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We can survive weeks without food, days without water, but only minutes without air. No organic life lives without it, but how often do any of us pay any attention to it? Frank Tassone, here, host of another Haibun Monday, where we write prose and haiku together in Basho’s famous form. Today, let’s talk about breath!
Autonomic, and yet subject to our control, breath provides us with the infusion of oxygen our metabolism requires for cellular respiration. We cannot release the energy our food provides us without it. Breath provides us with release from the carbon dioxide waste of our respiration. Necessary indeed, but our breath offers us so much more: a means of mindfulness—nonjudgemental awareness.
Mira and I have meditated for years. We learned how important our breath is in developing that concentration that stills the mind. Anyone who has ever sat in meditation understands the eruption of thinking that arises the moment one begins. Whenever that tsunami of thoughts arises, I focus my awareness on my breath. Breathing in, breathing out. Recollections of that class where students did not complete in-class assignments? Breathe in, breathe out. The chatter of downstairs neighbors? Breathe in, breathe out. Memories of awakening to my mother screaming my name? Breathe in, breathe out. As the thoughts arise, I let them come, returning to the breath. As those thoughts fall, I let them go, returning to the breath. Such experience served me well when Mira and I began to sit at our local zendo, Empty Hand.
Even if you have not meditated, you have likely felt the effect of taking a deep breath. How many of us have taken one to compose ourselves while upset? Or to reinvigorate ourselves when we’re tired, or fatigued after a spurt of activity? How good does it feel to fill our chests with fresh air, and to let that air out?
Haijin have also reflected on the significance of breathing and breath:
Breath
They emphasise how important deep breathing is in times of stress. Breathe deep down into your belly. Breathe in through your nose and out through your mouth. Mid-argument I inhale—holding it, holding it. Resisting the final word.
silence
Joanna Ashwell, Barnard Castle, United Kingdom. Courtesty of Drifting Sands, 3/30/23
the slow swoop
of owl wings
Battle Cry
I tilt my head left to right to left, then forward and back to forward. Roll it around. Shrug my shoulders down, then up, down, then up. Fingers squeeze, stretch, squeeze, stretch. Rotate wrists — bend at the knees, bend, stand and bend. Now at the waist, touch my toes, breathing in, breathing out. Shake it, shake it. Put on some jazz — the needle in the groove popping and crackling.
I settle in at my desk.
The pen is mightier . . . it’s so proclaimed. I touch the keys and set out to prove it.
Worldwide Love
Richard Grahn, from Longevity: Poems in the Key of Helen (2022) Red Moon Press
on the nightly news —
new species
A necessity of life, and a means to cultivate mindfulness: breath has it all. Today, let’s let it inspire us! Write your haibun alluding to breath, in any way you relate to it: breath itself, breathing, or just the act itself, to breathe.
New to haibun? The form consists of one to a few paragraphs of prose—usually written in the present tense—that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional/autobiographical. They may be preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.
New to dVerse? Here is what you do:
- Write a haibun that alludes to breath, breathing, or to breathe.
- Post it on your personal site/blog.
- Include a link back to dVerse in your post.
- Copy your link onto the Mr. Linky. (Reminder: Mr. Linky will close on February 3, 2024 at 3PM!)
- Remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
- Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work.
- Like and leave a comment below if you choose to do so.
- Have fun!
Frank J. Tassone said:
Good afternoon, poets! The Pub is open!
SelmaMartin said:
Thanks, Frank. Lovely prompt. Blessings.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello… I wrote something very quickly, somehow I feel that my haibun often becomes a bit of diary, and today I went to the gym which forced me to breathe quite a lot…
Frank J. Tassone said:
Haibun as diary was how Basho practiced the very form he created! He wrote the majority of his haibun on his famous journeys throughout Japan.
Great to see you make it out, Bjorn, as always!
kim881 said:
Good evening everyone and thanks for hosting, Frank. Like Bjorn, my haibun also reads like a diary entry! I look forward to reading other poets’ haibun. However, it’a our anniversary tomorrow and we are going away for the night, so I need to get to bed early. I’ll try to catch up soon.
Frank J. Tassone said:
Happy early anniversary, Kim!
kim881 said:
Thanks Frank!
dorahak said:
Happy Anniversary, Kim! Have a wonderful getaway tomorrow with your one and only 🙂 💖
kim881 said:
Thank you so much, Dora! This is where we are going: https://www.whitehorsebrancaster.co.uk/ We have been before, quite a few years ago.
dorahak said:
Idyllic! I can’t wait to see a poem or two bloom from it 🙂
rothpoetry said:
Thanks for hosting, Frank. Breathing is our life. Inspiration inhaled. Poetry exhaled, hopefully not to toxic!
Frank J. Tassone said:
Happy to see you hear, Dwight!
dorahak said:
Glad to see you hosting and for your prompt Frank! Wonderful how it sent me down an unexpected memory lane and brought up treasures I had almost forgotten. Thank you for that. As I finish it up, how about a large glass of iced tea?
Frank J. Tassone said:
One large glass of ice tea coming up!
dorahak said:
Thank you!
Frank J. Tassone said:
FYI: I tried to leave a comment on your blog. Even though I’m logged into WordPress, your site sent me a message that I’m not logged in.
Your haibun is beautiful. Sounds like Myra is a true anam cara, a soul friend!
dorahak said:
Thank you, Frank, she was special! Not sure what’s happening with the comments function. WordPress shenanigans!!
rog said:
hi Frank
hi poets
a hot chocolate would hit the spot.
the prompt fitted perfectly with my wonder out on sunday morning
thanks for the prompt
rog
Frank J. Tassone said:
One hot chocolate for you, sir! 😉
rog said:
Bottoms up cheers
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msjadeli said:
Hello Frank and All. Good topic to write a haibun about. Will walk the poets trail in a bit here. Happy Monday.
Frank J. Tassone said:
Happy you mae it, Lisa!
msjadeli said:
🙂
Mish said:
Thanks for hosting, Frank! Hello everyone. Great topic for a haibun though my muse must have been feeling heavy. Hopefully I lightened his load and he can breathe a bit easier. 🙂
Frank J. Tassone said:
🤣Let’s hope so! Happy to see you, Mish!
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pvcann said:
Many thanks for this prompt Frank, I’ve offered a confessional moment.
Ali Grimshaw said:
Frank,
Thank you for the poems and the prompt. I appreciated reading your reflections on meditation. I have found it a very worthy pursuit. I continue to learn so much about myself through meditation.
You inspired me to write a haibun. I think this might be my third. So, I am just an infant in this form.
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writingpresence said:
I’m coming a little late to the party, Frank – great prompt and a good summary of how and what to present.
I have been drinking cold tea while trying to dig out a Benediction I wrote at the outbreak of Covid in the UK. The actual haiku (within its essay = haibun… have i got it?) took only an instant by comparison.
A top-up on that tea – hot this time! -would be wonderful, before I slope off to bed… a meditation upon the breath would be even better and I know it’s my own job to clear a space (and clear a head) for that!
Salutations, at whatever time of day this reaches you.
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lesleyscoble said:
Thank you, Frank, for your breathtaking prompt. I’ve enjoyed it! I look forward to reading as many of the other poets’ poems as soon as I can. 😊🙏💕
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memadtwo said:
Thanks for the prompt Frank. (K)
writerravenclaw said: