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Hello poet, friends,
When going through some ideas for the prompt I stumbled upon a rare form I think we have never done. It is called the bref double. It is a French form consisting of 3 quatrains and a couplet, making it a 14-line poem. Like a sonnet but certainly not a sonnet.

First of all, there is no requirement for a meter, though sources say that all lines should be of similar lengths. Secondly, the content is free, meaning that there is no requirement for a conclusion (or volta), and when it comes to rhymes it seems to be almost free as well. The sources are many and not always consistent.
What I have gathered so far:
It is built up from three end rhymes (a, b, and c)
It also includes unrhymed lines (x)
Rhymes a and b are used once in each of the quatrains and in the couplet
Rhymes c is used as end lines in each of the quatrains.
This would make these possible rhyme schemes
axbc-axbc-axbc-ab
abxc-abxc-abxc-ab
…
This is consistent with Robert Brewer of Reader’s Digest and seems to be the most referenced definition (in Englih)
Since this is a very rare form in English there are many sources that may say differently so I really want this prompt to also include a little bit of research (if you want to). If anyone knows French it might be possible to find more.
It is also very hard to find good examples of bref double in English (I am sure there are those in the community that knows more), so please take part in the discussion and send me examples and comments on what this form should be.
I wrote my first for the Poetics prompt yesterday
Gathering Dust
She was a hoarder, mom
saving pebbles and coins
random pictures and art.
collected, gathered, saved
With her glass in my palm
I recall the layers of dust
onto maps and the charts
for the stuff that she craved
Now in heaven, no qualms
she stuffs her infinite space
with goods filling her carts
happy now in her grave.
Dead, my mother is calm
never with things, she’ll part.
When you have written your bref on your blog and linked back to dVerse, link up to Mr. Linky below using the reference directly back to your blog entry.
If you feel like you want to have some further inspiration I do not mind the topic of your poem being dark and gothic.
Then read and comment. I hope we will find plenty of good poetry in this rather free form o poetry.
I might not have the time to write any entries myself as I will be going to a concert with Soweto Gospel Choir and will be home late so I will be coming in late to read your poem.
Hello dVersers! Bjorn can not open the pub, but will be around later to read and comment on everyone’s posts….so I’m happily stepping in!
Lillian, at the ready 🙂 And what beverage might I serve you today?
Hi Lillian. Hot chocolate and apple pie for me as its a foggy cold afternoon here.
mmmm…yes…the pub has a wonderful aroma tonight from the freshly baked apple pies! 🙂
I’m still on my way home… we will have to see how much reading I can do tonight…
Hi everyone! I hope you enjoy writing to this form. Thanks for introducing us to this form Bjorn.
Hello Grace, Bjorn will be around a bit later. I also enjoyed the new form!
Thank you for hosting Bjorn. I am a bit confused, but I will work it out after lunch — and participate. 🙂✌🏼❤️
errr… sorry — I mean Lil… oops 🫢
🙂
Good to see you Rob! Bjorn is out for a bit so I’m tending pub till he returns. He’ll be reading all the posts a bit later. It’s an interesting form to work with.
I think I cobbled together a bit’o sumpin’ sumpin’. ✌🏼😉
Hi Lillian and Grace. A very interesting prompt by Björn. A hot chocolate for me too, please.
Hot chocolate coming right up! Good to see you at the pub today!
Thanks.
Thank you for opening the pub, Lill, and thank you Björn, whenever you see this, for the prompt!
Good to see you at the pub, Merril. Any particular beverage for you tonight?
I’ll have coffee and some pie. 🙂
Thanks for hosting, Bjorn. I love the clip of the Gospel Choir. Hope you have a wonderful time!
I am on my way home now. They where truly amazing to see and hear
I am sure it was a great experience! Be safe!
I will have a tall glass of cider on ice and a warm soft pretzel!
Lill here, tending the pub for Bjorn. Cider and a pretzel coming right up!
Thank you very much! I tend to get lost in the a-b-c’s of poetry so I will pass on this prompt!
I understand…..sometimes I call the form prompts poetic sudokus! 🙂
Ha ha… maybe so. I tend to be too loose and free and my head just doesn’t wrap around form poetry it seems!
This form is actually very free for being a form
I saw that they I saw all the cross rhyming you did on your poem about your mother and was not sure I could navigate all that!
A Bjorn! You’re here to tend the pub? If so, I’ll bow out. My eyes are going cattywonkers right now…and time for more drops. GREAT prompt; i enjoyed the form.
I will try to respond from my phone – thank you so much for your help
If the concert was anything like the video, Björn, I know you had an enlivening time! Hallelujahs and Amen! Wish I’d been there. Looking forward to tackling this new form you’ve introduced us to! 🙂
I think it was even better to be there- amazing artists
My daughter tells me they did some of the music for the Civilization video game. How ’bout that!
They have won the grammy four times.
I really want to try this.
thanks Bjorn and Lillian (K)
Well I really do need a whiskey now, a real challenge Bjorn and I’m not sure I did it justice but it was good to push this. I Hope you enjoyed the Soweto Gospel Choir.
Whiskey coming up.. the Soweto Gospel Choir was amazing
🙂