-looking form, Grace. I will write to it if I can and be back if I succeed.
A challenging form indeed. Looking forward to reading it.
Whew! I need some mocha cappucino now! I had fun (well other than the blood sweat and tears) with this, Grace. Thanks for the inspiration. I’ll be by over the weekend to read and visit.
Oh, and peace and chocolates are much needed. I didn’t write about the war, or the larger implications of what is happening now, or the ordeal the people of Ukraine are facing. It’s too big for me at the moment. 😦
Thank you for hosting, Grace. I agree it is a sad day. I’m late here because I was listening to historian Heather Cox Richardson do a political chat on FB. I will take some peace chocolates.
Peace by Chocolates for you! I think most of us wrote about the war in Ukraine- such a sad day!
Very sad. 😔
It’s a fun form, once you get the shape in your head. Thank you for hosting. What strange, sad, scary times we live in. My heart goes out to the Ukrainian people.
Yes. The tricky part is the hemistich on the L1 and L6 but overall a fun form. I fear for the Ukrainian people too.
Hi Grace, this was a tricky but fun challenge and thank you for sharing it with us. I agree it is a very difficult day. My heart goes out to everyone affected by the invasion of the Ukraine by the Russians. The world did not need this!
No, we do not need war and conflict Gayle. Thanks for joining in. Great to see you!
So nice to see you, Grace!
Hello Grace and All. Way late to the party but at least for another week or two I have a “dream class” on Thursday afternoons. We will be continuing on beyond that but not sure what day or time of the week. Looking forward to trying out the new form. Will link up when it’s done.
That ‘dream class’ sounds interesting. Looking forward to reading your sparrowlet.
It is! It goes to the roots of myths and how similar they are across places and times. I just linked mine up.
Thank you for hosting Grace. This was an interesting prompt — not easy, but it brought a quiet peace to my soul.
A brain puzzle form for sure. Thanks for trying it Rob.
Tricky prompt….I tried, and Bjorn’s verse was so well done. So good to have dverse.
My goodness am reading more stunning poetry about Ukraine….dverse….amazing…
Always good to see poets try something new, smiles. Keeps us on our toes, smiles.
I allowed myself to be distracted by sparrowletting & have plunged as ever into affairs of the heart rather than onto the bigger and crueller perspective of the world stage. Sending out love and kindness to you all as – shunning the bar tonight – I wander off to my chaste bed with a mug of cocoa
Cheers to you! Enjoy that mug of cocoa!
Grace,
After a very long day, I don’t have the energy to write but I really enjoyed learning about this new poetry form. I will at least get to read what others have shared.
Thanks for hosting.
Ali
Hi Ali,
Thanks for dropping by. Have a good weekend.
Ah, no rest for the poets, lol, such fun, good to be challenged. Need a whiskey though.
Here’s whiskey for you. Thanks for joining in.
🙂
Hi Grace and others. The form was certainly inspiring though my verse turned out somber. Thanks for introducing to a great new form.
You are very welcome. Thanks for joining in.
Well, I had it, and then I changed it and now it’s not a sparrowlet anymore, but I still like it (I abandoned the form /because/ I liked it, tbh). I’ll read everyone else’s now, and feel guilty for ignoring-ish the prompt, again. Thanks for the challenge, Grace, regardless!
Thanks for dropping by. Have a good weekend.
I really like the rhythm of this form. Thanks for the introduction! (K)
The form has a good though challenging pattern. Thanks for joining in.
Wow, Grace! That was quite a challenge. I almost gave up.
It is very challenging – a real brain twister for sure. Thanks for joining in.