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buildings, Elizabeth Bishop, Helen Hoyt, Leslie Contreras Schwartz, Longfellow, Philip Larkin, Seamus Heaney, William Empson
It’s Tuesday and the dVerse Poets Pub is open with hot cross buns, tea and coffee, as well as a selection of excellent poetry. I’m Kim from writinginnorthnorfolk.com, your host for this week’s Poetics.
When I was teaching, I did a stint at a sixth form college, where I led a double act lesson with another teacher, each choosing a poem to work on with a small group of students. One week, my colleague arrived with a chopped up poem by Philip Larkin, which the students had to piece together in pairs. The poem was ‘The Building’ (High Windows, 1972) about a mysterious and ambiguous building. Only a little is revealed bit by bit through the poem. It was interesting to watch the students work out what the poem was about before analysing it as a group.
There are other poems about buildings that give the reader a sense of having been in them, for example ‘At the Fishhouses’ by Elizabeth Bishop, which you can listen to here.
Image by Meritt Thomas on Unsplash
Further vivid images are evoked in ‘The Office Building’ by Helen Hoyt, ‘Homage to the British Museum’ by William Empson, and ‘Cathedral’ by Leslie Contreras Schwartz.
Photograph of the British Museum by Nicole Baster on Unsplash
‘Scaffolding‘ by Seamus Heaney looks at a building from a different point of view, as does ‘Haunted Houses’ by Longfellow.
Your challenge today is to write a poem about a building of your choice, for example: the building in which you live; a building in which you were happy or sad; a favourite shop; a building in which you went to school or worked; a building that made an impression on you. You may write it in any form, but to push yourself that little bit further, you could write your poem in a similar way to Larkin, revealing the building bit by bit, so that the reader has to work out what it is.
If you are new to dVerse and/or Poetics, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poets’ work – we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
- This link will close on Thursday. If you miss it, don’t despair, you can link your poem to OLN.


Welcome to the pub, poets! Take a seat and enjoyed the evening. The bar is open with a selection of drinks and snacks. I’m looking forward to exploring your buildings.
I think you can guess which building that I wrote about… it may even exist somewhere… and even if not, it is getting clearer to me every day.
I think I can…
Hi Kim. Thank you for hosting this prompt. A hot chocolate on this cold spring afternoon would be lovely. I look forward to reading what the building looks like from teveryone’s perspective.
I love hot chocolate, Grace, especially on a chilly spring day.
Hi Kim. A wonderful prompt. I so enjoyed your selection of poems. One hot cross bun with a cup of Darjeeling tea for me, please.
Thank you, Punam. Hot cross bun and Darjeeling is a good choice.
You are welcome and thank you.
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I really enjoyed this one Kim – it helped me back in the swing of things too after my time away
Just a hot choc for me please with a tot of rum
Welcome back, Laura. Hot choc with rum coming up!
Thanks for hosting Kim. 🙂🫶🏼 I will put my attentions to your prompt when I have completed this new top mount I am creating for my wife Kathy’s newest fiberart piece. ✌🏼🫶🏼
I look forward to it, Rob! Good luck with the top mount!
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thanks for hosting Kim
enjoyed revisiting my first visit to …………….
rog
Thanks Rog!
Well, it’s getting closer to my bed time, so I’ll bid you all good night, and I’ll be back in the morning to read and comment.
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A great choice for our prompt, Kim. This can go in so many ways. Thanks for hosting this evening.
Thank you for joining us, Dwight. As they say, the possibilities are endless.
Ah, Kim…hot cross buns & sixth form..you’re flashing me back to childhood and high school😊. Interesting challenge!
Pat
Thanks, Pat. The poems have all been inspired so far, I look forward to reading yours.
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Done. Makes me realize I don’t write enough about buildings.
I look forward to reading your poem, Jebediah. I love architecture, but a building’s history and use are so interesting.
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I want some hot cross buns!!! I might try to write about the haymow. I used to sit up there (haymow diaries) but that was a long time ago.
I look forward to reading about it, Yvonne! Hot cross buns coming up!
I’m in! And hungry!!!
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Hello Kim, everyone, what a great prompt, seemed just right for me tonight 🙂
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Hi Kim, and all–thank you for the prompt. I couldn’t get it together for yesterday, but I’ve just posted one. I will catch up with reading while I eat lunch today.
Never too late, Merril!
😊
Thank you, Kim. This was an unique prompt. 🙂
I’m glad you like it Kitty!
Enjoyed this poetics prompt, Kim! Hot cross buns are appropriate this week and fit the building I wrote about 🙂 I’d like a cup of Earl Grey with those…thank you!
Hot cross bun and Earl Grey coming up, Lynn! I’m delighted you enjoyed the prompt.
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A bit late (not unusual for me) but thanks for the prompt Kim–perfect for Thursday Doors. (K)
I’ll be over to read in a bit!
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Hi Stephen, I’m having problems viewing your post. I keep getting the ‘pop’s message. I tried to get to it through your blog, but it says the page doesn’t exist. I’ll try again later.
‘Oops’ message.