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Judith Askew, lies, lying, Palinode, Richard Wilbur, Wilfred Owen
“The only way you can write the truth is to assume that what you set down will never be read. Not by any other person, and not even by yourself at some later date. You must see the writing as emerging like a long scroll of ink from the index finger of your right hand; you must see your left hand erasing it.” Margaret Atwood – “The Blind Assassin”
Today, believe it or not(!) is ‘Tell a Lie’ day. Far from encouraging mendaciousness, it it supposed to create some fun with the more harmless little white lies. And on such a flaky note I came across this fun poem by Judith Askew “Bakery of Lies”
“My favorite is the cream puff lie,
the kind inflated with hot air,
expanded to make an heroic-sized story.
Another is the cannoli, a long lie,
well-packed with nutty details,
lightly wrapped in flakey truth.
A macaroon isn’t a little white lie,
but it’s covered
with self-serving coconut…” (more)
And Richard Wilbur elaborates at length on “Lying”
“To claim, at a dead party, to have spotted a grackle,
When in fact you haven’t of late, can do no harm.
Your reputation for saying things of interest
Will not be marred, if you hasten to other topics,
Nor will the delicate web of human trust
Be ruptured by that airy fabrication.
Later, however, talking with toxic zest
Of golf, or taxes, or the rest of it
Where the beaked ladle plies the chuckling ice,
You may enjoy a chill of severance, hearing
Above your head the shrug of unreal wings.”…(more)
And so in the spirit of the gentle untruth, here is today’s writing prompt:
Poetry Form: The Palinode
A poem that contradicts or retracts something the poet has previously been written.”
For example people, things, ideas, once loved, liked, admired are written with a negative or opposite connotation (or vice versa).
- Take one of your own poems and write a Palinode as response to it (link to original or put alongside)
OR - Write a Palinode of contrary views, as though you have changed your mind/opinion halfway/some way through
(see for example Wilfred Owen’s “A Palinode”)
Note: Remember today is white lie day so it does not have to be true!
Poetry Style: The Palinode implies the Irregular Ode form of poetry – lyrical language, musical sounding but without any syllabic strictures or rhyme structure.
BUT For those who like an extra challenge there is the option of writing it with formality as:
A Pindaric or Horatian Ode
A Palinode Sonnet
Useful Links:
• Grace’s prompt here on dVerse in May 2021
• The Palinode – Poem Analysis
• The Ode – Poem Analysis
Fun Fact: Ancient Greek, the word “Palin” means “backwards.”, or “anew”, as in palindrome, palinode.
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
kim881 said:
Good evening lovely poets! Thank you for hosting, Laura. I enjoyed looking for the right poem to turn into a palinode – and writing it. I would love a non-alcoholic lager, please!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
first come first served Kim –
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello Laura, not sure I did it right, but finding one poem to contradict made my palinode a bit disturbing, so read it with care…
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thanks for the warning!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
and for adding Mr Linky!!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
😁😁
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Hello Poets
the bar is open and for those who think a Palinode is rather challenging I suggest strong drink till you see double as effectively we are creating two contradictory truths. Bar snacks will help too!
Melissa Lemay said:
Hi Laura! This one wasn’t as difficult as I thought it might be. I’ll have a double shot of espresso, if you have it.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
great choice coming up
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Laura! It was challenging for sure! I don’t know if I have done it correctly but I had to give it try. I think I should sleep off the double I was seeing without a strong drink. See you all tomorrow.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Goodnight till tomorrow then x
msjadeli said:
Hello Laura and All. In between appointments but wanted to drop in to say I’ll be linking up later. Challenging prompt, just the kind I like.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
it was easier than first imagined I found so I look forward to yours
msjadeli said:
You’re right, once I stopped trying to write it in the same form as the original it became way easier. Thank you again for the excellent challenge. The poems I’m reading on poetry trail are DEEP!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
yes your Palinode found its deep dark side without the constraints of the original form
msjadeli said:
🙂
Ali Grimshaw said:
Laura,
I don’t know if I can get to writing today but I wanted to let you know that I love your prompt and the poems you shared. I look forward to reading the responses of others.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thank you Ali for your enthusiasm
lillian said:
Hello Laura! Thanks for hosting this palinode prompt. I really enjoyed going backwards in time to find a poem to write a palinode for. I posted the original poem and then the palinode right below it. I had fun with this one! 🙂 Hope it makes a few folks smile….it did me on this cold, dreary, sleety and rainy horrible fickle spring day in Boston!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
a great find by the sound of it Lillian – will stop by tomorrow
Laura Bloomsbury said:
it’s help yourself at the bar now since it’s closing eyes time now for this barista
Rob Kistner said:
Thank you for hosting Laura.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
look forward to reading yours – thanks Rob
msjadeli said:
Laura, I just linked up. At first I tried to do the poem in the same form as the original but mind would have none of it, so I took the original ideas and did my best to spin them to the opposite. A nice hot chai latte with cinnamon sprinkles sounds perfect, please.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
hope you enjoyed your latte as much as I enjoyed your poem
msjadeli said:
I did. Cheers, Laura!
Jane Swanson said:
I’m having an oops on posting to the prompt. Can you delete my two attempts and I’ll start over.
Thanks,
Jane
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I saw the problem – removed the first and edited the second one so that it works!
pvcann said:
Thank you Laura, a bit of a wrangle but I enjoyed the challenge, a creative way to go.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
you went full tilt Paul!
pvcann said:
I really did 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello, I had to write a second one… this time just two quadrilles, reversing a previous emotion
Laura Bloomsbury said:
and rather sad too Bjorn
dorahak said:
Hi Laura! Thanks for hosting. I took one of my poems written earlier this week as the springboard to my palinode. What a great prompt!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
it certainly inspired you Dora!