Onomatopoeia … what a great word. What an important part of our language.
If we go to a dictionary we get the following definition:
Onomatopoeia /.ɒnə(ʊ)matəˈpiːə/
noun– the formation of a word from a sound associated with what is named (e.g. cuckoo, sizzle ).
– the use of onomatopoeia for literary effect.
So the prompt today is all about the sound of our poems, and I would like you to approach it in a very specific way.
First of all we have to find a wordlist of such words and fortunately the internet is full of such lists. See for instance this or this. If you have your own favorite you are free to select your own.
In the list you will soon find that there are two types, to put it simply some of them have made it into real dictionaries some have not yet made it.
This learns teaches us something, namely Onomatopoeia is part of how words are formed, and secondly that many of the words we are using today are formed from sounds originally.
Example of such “normal” words are; hiss, cuckoo and babbling.
Then we have the words that we find in places like cartoons, words that are created with the sound of saying, words you can create yourself: pow, ka-boom and zumm
I want you to start with one or two words from any list you can find on onomatopoeia and create a poem from that. Remember that you can enhance the effect of onomatopoeia by using other words that resemble the words from the list. We can use rhyme or alliteration to create a sound effect in your writing.
So to be clear, to start with you should just focus on the sound of your poem, rather than the meaning.
I tried out my prompt the other day by writing a poem where I started with hiss and then let it lead me to a poem about quarreling:
The first hiss
A hiss of air,
a lighted fuse
the briefest bite of breath
before the bursts of bullet-barks
before our rage of roar and rumble,
before the rain and thunderstorms
before we rowed
before we tangled thoughts to knots
and fizzled to
a hiss of air.
I have tried to mark those words that are clearly coming from a list of Onomatopoeia words, but then added words like bullet and burst to add to the sound effect of the poem.
Remember that many times you will find “hidden” metaphors when you do this, which goes back to my original theory that most of our words might have started out being formed through Onomatopoeia.
When you have written your poem, link it up on Mr Linky below, leave a comment or take part in the discussion, read and comment, have fun in the world of sounds.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn and cauldron bubble.
I have served you some warm potions in the bar tonight… please dig in and dig the beat a cold evening like this.
kim881 said:
Good evening, Bjorn! Hi poets! I’m afraid I will have to post and run this evening but I’ll be back first thing to read and comment!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello Kim, love what you wrote, and I hope the prompt sparked some good ideas.
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks for hosting, Bjorn! I linked one with at least one onomatopeia word in it.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha… I’m just reading… I love the title.
Pat: willow88switches said:
this is a wonderful prompt Bjorn! it definitely should spark some burning, crisping and sparkling treasures …. I must sit and sink and think on it. Cheers and happy writing to one and all 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello Pat, I think you will do wonderful with this… it’s so fun when you start to think about it , and when you let it sink in bit and you realize how much sound matters in our ordinary speak….
Pat: willow88switches said:
now, if only I felt like writing! 😉 … but I am reading and enjoying what’s coming up so far …. this is really a most wonderful wording prompt … I will sit with it for a bit and see what crops up 🙂
lillian said:
Happy Thursday everyone! I went with a little political satire today. And took you at your word, Bjorn – so, if folks know the tune, they should sing my little ditty for this prompt.
Have to run but, as usual, will be reading in the AM with my hot cup of Joe in hand 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello Lilian… great to see you, and a song is great for onomatopoeia … after all the melody is in the sounds.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I need to go to bed… there is a day tomorrow as well and I will be back.
Frank J. Tassone said:
Afternoon, Poets! Thanks, Bjorn, for this delightful prompt! How about that Burgundy? 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I will pour you a good one before going to bed…
Frank J. Tassone said:
Thanks! 🙂
Victoria Stuart said:
Thanks for a wonderful prompt, Björn, such fun and what a great way to learn about how to open myself to new ways of expressing sounds and to keep the focus on the music of the poem. I’m so happy to have found this site!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Thank you Victoria… we do try to find various ways to improve our writing… and it should be fun
V.J. Knutson said:
Fun prompt – another ripe with possibilities!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
The possibilities are infinite…
Charmed Chaos said:
I struggled at first, but then… it came whooshing!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
You just have to say it out loud and it works…
Charmed Chaos said:
Yes… thanks Bjorn.
whimsygizmo said:
One small cauldron of slo gin, please. Too much fun, B. Thank you!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Small cauldron coming up… I thought of picking some hawthorn the other week but they were not ripe yet… but if I do there will homemade slo gin
Singledust said:
sounds like a hoot Bjorn!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
hoot hoot
Janice said:
An interesting thing to contemplate this “ono..”…I used some words I had already started (including the word ‘buzz’) and tried to build the sound factor. Thank you 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Indeed that is the purpose… use the words and build something from it….
rothpoetry said:
Another fun one!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Thank you
Truedessa said:
Hello Dear Poets – This sounded fun, so I decided to play along. I’ll be around tonight and tomorrow to read all the wonderful poetry.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It is fun… and a lot of good poems coming up
Ali Grimshaw said:
An interesting challenge. I have no time to write tonight but I will enjoy reading what others come up with.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
We are open a few days more… hope you have time add it… otherwise it’s Open Link next week if you want to do it.
sarahsouthwest said:
Great prompt to come back to! Thanks, Bjorn.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Great to have you back Sarah
syncwithdeep said:
Interesting prompt. thank u.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It’s really interesting in so many ways.
Imelda said:
Finally, I got to link up something. Thanks for the prompt, Bjorn.
The Guern said:
What a fun youtube video, Björn. Thanks!