Oh bloodless lucid world, O my life
I release you to the bright vapours!
Let the air slip on my voice tonight
Maurya Simon ~ Last word
Hello Poets one and all – As we are nearing our summer break, it means a hiatus, a (musical) rest, and dare I say – a silence in the foundry of our wordsmithing!
My thoughts then turned to consider the value of words– how we poets and writers love, collect and utilize them and yet Pauli Murray’s “Words” surely apply in the day to day :-
“We are spendthrifts with words,
We squander them,
Toss them like pennies in the air–
Arrogant words,
Angry words,
Cruel words,
Comradely words,
Shy words tiptoeing from mouth to ear.
But the slowly wrought words of love
and the thunderous words of heartbreak–
Those we hoard.”
And so those words that are spoken with the knowing last breath we might expect to be momentous, profound, insightful. Quite often they are mundane, sometimes witty though Dannie Abse doubts the validity of “Last Words”
“…The last recorded words too
of real kings, real queens, all the famous dead,
are but pithy pretences, quotable fictions
composed by anonymous men decades later,
never with ready notebooks at the bed.
Most do not know who they are
when they die or where they are, country or town,
nor which hand on their brow. Some clapped-out actor may
imagine distant clapping, bow, but no real queen
will sigh, ‘Give me my robe, put on my crown…”
Even so I enjoyed William Matthews’ poem “Last Words” in which he gathers together some famous utterances:-
“It wasn’t Oscar Wilde who said, “Die, my dear
doctor, that’s the last thing I shall do”
but Lord Palmerston. Wilde said “Either this wall-
paper goes or I do”. William Pitt said
“Oh my country, How I leave my country!”
or in an alternate version, “I think
I could eat one of Bellamy’s veal pies”
Everyone dies alone, according to
the tough guy swagger though none who made it
into Bartlett’s did. Gather witnesses…”
Now for today’s Poetics prompt….
….Select ONE phrase from these famous departing words
- “All those moments will be lost in time, like tears in rain” -Roy Batty, Blade Runner
- “My battery is low and it’s getting dark” – Mars rover ‘Opportunity’
- “A certain butterfly is already on the wing.” Vladimir Nabokov
- “I must go in for the fog is rising” Emily Dickinson
- “Ah! The times were good! It was I who was so unhappy”. Sophie Arnould, French operatic soprano
- “My anchor is well cast, and my ship, though weather-beaten, will outride the storm” Samuel Hopkins, theologian
- “Go on, get out! Last words are for fools who haven’t said enough.” Karl Marx
Then using your chosen phrase:-
- Write a ‘deathbed’ poem of your own imagination (time and place optional!)
- It does not have to pertain to the author of your chosen words but can do
- You could include backstory, personality, remembrances, other people present
- Make it sad, funny, sudden, expected, personal or remote
- read Billy Collins’ “Deathbeds” poem – it sets all sorts of scenes
Your poem may take any form and that includes a prose poem
OR (for those who like an extra challenge)
Write in elegiac stanzas i.e quatrains with the rhyme scheme ABAB written in iambic pentameter.
N.B Remember to cite the author of those last words if you use it within your poem or as title. Alternately you could cite it as epigraph
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Mr Linky below. Then go visiting other contributors as that is half the enjoyment of our dVerse gatherings.
This was a wonderful challenge Laura – deathbed poems coming up. Thank you for hosting!!!
so glad this touched a poetry nerve Grace – I shall enjoy hosting this last Poetics of mine before the holiday
Hello poets – this evening in the UK we have lovely warm sunshine from a Spanish plume so the bar is open for tequila sunrise or whatever takes your fancy – I look forward to reading your ‘last words’ too
Loved the prompt, Laura! ❤️ I am excited to read everyone’s responses! Happy Tuesday 🙂
it shows in your poem ❤
❤️❤️❤️
hi Laura
hi Poets
loved the prompt
mint tea and a soak in the bath required before reading
thanks rog
coming right up – that sounds so relaxing!
last orders for the UK – this barrista is back tomorrow evening for some more last words
Fascinating prompt Laura, love it! Thank you for hosting… 👍🏼🙂✌🏼❤️
my pleasure – I’ve left you a query in my comment Rob
Thank you Laura, I need a whiskey after that poem, I did love that Billy Collins poem, isn’t he fab?
Yes! Collins is indeed fab – am liking his poetry more and more. Here’s a whisky for your excellent poem and the way you used Marx’s last words
I love that quote, thank yo again Laura, cheers 🙂
Ideal prompt: it provides some very concrete content but leaves open so many directions to take it.
pleased to hear that – thank you
Laura, I loved all the poems you shared. Such a wonderful prompt…I went for a fun take.
thank you for your appreciation and for joining in with some rather dark fun!
You are welcome and thank you.
Hello Laura and All. A day late and a dollar short but I made it. I very much appreciate the time you took to put this prompt together, Laura. I like where it took me.
it certainly touched a nerve Lisa – glad you made it even with a dollar short!
Cheers!
Laura, I loved working the prompt. After posting (late) peeked in on your unforgettable neat poem, poor butterflies dying pinned down, but then flying away to heaven. Best still, your writer will follow them, all ready to go.
But I am sorry not to be able to post my feelings because WordPress wants me too sign in again. I am already signed in although sometimes it asks for my password. Here it called me by name but when I push “sign in” it flew back to where I came from.
So I’m here instead.
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Jim – thank you taking time with such a lovely comment. I know bloggers and WPers sometimes can’t connect – I had the same problem you are describing from my iPad until I used the WordPress app
Thank you Laura, for hosting. It is a profound prompt to write to. 🙂
a profound topic that many shy away from. Glad you didn’t Kitty – thank you for joining in –
thank you to everyone for contributing to this prompt – these are my last words until late August
Hey guys. I clicked on Mr. Linky link and it said “Mr. Linky expiration 19.5 hours ago”. What’s up with that? Has anyone else had this problem?
Hi Ken – the Linky expires after 48 hours and then the next prompt takes place
Ah right. At least I’ll know next time. Thanks for letting me know Laura. 🙏😁
Hope it’s okay to post my my contribution here folks as Mister Linky doesn’t seem to be working. Or maybe it was only open for a few days?! https://kenhume31.wordpress.com/2022/06/17/low-battery-dverse-poetics-words-of-departure/?preview=true
Thanks, I really enjoyed working on this one! 🙏😁