Welcome to dVerse, the poets’ pub. Tonight, I want you to think about the elements. Not our modern elements laid out so beautifully in the Periodic Table – no – I want you to think about the classical four elements – earth, air, fire and water.

In the west, thinking about these four elements can be traced back to Ancient Greece. Philosophers debated the fundamental make-up of the world, and in around 450 BC the Sicilian philosopher Empedocles suggested there were four elements. Thinking around these became complex and sophisticated. They had specific characteristics – air was hot and wet, fire was hot and dry; earth was cold and dry, water was cold and wet(!).

These elements don’t only appear in the Western tradition. Buddhist thinkers recognised four elements. Hindu philosophers added in “ākāśa, vyom, or śūnya (space or zero) or (aether or void)” – an element beyond the senses of touch, smell, taste or sight. The four elements were incorporated into the Islamic science tradition – in fact, they seem to have been acknowledged across Eurasia, and it’s probably impossible to say where or how this thinking originated. Trade routes across the continents spread ideas as well as physical goods.

The four elements were important in medicine. The four humours (yellow bile: fire, black bile: earth, blood: air, and phlegm: water) had to be balanced for health, through diet and activity. We still use them today in astrology. I’m a Taurus, an earth sign. What sign are you?

Tonight, I want you to pick an element and write a poem inspired by it. Think about what it means to you. Earth is dark and dirty, yes, but it’s the element that everything from daisies to sequoias springs from. Air is a gentle breeze and the hurricane that destroys. Fire is comforting on a winter night, but we’ve seen the horror of forest fires. Water makes up 70% of our bodies, it’s essential to life – and yet we pollute it as if it’s an infinite resource.
I’ve chosen four short poems, one for each element – as additional inspiration.
Earth:
Soil-Song
I give what ne’er was mine-
To every seed the power
Of stem and leaf and flower,
Of fruit or fragrance fine;
And take what others loathe-
Of death the foulest forms,
Wherewith to feed my worms,
And thus the world reclothe.
Air:
Vortex
As the wind unscatters me
Spindle hurricanes unwind
Direction from my horizontal eye
Blow down the ocean’s fences
And approach my wreckless remnant
Bones bedenizened by birds:
Or contrive a moment from
Whatever sheaf of breath remains
To edge a word along a wind-left wall.
Fire:
After The Fires, Give Us This Day
After The Fires, Give Us This Day-
In the orgasmic space
Frenzied infernos raging
Billowing smoke, flying mangled zinc
Glowing embers, charred walls
Wailing sirens and weeping women
Left homeless,
Now roaming amidst floating soot
A mother rakes the tangled debris
Of what was once her shack called home
Sobbing she sifts through ash
And scattered remains, a shoe here
A crumpled cutlery and torched cups
Between her and now
That’s all her remains
Her only hope-tomorrow
By Makhanda Senzangakhona/
Water:
old pond…..
a frog leaps in
water’s sound
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Delighted to welcome you to the bar tonight! Hot and cold drinks and poems on tap! It’s raining here in England, after a bit of a drought, so everything is looking refreshed and happy.
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Hi Sarah! Glad to read that in your part of the world, it is raining! It is hot here in Ontario, so a cold drink is welcome. Thanks for hosting this interesting prompt.
Lots of ice for you tonight!
Thank you!
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Wonderful prompt, Sarah. Thank you for hosting. I’m pleased to hear you’re finally getting some rain!
Hello again! I added some artwork of my own to my entry.
Great prompt, Sarah!
Hi Sarah! Wonderful prompt. You are so right about Hindu philosophy …it is said that the human body is composed of five elements.
A cup of tea, please, to keep me going.
One tea coming up!
Thank you!
Digging this!
–Shay
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Thanks for hosting, Sarah. I managed to have some time to write on this beautiful day. A fantabulous prompt!
I’m so glad you did!
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Hi Sarah
hi poets
what a great prompt as I sit here listening to the first rain over my home in two months. the element of water called me.
thanks rog
Thank you Sarah, for the inspiring intro and poems … and the way into releasing ‘my mother’s molecules’ nearly thirty years on.
I’ll have a stiff whisky as a libation to the gods of Time and Place, and maybe some cocoa with marshmallows on top as a celebration of yet more letting go. Before I fall into bed and a deep sleep. It’s been a long day :-O
Blessings to you all; may the elements dance gracefully with us.
Thank you for your beautiful poem. Rest well.
Great prompt Sarah, you’ve put a lot of thought and effort into this one!
Thank you!
Been a drought here in New England, hope we get some of that weather soon.
Thank you for hosting Sarah. I loved loved loved this prompt! So inspiring, thank you. It pushed me to write in an easy stream of consciousness. It took me to my favorite place — deep into wilderness. 🙂✌🏼❤️
Couldn’t resist writing to this prompt but unfortunately my first link didn’t take so sorry, I’m listed twice on Mr. Linky. It’s the second one that works.
I’ve just entered for the first time! I wrote a poem called Rain in St. james’s Park and hope it fulfils the brief for one of the four elements. It is about the element of water. I look forward to reading all the other poems. 💕
Welcome to dVerse!
Thank you Sarah 🙏😊
Good morning Sarah and dVerse poets one and all! A short poem from me this morning. It’s overcast here and we should be getting some more rain after yesterday’s short burst. Our garden is so lush it hasn’t really been affected by the drought , although the rest of the village was very dry. A good reason for not mowing the grass and letting the nettles grow!
Some whiskey please Sarah, a water based drink, lol. what a delightful prompt. Down here in my corner we are experiencing winter’s storms, and though we will not have any more rain than average, it is coming in shorter periods of time so heavier rains and lots of flooding etc. I’d be happy to share some rain if i could.
The water of life, I believe! I think there’s lots of people would take some of your rain.
With pleasure 🙂
I picked air, so I’m going to have to go with a carbonated seltzer and a frothy whipped chocolate mousse for dessert.
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Thanks Sarah, The four elements will always inspire.
Thanks Sarah, for a lovely theme. 🙂
I realize I’m late, that the Mr Linky expired–but I love the prompt, and hopefully it won’t hurt to include my link here 🙂 https://hourglasspoetry.com/2022/08/19/water-element-dverse-poets/