Hello Poets and Friends, Björn here.
Today it is time to revisit a tool we last did almost six years ago, namely onomatopoeia, or the way words and sentences are formed from the way they sound.
The dictionary is filled with words (for instance here or here) created from how we mimic a sound, and there are actually specific wordlists for these, sometimes including words that are not even in the formal dictionaries (yet) as they may be part of slang, or are borrowed from other languages.
Cartoons often use strong visual and onomatopoeic pictures and invent their own words.
Tying together the sound of the poem as it is being read with its meaning strengthens its meaning, or maybe add another layer of irony that is only understood if it is read aloud.
Consider for example
‘Out, Out — ‘ by Robert Frost.
The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard
And made dust and dropped stove-length sticks of wood,
Sweet-scented stuff when the breeze drew across it.
And from there those that lifted eyes could count
Five mountain ranges one behind the other
Under the sunset far into Vermont.
And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,
As it ran light, or had to bear a load.
And nothing happened: day was all but done.
Call it a day, I wish they might have said
To please the boy by giving him the half hour
That a boy counts so much when saved from work.
His sister stood beside him in her apron
To tell them ‘Supper.’ At the word, the saw,
As if to prove saws knew what supper meant,
Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap—
He must have given the hand. However it was,
Neither refused the meeting. But the hand!
The boy’s first outcry was a rueful laugh,
As he swung toward them holding up the hand
Half in appeal, but half as if to keep
The life from spilling. Then the boy saw all—
Since he was old enough to know, big boy
Doing a man’s work, though a child at heart—
He saw all spoiled. ‘Don’t let him cut my hand off—
The doctor, when he comes. Don’t let him, sister!’
So. But the hand was gone already.
The doctor put him in the dark of ether.
He lay and puffed his lips out with his breath.
And then—the watcher at his pulse took fright.
No one believed. They listened at his heart.
Little—less—nothing!—and that ended it.
No more to build on there. And they, since they
Were not the one dead, turned to their affairs.
The beginning introduces the menace of the buzz saw both through specific words such as buzz saw, gnarl and rattle as well as sibilance to strengthen the threat that makes me think of a beast or a snake.
Today I want you to use Onomatopoeia in your poem, to strengthen the imagery through its sound (read it aloud, and maybe even include a recording.
When you have written your poem and posted to your blog with a linkback to Dverse, add the link to Mr. Linky below.
Add a comment, order something from the virtual bar or tell me something from your part of the world. Then remember to visit, listen and read to the other poets that have linked up. Add a comment and be rewarded by insights on your own poem.
And remember to have a fun and wonderful weekend.

Good evening… I offer fizz of bubbly, chrunch of crisps and som chew of cookies.. you choice.
Hello Bjorn and All. Fizz of bubbly sounds good. Heading off on an errand and will be back to read.
I flute of fizz coming up.
Thanks. Cheers!
Hi Björn. Wonderful prompt. I think I would love a glug of fizzy bubbly, munch on the crunch of chips as I capture the buzz of words.
There is quite som buzz and babble in the bar, fizz coming up.
Love when the bar is buzzing with chatter of poets and tinkling glasse. Thanks a lot!
Hi Bjorn. Cookies and chocolate looks delicious. This is a wonderful tool to use in the poem. Love the challenge and looking forward to reading the poems.
Many good sounds in poem I have read so far.
Good evening, Björn and dVerse poets one and all! I’ll only stay a while , I’ve had a weird day and am very tired, but I will be back in the morning, hopefully refreshed and ready to read and comment.
It is getting late here too… and I need to be up early tomorrow.
there’s the sound of rain on the roof and its still so cool for May so a hot chocolate would be welcome still – thank you for this prompt – never easy to find ways of using these literal sound words so I turned to those who can in my poem
I loved all those good examples… inventing words is not easy,,,
hi Bjorn
hi poets
thanks for a chance to share a recent poem using some inventive names.
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I look forward to read it.
Well, this is one of the silliest poems I’ve written. Today. “The Man I Didn’t Date.” Thanks for a fun prompt! I’ll start reading now.
I will go and read yours right now.
Could not squeeze more sound words in, and left it up to the reader’s imagination. You raised an interesting point..how to describe silence with tension.
As always a fascinating prompt. In Ukraine it is somewhat universally acknowledged writers are not able to focus on books during the war, but sites for poetry submissions abound, and the poetry seems really therapeutic, and almost necessary, in this country with more statues of Taras Chevchenko, the national poet, than any other.
I wish I could comment on your profound ‘sounds of war’ but can’t see how
Thank you for sharing your observations, Ain.
Been reading your wonderful recent work AR, but not able to leave a comment on your site. Really great to know you are still out there my friend. 🙂 Wishing you a better day in a near tomorrow brother. Take care, and keep your voice heard. ✌🏼🫶🏼🇺🇦
Good to be clearheaded enough to be back again after being sick for the past 15 days and diagnosed with pneumonia!
Thanks, Bjorn, for hosting. I enjoyed writing to this prompt. I would love a Root Beer float with two scoops of chocolate Ice Cream.
Glad to have you back… pneumonia sounds really bad.
For me the symptoms leading up to the diagnosis were the worse. I believe it could have been much worse if it had been in both lungs.
So glad you’ve recovered completely, Dwight. That can be quite a scare. Stay well.
Thank you my friend. It may take awhile.
🙏🏽💞
Damn Dwight! Take care of yourself my friend. Hope your are feeling much better brother. 👍🏼🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
Thank you very much, Rob. I am doing much better. Today was the first I got out and active in two weeks+
Hey ho hi all — great prompt Björn! Thank you for hosting. 🙂 I am going to share a cosmic little story about Buzz. 💫✌🏼🫶🏼
Buzz is a legendary name for the a startraveller.
This poem is so sad. I always taught it with The Tragedy of Macbeth.
“Out, out, brief candle!
Life’s but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more.”
Indeed… maybe Frost was inspired by those lines.
Good evening, Björn and everyone, I’ve been a bit under the weather lately, still energized by your prompt enough to write a quadrille, with a little inspiration from Aesop. 😊🐈⬛🐭
I love a good fable… so I look forward to read it.
Does anyone know a way to comment on Ain’s poems?
no I keep looking and trying
It’s on purpose he told me for my prompt because he never knows if he’ll be able to respond.
Thank you, Merril!
Thank you for adding Glenn’s poem to Mister Linky, he was so good at this kind of poem and is greatly missed. It made me cry.
I did not add Glenn’s poem I wonder who did it
Oh! That is a bit spooky.
I was wondering who added Glenn’s poem but it reminded me of how good he was with it.
“Two pints of lager and a packet of crisps please” a song by Splodgeness
I know you are not fond of too much heat Björn, but I am sending you to tropical monsoon – at least it’s wet…
We have the last part of the same heatwave, but I do enjoy it from time to time.
Thank you for the prompt! My entry is kind of quiet, but hoping it’ll do.
Wow, I hadn’t read that Frost poem before. A darkish one, that.
That poem is one of my favorite Frost poems… the life and death, the buzz-saw and the danger of machines… yes it is a very sad one.
Thank you for the prompt, Björn. It may be one I have to come back to.
I hope you do… it is good tool
Thank you Bjorn, I’d like a single malt whiskey neat thank you, and thank you for hosting us tonight. And enjoyable prompt indeed.
I have a 10 year old McAllen or do you prefer something smokier?
That would be perfect ❤️
Thank you for hosting, Bjorn. I enjoyed writing to this prompt. 🙂
Great, I will have a look
Hi Bjorn, thank you so much for the prompt. And wow, the Robert Frost poem – so very, very dark.
My poem is about the endless storms we’ve had here in Houston and I followed your guidance about reading it aloud – it’s better that way! I made my son laugh with one of my word choices, which made my day.
It’s been a long week, so I’d love to be a diva with some bubbly in a crystal flute. I will stick out my pinky accordingly.
Sounds so very interesting, and yes the Frost poem is so very sad
Hello, BR, thanks for hosting. I enjoyed writing for the prompt!
Great… glad you enjoyed it
Bjorn, your EXCELLENT prompt reminded me that I had written a haiku about birds ‘back in the day’ that was two thirds sound words (onomatopoeia-heavy), so I’ve added another link and come back to the bar for a second time. It’s still morning here in Southeast Texas, so perhaps I’ll have that bubbly as a mimosa?
Great— all prompts except the Open Link is open for multiple entries.
Oh wow, it hadn’t even occurred to me to wonder about rules of engagement – thank you so much for letting me know! I can certainly see where there would be a limit on Open Link, or ANY prompt, now that I think about it. I’m still a bit of a newbie and appreciate the guidance.
Oops, Mr. Linky slammed the door! Here is my contribution: https://judydykstrabrown.com/2024/06/02/words-and-music-for-dverse-poets/