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Judith Askew, lies, lying, Palinode, Richard Wilbur, Wilfred Owen
“The only way you can write the truth is to assume that what you set down will never be read. Not by any other person, and not even by yourself at some later date. You must see the writing as emerging like a long scroll of ink from the index finger of your right hand; you must see your left hand erasing it.” Margaret Atwood – “The Blind Assassin”
Today, believe it or not(!) is ‘Tell a Lie’ day. Far from encouraging mendaciousness, it it supposed to create some fun with the more harmless little white lies. And on such a flaky note I came across this fun poem by Judith Askew “Bakery of Lies”
“My favorite is the cream puff lie,
the kind inflated with hot air,
expanded to make an heroic-sized story.
Another is the cannoli, a long lie,
well-packed with nutty details,
lightly wrapped in flakey truth.
A macaroon isn’t a little white lie,
but it’s covered
with self-serving coconut…” (more)
And Richard Wilbur elaborates at length on “Lying”
“To claim, at a dead party, to have spotted a grackle,
When in fact you haven’t of late, can do no harm.
Your reputation for saying things of interest
Will not be marred, if you hasten to other topics,
Nor will the delicate web of human trust
Be ruptured by that airy fabrication.
Later, however, talking with toxic zest
Of golf, or taxes, or the rest of it
Where the beaked ladle plies the chuckling ice,
You may enjoy a chill of severance, hearing
Above your head the shrug of unreal wings.”…(more)
And so in the spirit of the gentle untruth, here is today’s writing prompt:
Poetry Form: The Palinode
A poem that contradicts or retracts something the poet has previously been written.”
For example people, things, ideas, once loved, liked, admired are written with a negative or opposite connotation (or vice versa).
- Take one of your own poems and write a Palinode as response to it (link to original or put alongside)
OR - Write a Palinode of contrary views, as though you have changed your mind/opinion halfway/some way through
(see for example Wilfred Owen’s “A Palinode”)
Note: Remember today is white lie day so it does not have to be true!
Poetry Style: The Palinode implies the Irregular Ode form of poetry – lyrical language, musical sounding but without any syllabic strictures or rhyme structure.
BUT For those who like an extra challenge there is the option of writing it with formality as:
A Pindaric or Horatian Ode
A Palinode Sonnet
Useful Links:
• Grace’s prompt here on dVerse in May 2021
• The Palinode – Poem Analysis
• The Ode – Poem Analysis
Fun Fact: Ancient Greek, the word “Palin” means “backwards.”, or “anew”, as in palindrome, palinode.
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Good evening lovely poets! Thank you for hosting, Laura. I enjoyed looking for the right poem to turn into a palinode – and writing it. I would love a non-alcoholic lager, please!
first come first served Kim –
Hello Laura, not sure I did it right, but finding one poem to contradict made my palinode a bit disturbing, so read it with care…
thanks for the warning!
and for adding Mr Linky!!
😁😁
Hello Poets
the bar is open and for those who think a Palinode is rather challenging I suggest strong drink till you see double as effectively we are creating two contradictory truths. Bar snacks will help too!
Hi Laura! This one wasn’t as difficult as I thought it might be. I’ll have a double shot of espresso, if you have it.
great choice coming up
Hi Laura! It was challenging for sure! I don’t know if I have done it correctly but I had to give it try. I think I should sleep off the double I was seeing without a strong drink. See you all tomorrow.
Goodnight till tomorrow then x
Hello Laura and All. In between appointments but wanted to drop in to say I’ll be linking up later. Challenging prompt, just the kind I like.
it was easier than first imagined I found so I look forward to yours
You’re right, once I stopped trying to write it in the same form as the original it became way easier. Thank you again for the excellent challenge. The poems I’m reading on poetry trail are DEEP!
yes your Palinode found its deep dark side without the constraints of the original form
🙂
Laura,
I don’t know if I can get to writing today but I wanted to let you know that I love your prompt and the poems you shared. I look forward to reading the responses of others.
thank you Ali for your enthusiasm
Hello Laura! Thanks for hosting this palinode prompt. I really enjoyed going backwards in time to find a poem to write a palinode for. I posted the original poem and then the palinode right below it. I had fun with this one! 🙂 Hope it makes a few folks smile….it did me on this cold, dreary, sleety and rainy horrible fickle spring day in Boston!
a great find by the sound of it Lillian – will stop by tomorrow
it’s help yourself at the bar now since it’s closing eyes time now for this barista
Thank you for hosting Laura.
look forward to reading yours – thanks Rob
Laura, I just linked up. At first I tried to do the poem in the same form as the original but mind would have none of it, so I took the original ideas and did my best to spin them to the opposite. A nice hot chai latte with cinnamon sprinkles sounds perfect, please.
hope you enjoyed your latte as much as I enjoyed your poem
I did. Cheers, Laura!
I’m having an oops on posting to the prompt. Can you delete my two attempts and I’ll start over.
Thanks,
Jane
I saw the problem – removed the first and edited the second one so that it works!
Thank you Laura, a bit of a wrangle but I enjoyed the challenge, a creative way to go.
you went full tilt Paul!
I really did 🙂
Hello, I had to write a second one… this time just two quadrilles, reversing a previous emotion
and rather sad too Bjorn
Hi Laura! Thanks for hosting. I took one of my poems written earlier this week as the springboard to my palinode. What a great prompt!
it certainly inspired you Dora!