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Catullus, decastitch, decasyllabic, decuain, R. L. Stevenson, ten, tetractys
Today is the 10th day of March. A number we barely attend to other than its associations with decimalization, human digits, a coveted football/soccer shirt, and for us Brits, the home of a Prime Minister! Pythagoreans on the other hand would abhor such profane complacency. For them
“the number “10” was the most divine of all, called “the mother of all, the all-comprising, all-bounding, the firstborn, the never-swerving, the never-tiring holy ten, the keyholder of all,” with its own prayer dedicated to it and a symbol called the Tetractys, which consisted of a triangle with 10 points across four rows, which they literally worshipped on their knees in deep prayer.” ~ Brent Swancer
Perhaps it might be said that this reverence for the unity of ten is (quite naturally) preserved in poetry. Certainly, it occurs several times in poetry forms, most notably the 10 syllabic line count of sonnets. But doubly so when the decasyllabic is coupled with a 10 line poem (decastitch) as in C1 of Catullus’ ten poem collection:
“Through many races and through many eyes
I’ve come, my brother, to these piteous rites
To offer you a final gift in death,
And to your silent ashes call in vain;
For Fate has token you away from me –
Alas, unhappy brother, – underserved.
Now, meanwhile, still accept what I can give
To death, in the manner of our ancestors
A gift that flows with all a brother’s tears,
And for ever more, hail and fare thee well.”.”
And also R. L. Stevenson’s poem “De Ligurra”:-
“YOU fear, Ligurra – above all, you long –
That I should smite you with a stinging song.
This dreadful honour you both fear and hope –
Both all in vain: you fall below my scope.
The Lybian lion tears the roaring bull,
He does not harm the midge along the pool.
Lo! if so close this stands in your regard,
From some blind tap fish forth a drunken barn,
Who shall with charcoal, on the privy wall,
Immortalise your name for once and all.”
Although it has evidently existed long before, the decasyllabic decastitch (!) poetry form has been ascribed to Sheeley A. Cephas and named ‘the Decuain’ (pronounced duck•won), though the stipulation includes iambic pentameter and permits 3 choices of rhymes; ababbcbcaa, ababbcbcbb, or ababbcbccc
But that’s not all…since Ten is closely bound up with the Euclidean equilateral triangle Tetractys, we have Ray Stebbing’s eponymous form which is a triangular syllabic of 1;2;3;4;10.
So in today’s challenge I offer you a choice :-
a 10 line stanza poem (more stanzas permitted of this length)
10 syllables per line
rhyme scheme as per the Decuain or free verse if you’d prefer
AND/OR:
a 5 line stanza poem (more stanzas if you wish)
1;2;3;4;10 syllables for each successive line of the 1st; 3rd; 5th stanza etc; inverted for even numbered stanzas
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Mr Linky below so that others can read it. Then go visiting others as that is half the enjoyment of our dVerse gatherings.
N.B. Please read carefully, and abide by, the rules of the prompt before linking up or you may have to re-write or more regrettably, have the link removed.
Here are the Poetry Form Links for further clarification:
The Decuain
The Tetractys
Reference:
Ten Poems: Martha Hollander and Catullus
Notes:
Ligurra is a type of jumping spider
hello All – today poetry meets the magic of numbers – the bar is open for your orders and I look forward to sampling your poems
Hello.. those ten line mini sonnets are one of my favorite forms… I have always called them sonnetina, but I guess that there are many names for such a good form.
these forms are formulated slightly differently from my understanding – subtle differences for sure in that sonnetina allows variety of metric schemes as well as line splitting
five forms of sonnetina
after dipping my fingers on it, I agree with your term, sonnetina. 🙂
Hi Laura and all! I had fun with this challenge, and look forward to reading everyone’s offerings…
you did well with those rhymes Ingrid!
Hello Laura and All. I very much enjoyed the prompt. Heading out to do a few chores and will be back later to visit the poetry trail.
see you later Lisa
Hi Laura, and all. This was a fun form. I combined it with Tuesday’s prompt. I will read some poems now and catch up over the weekend. 😅
it’s quite clear from your poem that you enjoyed combining both prompts – a magnificent combination
Thank you so much, Laura!
Oh these tough prompts! Joking, very enjoyable, will comment tomorrow, bless everyone..
thank you, Ain, for joining – tough guy!
My goodness! This is tough assignment … gonna take me some time I think! But I do love a good challenge, Laura. Thanks and have a lovely weekend. (Woodford on the rocks with a wedge of lime, please … make it a double.)
hope the Woodford is helping Helen!
Thanks Laura. (K)
thank you for combining your art with the geometric!
They always work together.
Hi, Laura! It’s been a while since I have written in form so I am grateful for this prompt. Things are so stressful on my end, hence a chamomile tea would suffice.
perhaps you managed to release some stress with your expressive poem but the chamomile tea must help too
indeed, Laura!
Thanks for the Catullus, Laura–an old friend not read in a long long time. I’ve chosen to work with the techtractys, as it is a form I’ve written before, and I’m very fond of such short forms. I’ll be by over the weekend to visit and comment.
its a form that worked well with your ekphrastic
Hi Laura and all! I really enjoyed the prompt. Thank you.
thank you for joining in and with both forms too
My pleasure.
I was thinking about the 10 and whether I could go ten shots of whiskey, hmm, okay, let’s see, after all those syllables …. thank you Laura for a great challenge.
you might need the ten shots after that unforgiving poem!