“The quilt/has tessellated all of it./Arranged like faithful paladins,/are half a dozen bits and scraps”
Abigail Parry ~ The Quilt
Patchworking or Pieceworking is redolent of hard times when women joined pieces of cloth together for clothing or quilts or rugs. In biblical times Jacob had a coat of many colours that drew the ire of his brothers whilst Dolly Parton sang of the ridicule she suffered wearing her stitched rags. In this extract from “Stencilled Memories” Lorna Dee Cervantes uses patchworking as metaphor for her home life:
“…You patched together a blanket of us,
sewed together the mismatched and lopped
off edges. And anger grew a twin, ripped
through the bermuda grass, something stubborn
and determined: Me, in a leather patchwork skirt,
the bitter lemon song returning to its beginning
over and over on the Howdie Doody phonograph,
a handful of bandages, a faceful of ghosts
delivered from the mirrors. How did you stand it?
All of it. Us crunching through your set life,
kids scuffling through the mounds of leave.
Always making do. Your sunshine eyes,
those stencilled memories where
we still live.”
This piecing together also has something in common with the Mockingbirds as Thom Gunn writes in Patch Work:
Cento in Latin means ‘patchwork’ but unlike the cento poem we are going to be sewing together pieces of prose to make a poem:
- Choose TWO books of prose
- Pick ONE page from each
- Extract SHORT LINES from each page*
- ALTERNATE them to make a poem
- Use italics and plain font to differentiate the text sources
- Use one of the source lines or a combination as TITLE
Stick to these Guidelines:
- DO NOT ADD ANYTHING of your own to the lines
- You may use enjambement
- You could split the poem into stanzas
- CITE YOUR SOURCES with author, book title and page number
Note: The patchwork poem will not rhyme but you may find a meter
Like the Mockingbird, half the fun is seeing just how disparate works can come together.
*short lines mean you are not taking too much from the source in plagiarism
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Mr Linky below (by linking up, you are effectively agreeing to abide by the guidelines.) Then go visiting other contributors as that is half the enjoyment of our dVerse gatherings.
kim881 said:
Good evening poets and thank you so much for this prompt, Laura. You had me going through the book on my shelves, and now I want to read them all again! I have tried my hand at patchworking with material, but patchworking words has been so much fun.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
glad it got you perusing Kim – I’ll be over to read later
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Hello Poets – the bar is open for hot drinks, spirited drinks and snacks – especially cocktails since that is surely the alcoholic version of patchworking!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I went to my bookshelves and found two books I would love to read again… and amazing how much came back to me just from two random pages.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
so apt for the ‘librarian’ to be dusting off a couple of books 😉
paeansunplugged said:
Love the excerpts you have shared, Laura.
My home is under renovation and I laid hands on the first two books I could find. As I rummage through them, I would love a double shot of espresso to piece random lines together.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
that randomness will save you a lot of time – but time enough to enjoy your expresso!
paeansunplugged said:
Thank you!
revivedwriter said:
What an interesting prompt!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thank you – I look forward to reading yours
Kathy at writingpresence said:
What a brilliant prompt – thank you… I look forward to reading what others make of this challenge. I’ll have a pot-pourri tea and a selection of miniature baklavas dripping with honey please! And have some yourself, do!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
definitely will join in with the tea – and have never tasted baklavas before – then over to read your poem
sanaarizvi said:
Loved the prompt, Laura! 😀 I will be back in the morning to read and catch up with other patchwork poems. Quite late here. xx
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I am not far behind you re needing my sleep soon – goodnight
rothpoetry said:
A very interesting idea. Thank you for hosting!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
double thanks Dwight
azurea20 said:
Me gusta mucho el poema que has escrito. En los talleres de escritura a veces proponen lo mismo que tú explicas y pueden salir preciosos poemas.Un poema patchwork. Interesante.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Gracias. Entendí la mayor parte de lo que habías escrito porque estoy tratando de aprender español (esto fue escrito con la ayuda de un traductor en línea)
msjadeli said:
Hello Laura and All. Late to the party but here. Cannot wait to read what everyone came up with.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
you were keen and busy with your two Lisa – what a great reader you are too
msjadeli said:
Laura, I sincerely appreciate your creative prompt. Had a lot of enjoyment with the whole process.
Gillena Cox said:
Luv. Luv this challenge. Its almost evening time and i just had coffee and a 2 lemon bread slices. Will stay up for the Carnival specials on TV🥁 Thanks for an awesome prompt Laura.
Much❤love
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I like the sound of lemon bread Gillena. Thanks for joining in – enjoy the Carnival specials!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Bar is staying open whilst I go for some nightly shut eye – help yourself. Back tomorrow
Rob Kistner said:
Thank you for hosting Laura. I chose the Tao Te Ching by Lao Tsu, and the Supernatural Stoies of the Abenaki, an Indigenous peoples of the Northeastern Woodlands of Canada and the United States. They are an Algonquian-speaking …
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thanks for joining in Rob
kittysverses said:
Thank you for hosting, Laura. I never thought I’d do this prompt, but I must say, I enjoyed patch-working, thanks again, Laura. 🙂
Laura Bloomsbury said:
your poem shows that enjoyment!
M Jay Dixit said:
Hi, Laura, thanks for hosting and providing us with such a creative and awesome prompt!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
your two books mirrored so well
SelmaMartin said:
I’d never done that before. Thanks Laura. This was so fun! And I will remain wowed for the rest of the weekend. Blessings to all. Fantastic prompt. xoxo
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I do hope you will have another go with some prose choices Selma
SelmaMartin said:
Oh, oh. I will try.
SelmaMartin said:
Thanks, Laura. My bad. I allowed myself another go at it as per your kind words. I think it worked. Thanks. Here it is for ease: https://selmamartin.com/redoto-right-a-patchwork-poem-flipping-it-over-surpassed-everything/ Bless you.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
a great V-W mix – Selma – thanks for the redo!
pvcann said:
What a creative way to play, thank you Laura for the crafty method.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
and so well-crafted!
memadtwo said:
A very interesting prompt Laura. Thanks! (K)
Laura Bloomsbury said:
yours flew off the page!