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Here we are at the very end of November with a final flourish of a farewell to Autumn and a beckoning wave to the oncoming winter in the Northern hemisphere. This extract from “November for Beginners” by Rita Dove encapsulates the feeling many of us have at this seasonal cusp:-
“Snow would be the easy
way out—that softening
sky like a sigh of relief
at finally being allowed
to yield. No dice.
We stack twigs for burning
in glistening patches
but the rain won’t give.
So we wait, breeding
mood, making music
of decline. We sit down
in the smell of the past
and rise in a light
that is already leaving….”
Listen to the crisp, dry imagism in Amy Lowell’s “November”:
“The vine leaves against the brick walls of my house,
Are rusty and broken.
Dead leaves gather under the pine-trees,
The brittle boughs of lilac-bushes
Sweep against the stars.
And I sit under a lamp
Trying to write down the emptiness of my heart…”
And for many of us that same tired, barrenness effects our Muse and so for today’s MTB prompt, we are writing one of the most unrestrained, undemanding poetry forms – The Cherita. Developed by ai li on the 22 June 1997 it continues to garner submissions year on year from poets who like this form.
“cherita
is
the breath
of
a story
made concrete”
copyright © ai li 2021
Form: the Cherita is a consecutive poetry form in three stanzas: a single line; a couplet; a tercet
[Rules are that it can be written solo or by up to three partners as well as being reversed in various combinations (called a cherita terbalik )] BUT for this prompt :-
- Write your Cherita as a
mirrored/reflected 2 part form - 1;2;3; and a second part of 3;2;1 line stanzas
Style:
- No descriptive title – so title yours as either ‘Untitled’ or ‘A Cherita’
- there should not be any rhymes
- there are no syllable restrictions
- line lengths are your own discretion
- centred on the page (optional)
Content: The Cherita effectively tells a story – concise but imagist, as in a vignette.
Your reflected form makes some connection between the two parts
Approach: write in a semi meditative state with minimal editing
Helpful links:
Cherita knowhow – some examples
So once you have posted your poem according to the topic’s guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello, and good evening from a cold Sweden… we have had snow and cold for a week, and it’s not even December. Hope you are all well, but I need to head to bed soon.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Your weather front has hit us here – goodnight to you Bjorn
kim881 said:
What a lovely simple form, Laura! I haven’t tried writing a cherita before and I really enjoyed this prompt.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thank you Kim – once I had the first line, the rest followed.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Kim. I realized we did it once at toads… I found this from you
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
kim881 said:
I forgot about that!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
This is the one I wrote
for a brief moment
at armistice
rifles stayed silent
while soldiers listened
to whisper of quills
bleeding ink onto paper
Ali Grimshaw said:
This resonates.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Good evening from a cold UK – I’ve intermittent internet but the bar is open for hot food and drinks –
I look forward for reading your cheritas
Grace said:
I love the micro poem format Laura. Hi from the cold and freezing Ontario. Thank you for hosting and giving us excellent examples.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
it suited your writing so well Grace
Laura Bloomsbury said:
PLEASE NOTE – the mirroring of the reverse Cherita is more a reflection than an inverse!
Melissa Lemay said:
I took it to mean that we flipped it around like a mirror cinquain.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
the edit should make it clearer now 😉
kim881 said:
Bjorn reminded me that I have indeed written cherita before – I had forgotten it was five years ago!
Melissa Lemay said:
I really like this form, Laura. Thanks for introducing it to me. I think I’m going to take a nap.😴 Hope everyone is well and staying warm.❄️
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I wrote a Cherita back in 2019 but not for dVerse – the subject was ‘the wind’
a brisk breeze brushes off sultry summer from my skin
through graveyard grasses it stirs to a tempest
old bones confined to rest listen for the last trumpet
brown butterflies fling themselves like tumbleweed
half torn from its moorings, a spider’s flag, filigreed
– in intermittent lulls we re-compose – in opposition
poetisatinta said:
Hi thanks for introducing this new form to me – its been freezing here in North Wales all day but no snow as yet 🥶
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Your ⛄️ will come – back tomorrow
poetisatinta said:
Haha I know 😊
rog said:
hi all
wow another new one for me.
really enjoyed giving it a go.
night all bed time hear in England catch up soon
rog
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Me too – need to seek my warm bed – look forward to reading yours
rog said:
🌙
merrildsmith said:
Hi Laura and All. Thank you for hosting.
I know of the form, but I don’t think I’ve written one before.
I hope I did it correctly. I will read more tomorrow.
Rob Kistner said:
Interesting form Laura, should prove to be fun my friend. Thank you for hosting. 👍🏼🙂✌🏼🫶🏼🍁🍷
Rob Kistner said:
You can take my link titled “Autumn Wine” down, please Laura. The link titled “Untitled” is the correct link. Thank you my friend. ✌🏼
Laura Bloomsbury said:
ok Rob –
ren said:
also a cherita virgin! can cross that off my list.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
crossed off!
Frewin55 said:
I had not heard of the form but hardly surprising being a poetry newbie! We are in the Algarve for two weeks and I am almost sorry to have missed the first snow in Britain – here we had wind and rain last night but it is barely cool…
I see you have gone to bed Laura so I will slip mine through the Linky letterbox…
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I got yours after all – missing the Fall too!
pvcann said:
Laura thank you for – for me – something completely new and glad of the opportunity.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
and it suited you well Paul
memadtwo said:
Laura–one of my links is wrong (Medusa)–not sure what happened, but can you remove it?
Thanks, and thanks for the prompt.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
all done!
memadtwo said:
Thanks!
M Jay Dixit said:
Hi, Laura, thanks for hosting. I enjoyed writing to the prompt (also learned a new form so thanks again!) I hope you’ll like my poem.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
a very nice Cherita, Jay
zipferlake said:
That was such a nice challenge! Thanks, enjoyed it and still enjoy catching up with all your poems.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
and thank you for joining in
Helen said:
A taste of winter this morning … an inch or two of snow. Enough to make roads and sidewalks slippery. I am not ready. Thanks for an intriguing challenge, Laura. I have vowed a return to Australia in December 2024, friends patiently awaiting.
Helen said:
Apologies. I totally blew your wonderful challenge. No mirror effect for this ‘sorry excuse for a poet.’ Twenty lashes.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
on the contrary, Helen – your reversal reflects the first part and is not a mirror so full marks
(the confusion for some was taking the mirroring literally – I must be more careful how I phrase things)
brazannemuse said:
I have had a go Laura, been trying to learn all the different forms of poetry over the past few months and this is another new one. Took me a while to get my head into what I understood the form to be…. but now think maybe I have been too poetic….?
Thank you for introducing to this form, now ready to read others
💞Suzanne
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thank you for joining in Suzanne – I think its going to be something for all of us to try out again