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Hello, Björn here, welcome to another prompt to stretch your poetic limbs and (perhaps) move you a little bit out of your comfort zone
Today we are going to try our hand at a poetic form created by Connie Marcum Wong in 2007. I have tried it a few times before, but I have not found it in our dVerse archive.
This is an example of two poems in one with one short poem being expanded in a longer poem. It consists of at least 5 three-line stanzas written in iambic tetrameter (8 syllables and four feet). The first lines of each of the 5 stanzas form an independent poem (hence with at least 5 lines),
In each 3-line-stanza the ending couplets should rhyme and expand on the topic on the first line.
The internal poem given by the first lines should be reinforced by being written in monorhyme (all lines should rhyme with each other)
The rhyme scheme is, therefore: a/b/b a/c/c, and so on.
The poem should end with the internal poem.
Here is an old effort of mine on this form
To Dance With Trees
I listen as the sunrays play
in March when days are growing long
on harpsichord a honeyed song
I watch the trees that gently sway
like waving arms they reach the sky
cerulean silk that please my eye
as swallows fly in spring ballet
they dance ‘mong cotton candy clouds
undress our nature’s somber shroud
I sip the southern wind’s bouquet
a taste of orchard’s in the air
the spring has flowers in her hair
to colorize the winter’s gray
beneath the lilies burst in bloom
and gone is winter’s sooty gloom
I listen as the sunsrays play
I watch the trees that gently sway
as swallows fly in spring ballet
I sip the southern wind’s bouquet
to colorize the winter’s gray

When you have written your poem, please post it to your blog, link back to dVerse, and link up your poem using Mr Linky.
Then leave a comment if you feel like it, comment, and be prepared to receive comments… you all know the drill.
Hello, welcome all to the bar, today I have stocked up with some guacamole, pico de gallo homemade tortilla chips, and plenty of margarita
Guacamole and chips and margarita for me please. This took me some time, whew.
Bjorn, this was poetic stretching on my part. Love the challenge and specially, adore the view of your spring season. Its a bit cool in the morning here but we are getting some rain and sunshine throughout the day. Thanks for hosting.
May is when Sweden is the most lovely.
I love a form! It’s such a good stretch. I’ll have a big fat margarita and a handful of chips, please!
Here is the Margarita, and chips are on the house
Thank you! and thank you for the great prompt.
I’ve written at least one of these, but it’s been a long time!
I had done it twice before… but it was a long time ago.
Cool prompt Bjorn — thanks for hosting. Gone for this afternoon, will pen something this evening.
I look forward to read… this is is a good prompt especially for those of us who sometimes breathe in tetrameter.
What a great adventure Bjorn! Fun challenge, but I think I got one… 🙂✌🏼❤️
Hello Bjorn and All. Your food and drink offerings sound yummy. May I have some please. Make it a double Margarita, I feel like being a double-fisted drinker today. Will link up later with a poem to this form, which sounds both challenging and rewarding.
you can have a double or even a pitcher if you like… I look forward to your offering.
Thank you, and Cheers, my friend. Still formulating on it…
Hi Björn and all. A Margarita and those lovely munchies would make a delightful treat while I ponder this form. I may not post until tomorrow.
It might need some pondering… (I do recommend writing the embedded poem first)
Just seeing this, but that is what I did. 😊 And that made it go faster, I imagine.
That is what I first did too.
The moment I saw this prompt, I knew I had to try it 😀 the form is irresistible. Guacamole and chips for me too please. And thank you so much for guiding me 🙂 I have added the last stanza. Happy Thursday! 💝💝
Guacamole and chips coming up
Loved your Constanza. It has such pleasing imagery. This poetic form has a sweet melody to it. Would love to try it out.
The view from your window is heavenly. 🙂
Not really my window… but not too far from where I live.
That is such a lovely pic! I love the challenge, though counting syllables ties me in knots. Chips and guacamole for me, too early for a margarita!
Chips and Guacamole coming up
Thanks, Björn.
Thanks so much, Björn. A fun poetry form of a first for me. Thanks for the intro. I just posted it on Mr. Linky.
And Margaritas you say… Haven’t had one in ages. Thanks, it’s Friday I will have one, please. Thanks. And guacamole too. yum. Fantastic!
My Margaritas are quite strong… 🙂
p.s. Beautiful image of your spring. That is some spring!
Well that seemed like a hard one! 🙂
Lovely spring photo – I needed it as a prompt as well. Nice to be reminded that even though t’s almost winter here spring will be along again soon.
Spring is my favorite season
Whew! Tough challenge, Bjorn. Mine is at: