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It’s the beginning of February, spring is poking its head around the corner of winter. It’s also Monday and, at the dVerse Poets Pub, time to write Prosery, the very short piece of prose that tells a story with a beginning, a middle and an end, in any genre of your choice. Welcome poets!
I’m Kim from writinginnorthnorfolk.com, and we are writing flash fiction with a limit of 144 words; an additional challenge is to hit 144 exactly. The special thing about Prosery is that we give you a complete line or two from a poem, which must be included somewhere in your story, within the 144-word limit.
For many years I have enjoyed novels and poetry by British writer Helen Dunmore, who is Yorkshire-born; like its tea, her writing is full of Yorkshire flavour. Dunmore began to write poems as a child, and has published nine collections of poetry.
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The lines I chose are from a poem called ‘City Lilacs’, from Glad of These Times (Bloodaxe Books, 2007), which contains a hint of spring, the changing season in a city’s ‘crack-haunted alleys’, where prostitutes ply their trade. The lilacs in the poem are also a metaphor for finding beauty in the unlikeliest of places, in city life’s ordinariness. You can read the whole poem here.
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It was a difficult choice but, as this prompt is looking forward to spring, I would like you to write a story that includes the following line(s) from that poem:
‘…city lilacs
release their sweet, wild perfume
then bow down, heavy with rain.’
Here’s how to take part in Prosery:
– Write a piece of flash fiction of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line in the order in which it has been given. You may add or change punctuation, but you may not add words in between the given ones.
– Post your Prosery on your blog and link back to this post.
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kim881 said:
Welcome to the dVerse Poets Pub. The bar is open and the fire is lit. Make yourselves comfortable and enjoy a good read. Hot and cold drinks are available, together with a choice of pub snacks.
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msjadeli said:
Hello Kim and All. Thank you for the very challenging line to write to. I was stymied for awhile but kept at it until The Muse had mercy on me. A tall mug of hot cocoa with a shot of Baileys and a small plate of shortbread cookies would be perfect to read while on the poetry trail.
kim881 said:
After being stymied you have earned a tall mug of hot cocoa with a shot of Baileys, I think I might have one too! Shortbread cookies on the side, too. I’ll see you on the poetry trail.
msjadeli said:
Thank you. YUM. Cheers!
dorahak said:
Hi Kim! Foggy day here and a warm fire sounds like just the ticket along with a hot mug of cocoa. Loved the Dunmore poem. Thank you for introducing us to it and this wonderful poet.
kim881 said:
HI Dora! You have fog and we had sunshine today. A hot mug of cocoa coming up!
dorahak said:
🙏🏾💖
Melissa Lemay said:
👋🏻 hello, Kim! Thank you for hosting. Hello, everyone.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I enjoyed the prompt, and to me the scent of Lilacs bring back so many memories even though my piece of fiction is very fictional… the overpowering perfume of lilacs is a bit mournful.
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merrildsmith said:
Hi Kim and all! Thank you for hosting. It’s always a challenge to fit the poetry line into prose. I didn’t read the poem until after I wrote my prosery piece, but I like it, Kim. It makes me think of the show Happy Valley. I think that’s Yorkshire?
kim881 said:
Happy Valley is one of my favourite television crime dramas and I really miss it now it’s over. I love Sarah Lancashire, indeed all of the cast, and I will watch anything she is in. It is set in Yorkshire, Hebden Bridge, a beautiful place.
merrildsmith said:
I was pretty certain you knew the show, since we seem to share similar tastes (at least in the ones that make it to platforms I can watch here). Sarah Lancashire is wonderful! And James Norton is a good baddie–so different from his handsome vicar character on Grantchester.
rothpoetry said:
Hi Kim, thanks for hosting. This lady is a wonderful poet I loved her poem of the Lilacs. Such great metaphors. This will a challenging one, but I will see what I can come up with. Hot chocolate for me and maybe an apple turnover!
kim881 said:
I’m so glad you like Helen Dunmore’s work. Sadly she died in 2017 after publishing Birdcage Walk.
rothpoetry said:
How poem has the feel of authenticity that resonates with me.
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rog said:
hi kim
hi poets
wow that got my head working
a cup of hot chocolate with a short bread to dunk would truly hit the mark when i come down from a hot bath.
see you on the poetry trail when i finally get to reading
rog
kim881 said:
I went to bed part way through reading and commenting, but I’m up again now. I left the hot chocolate and shortbread in the bar for you, Hope you enjoyed it!
rog said:
Enjoyed thank you
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pvcann said:
Thank you Kim, mine’s not fiction, just a simple reflection, love that quote.
kim881 said:
I enjoy both fiction and non-fiction, Paul, and a simple reflection is equally welcome,
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Marie Christine said:
It’s been a long time since I’ve written. Happy to be back. Thanks for the great prompt!
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