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Arthur Sze, contour, Coral Bracho, Forrest Gander, Jean Aitchison, Joe Strickland, Joyce Carol Gibson, Quadrille

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Hello to All who are gathered here today in the dVerse Universe, a site of pubtalk and poetry. This Monday is where You and Your Muse are prompted to write a Quadrille. The name for the quadrille form is taken from an 18th Century dance, but as you may know, is also dVerse’ poetic form of just 44 words (not counting the title) and includes one word the host provides to you. Today your host is me, Lisa, back from a March-long poetry hiatus and at the ready to serve drinks and snacks from the magic cupboard.
As people, places, and things exist in three dimensions, six senses, and often beyond, the word I’m choosing for today is contour. It’s a pretty word and encompasses all-that-is or isn’t. A beautiful freedom is found in it that strikes my fancy. As I went looking for images to go with this post, I very quickly learned that the word is used in connection with make-up, but try to forget that if you can (or not) when writing your poem.

The first poem I found using contour just freakishly also happens to be a quadrille. What are the odds of that? I see this one as speaking to how contours can create illusion. Is it the dancer or is it the writer’s stage that is the illusion?
Confused,
by Joyce Carol Gibson
I can still see her
powder puffy tutu
Delicate pink
Lending contour
Matching ribbons
Inter-braided hair
French love knots
Trial of patience
Stage make-up
Extended eyes
Exaggerated cheeks
Round and rosy
Born to dance
Yet, she stands,
Devastated and alone
On my mind’s stage.
This next one is a stanza in a longer poem, a thoughtful existential rehash of something that must have once held great importance in the writer’s life. Click on the title to take you to the rest.
Dead Silhouette,
by Joe Strickland
…
In the realm of the living,
Where bodies dance
And voices reverberate,
This silhouette remained
Trapped in a silent tomb,
A visual testament
To a narrative
Left unfinished.
Its contours
Dissolved
Into the depths
Of my perception,
A faded hologram
Of a forgotten era,
Haunted
By the echoes
Of a forgotten voice.
…
Who could think that water could be described in such a way. This is just a bit of a magnificently wordsmithed sensory extravaganza. Click on the title to take you to the rest of it.
Water’s Lubricious Edges,
by Coral Bracho, translated by Forrest Gander
Water of jellyfish,
lacteal, sinuous water,
water of lubricious borders; glassy thickness—Deliquescence
in delectable contours. Water—sumptuous water
of involution, of languor
…
I saw the title and the first line and said, yes, this one. I love how the poet uses leaves as emotional navigation.
The Shapes of Leaves,
by Arthur Sze
Ginkgo, cottonwood, pin oak, sweet gum, tulip tree:
our emotions resemble leaves and alive
to their shapes we are nourished.
Have you felt the expanse and contours of grief
along the edges of a big Norway maple?
Have you winced at the orange flare
searing the curves of a curling dogwood?
I have seen from the air logged islands,
each with a network of branching gravel roads,
and felt a moment of pure anger, aspen gold.
I have seen sandhill cranes moving in an open field,
a single white whooping crane in the flock.
And I have traveled along the contours
of leaves that have no name. Here
where the air is wet and the light is cool,
I feel what others are thinking and do not speak,
I know pleasure in the veins of a sugar maple,
I am living at the edge of a new leaf.
The source of the poems are found at the title link. Learn more about each of these excellent poets by clicking on the link of the poet’s name.
Once again, we have come to the place where you put your proverbial pen to paper and warm it with your poetic spirit’s will in words.
• Pen us a poem of precisely 44 words (not counting the title), including some form of the word contour.
• Post your Quadrille piece on your blog and link back to this post.
• Place the link to your actual post (not your blog url) on the Mister Linky page.
• Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy.
• Please visit other blogs and comment on their posts!
• Have fun (but only if you want to!)
Welcome Poet Pubsters! We’re open!
Thanks for the warm welcome…it may be awhile before I can get to the list of other offerings.
You’re welcome and no worries.
Thank you for your grace!😊
❤
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Hi, Lisa!👋🏻 I love your selection of poems! I’ll have a chai latte, if you have one. Happy poeming, everyone.✌🏻
Welcome, Melissa. Glad you enjoyed the poems. Such gems they are. One chai latte coming right up 🙂
An inviting quadrille prompt Lisa and loved especially the watery “wordsmithed sensory extravaganza. “
Suppertime here for me so a liquorice and peppermint tea will quench and calm whilst the rain and hail outside batters on the skylight
Welcome, Laura. Glad you enjoyed that poem. It’s a doozy in the best of ways. One tall mug of liquorice and peppermint tea to warm, quench, and soothe you through the storm. Hail on the skylight sounds so noisy!
Me being me ~~ naturally the first thing I thought of was MAKEUP. I will refrain. Wonder if the Pub is serving Lemonade today … and slice of of pound cake please?
Welcome, Helen. Please do your make-up if you want to! I just learned contour was used a lot in applying it and was surprised but shouldn’t be. It makes magic happen. One tall glass of lemonad and a slice of pound cake.
Happy Easter poets! it’s too late for April Fools, but just the right time for quadrilles. Thank you for hosting, Lisa, and happy reading!
Welcome, Kim. WP or my computer is making commenting extremely time-consuming, which is frustrating. Happy Easter and April Fools, and happy poeming!
Hi Li. I enjoyed your selection of poems. Excellent word choice for quadrille.
Welcome, Punam. Glad you enjoyed the poems and like the word choice for quadrille :)
❤️😊
hi Lisa
hi poets
will be back in the morning for more reading
rog
Welcome, Rog. Just read your poem and listened to your musical selection. Good stuff!
thanks
Hi Lisa, thanks for hosting! That contour meme might have made me snort in laughter. 😂
Welcome, Cris. Happy the contour meme tickled you 🙂
Hi Lisa! Many thanks for tending the Quadrille pub today! Time got away from me and I just posted my contoured poem. Will get around to reading a bit later….although we will be raucously cheering as we watch the Iowa women’s basketball game in the Elite 8 of the NCAA’s March Madness. We spent sooooo many years in Iowa; raised our kids there. Walked to the football arena….kids took music lessons at the University. Once a Hawkeye, always a Hawkeye. And Caitlin Clark is putting women’s basketball in the spotlight for all young women….including those grade schoolers wearing #22 tee shirts all across the country!
Welcome, Lillian! You know the pub is always open and I’m happy to serve as tender. Sounds like you are really geeked to see your team in the Elite 8. Caitlin Clark is a name I need to get to know. Best of luck to the Hawkeyes! Heading over to the poetry trail in a few. Looking forward to your Q. Go #22!!!!!!!
Hello Lisa in the closing stages of 1 April with its overtones of folly, at least in UK.
Off to bed now and hope to be back with the 44 tomorrow! Good choice x
Welcome, Kathy. Overtones of folly works for me! Sweet dreams, dear, and maybe see you in the ‘morrow.
Thank you for hosting Lisa. 🙂 Cool prompt. 👍🏼 Thought I’d have a little fun with it. ✌🏼🫶🏼
Welcome, Rob. I’ve missed you and it is my pleasure to host. Glad you like the prompt and can’t wait to see what you did with contour 🙂
Good evening, poets! Happy National Poetry Month 2024!
Thanks for hosting tonight, Lisa! I’ll have my usual! 😉
Welcome, Frank. My pleasure on hosting tonight. One of the usual, coming right up. Cheers!
Hi Lisa! Thank you for the prompt. I just posted a late response, and I will have to catch up tomorrow.
Welcome, Merril. You’re welcome on the prompt. I left early today for a 6pm appt, got home a bit ago, and a family game night starting soon, so no worries catching up. Looking forward to reading you on the poetry trail. Have a good night.
Hope you had a fun family night, Lisa! It’s a busy month!
We did, thanks. Board games we used to play up until Covid now we’ve taken to the online gaming world. It was an adjustment, but as long as we spend time together is what matters.
Yes.
Thanks for hosting, Lisa! I think this will be an interesting prompt! Good to see you back again.
Welcome, Dwight. My pleasure to host. Glad you find the prompt interesting. Thanks for the welcome back. Would you care for the usual root beer float tonight? Hoping you say yes, as I’ll make two, one for you and one for me 🙂
Oh, yes… with chocolate ice cream!
Ooh that sounds good. :::tasting::: YUM!
It is really good!!
Hi Lisa, Thanks for hosting and supplying the interesting word choice for the day. Its getting late so I read a few and return tomorrow.
Welcome, Truedessa. My pleasure on hosting and you’re welcome on the prompt word. Sweet dreams and see you in the morning.
Hi Lisa! An irresistible Q-prompt, my friend, which led me in a couple of different directions, so I settled for the more pressing one, given current events. It’s almost my bedtime and I’d love a cup of hot chocolate! Thanks for hosting. 😊
Welcome, Dora! So glad you were drawn in by the prompt and makes me know your offering will be wonderful. One cup of hot chocolate coming right up. Cheers and sweet dreams, my friend.
This looks like fun, Lisa! Thanks for a great prompt! 😊
Welcome, Nancy. I think you’re right, it looks like fun 🙂 You are very welcome.
Sorry for not reading yesterday… it was Easter Monday and a holiday in Sweden, so now it’s time for me to go out on the poetry trail… Just to clarify a bit on my poem, it is actually written more as a sarcasm than my own views….
Welcome, Bjorn. Hope you had a peaceful Easter Monday and holiday yesterday. Thanks for the clarification.
Thank you for hosting, Li. The prompt word is amazing. 🙂
Welcome, Kitty, and so happy you like the prompt word choice 🙂
Hi Lisa, everyone, many thanks for the prompt, I sometimes think of poems like contours, lines and forms, I went back to farming for this one.
Welcome, Paul. For sure on poems having contours, lines, and forms. Jim also wrote a poem on farming. Heading over to the poetry trail in a minute here. You usual shot of whiskey? If so, I’ll pour two, one for you and one for me.
Ha, yes, a triple shot tonight 🙂
OK, two triple shots :) Cheers!
🙂
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thanks for the cool prompt Lisa, just posted the link to my contribution over at Mr. Linky. Hope ye enjoy the read! 🤞😁📖
Welcome, Ken. Glad you made it. Happy Friday!
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Glad you linked up, Melissa. You will see the link in the comments section.
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