Good evening, morning or afternoon, depending where you are on the planet, and welcome to the dVerse Poets Pub Poetics Tuesday. I’m Kim and I’m writinginnorthnorfolk.com. I recently came across this lovely poem by John Clare, whose works are well known for his admiration of nature:
The Thrush’s Nest Within a thick and spreading hawthorn bush That overhung a molehill large and round, I heard from morn to morn a merry thrush Sing hymns to sunrise, and I drank the sound With joy; and, often an intruding guest, I watched her secret toils from day to day— How true she warped the moss, to form a nest, And modelled it within with wood and clay; And by and by, like heath-bells gilt with dew, There lay her shining eggs, as bright as flowers, Ink-spotted over shells of greeny blue; And there I witnessed in the sunny hours A brood of nature’s minstrels chirp and fly, Glad as the sunshine and the laughing sky.
Thrush image by Vincent van Salinge on Unsplash
I love the way he describes the thrush singing and building her nest, and the eggs, and thought it would be fun to write poems about other creatures that build homes, such as nests, dens and burrows. No birds, as Clare’s example is perfect. Think insects (bees and their hives, spiders and their webs, or termites and their enormous towers with hidden functions), rodents, and larger mammals such the hammock-building great apes and beavers.
Image by Mathias Elle on Unsplash
If you want to write about something unusual, you might have to undertake a little bit of research – it will be worth it! A good place to see animals’ homes for yourselves is in any programme by my favourite British broadcaster, biologist, natural historian and author, David Attenborough.
You can write a sonnet, like Clare’s, if you wish, or any other form of your choice. It must, however, focus on a creature building its home.
If you are new, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poets’ work, we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
kim881 said:
Welcome to the dVerse Poets’ Pub’s Poetics this second Thursday in May. The weather seems to be improving; the sun was out today and I got out for a walk. There wee rabbits in the paddock and lots of birds singing. I hope you enjoy today’s prompt and look forward to reading your poems about animals’ homes. The barrels have been changed, fridge stocked and food is ready. The bar is open!
kim881 said:
There were rabbits… Not so wee either, some of them are really big. Food is plentiful around here.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I did enjoy the prompt, and it reminded me of a walk we took the first of May.
kim881 said:
I’m glad you like the prompt,. There are so many animals busily building at the moment, and I thought it would be a shame to miss the opportunity.
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Cris said:
Wonderful prompt, Kim! Nature is always such an inspiration.
kim881 said:
Thank you, Cris. I went out for a walk this afternoon and saw so many rabbits in the paddock by the bridge, heard lots of birdsong, and just felt like the world is coming alive again.
msjadeli said:
Hello Kim and All. One of the most familiar animal homes to me are the chipmunk’s, but in my research for the poem I learned quite a bit more about them. It’s just above 40F, grey, and rainy here for days now, and it’s making me cold and cranky. Please, Kim, will you make me a tall mug of hot rooibos tea with a shot of Baileys?
kim881 said:
Coming right up, Lisa!
msjadeli said:
Thanks and Cheers!
rothpoetry said:
Thanks for hosting, Sarah. Did I understand that this promt includes any thing but not birds? Should be a fun challenge.
rothpoetry said:
OOPs… Kim, not Sarah. Sorry.
kim881 said:
Hi Dwight! It’s Kim hosting today. I believe Sarah will be back at the end of the month. No birds for this prompt, I only used the thrush as an example, otherwise we’d have an awful lot of nests!
rothpoetry said:
Yes, I caught that too late! sorry. OK. you are right bird nests would be the easy go-to for a poem. Thank you.
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Kathy at writingpresence said:
Oh no! Having decided to be transgressive I included a demolition dinosaur … with a visiting Blackbird for good measure…
I agree that John Clare can’t be improved as a nest-writer and his egg descriptions are a delight. Do you know the John Clare Society which holds a Festival in Helpston his birthplace) on the weekend closest to his birthday July 13th?
No bird nests were destroyed in the building of my 2016 poem, although I fear many earthworms were flattened by the big-footed Allosaur.
Thanks for hosting such an abundant theme, Kim. Are (marzipan) caterpillars on the menu?
kim881 said:
I can look behind the bar for you, Kathy. And thank you for joining us!
M Jay Dixit said:
Hi, Kim. Interesting prompt and lovely poem! Thanks for hosting.
kim881 said:
Thanks for joining us, Jay!
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Melissa Lemay said:
I wrote a sonnet about crocodiles minus home and then realized I forgot the assignment. I’ll take a coffee.🤣
kim881 said:
Hot coffee coming up, with a biscuit on the side.
Rob Kistner said:
Thank you for hosting Kim. I wrote about an amazing love story.
kim881 said:
Thank you for bringing love into it, Rob, I’m up and about this morning, ready to read and comment.
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taurusingemini said:
Birds surely are, more excellent architects than humans, because they are driven, by the instincts to, build the prettiest nests to, attract the females to mate with them, and that is, the, only way, they have, of, getting their genes, passed down, to the next generations to, come, that’s why, they all, work their, hardest, to build the best nests, to, attract, the females.
kim881 said:
I have enjoyed watching birds building nests in our garden, and am amazed at how industrious they are. Nests are beautiful and different for every species. But other animals and insects also produce beautiful structures, such as bees and spiders, as well as robust ones, such as beavers. I think humans took most of their architectural ideas from wildlife.
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sarahsouthwest said:
Lovely prompt, Kim. I went underground, and I’m not 100% sure I kept to the brief, but I did write a sort-of-sonnet, so, you know. I like the rooks’ nests. For such bright birds they are rubbish nest builders.
kim881 said:
I’ll be over to read soon.
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pvcann said:
Thank you Kim, a wonderful thing is nature and a great source of creative writing juice, I went with free-verse and swallows.
kim881 said:
I look forward to reading your poem, Paul.
pvcann said:
🙂 Thank you Kim
poetisatinta said:
I love that poem too Kim great prompt 😊
kim881 said:
Thank you. I’m looking forward to reading more poems in a few minutes.
poetisatinta said:
sorry but I must have missed the bit where you said no birds 🙊🙊
kim881 said:
No problem, you’re not the only one. Poetics is pretty flexible and so am I. 🙂
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Mother Wintermoon said:
Great prompt, Kim! And thank you for emphasizing “Read and comment on other poets’ work, we all come here to have our poems read…” dVerse is place for all participants to feel valued and visible. Reciprocity gives it life.
kim881 said:
Thanks so much for joining us and for reading the whole prompt. You are right about us wanting participants to feel valued and visible.
Mother Wintermoon said:
❤️🙏❤️
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Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
OOps, apologies, posted my link to the wrong prompt. (29 in your list here.) Please remove.
kim881 said:
Will do, Rosemary.
kim881 said:
Done!
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Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
Thanks!
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kenhume31 said:
Hi Kim, thanks for the interesting prompt! 🙏😁 Just posted the link to my contribution over at Mr. Linky there. Hope that ye enjoy the read! 🤞🙏😁📖
kim881 said:
I’m sure we will Ken!
whimsygizmo said:
Wonderful prompt, Kim. I’m gonna try my hand at it today. 🙂
kim881 said:
I look forward to it!
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Mother Wintermoon said:
Oh darn. I felt encouraged and inspired by you to give your great prompt a whirl, but it ended after I wrote my prompt poem. 🙁
kim881 said:
I’ll be over to read shortly. I’m sure I’ll love it.
Mother Wintermoon said:
You are so kind! I wrote it, but then I saw it ended, so I didn’t post it. I’ll post it for the next OLN with a credit and link to your prompt. 😊
kim881 said:
I look forward to it. 🙂
Mother Wintermoon said:
I did your prompt for OLN. 🙏
kim881 said:
I’ll check it out!
Mother Wintermoon said:
🩶🩶🩶
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