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D'Verse, Edgar Allan Poe, Flash fiction, poetry, Prosery, Sleeper
“All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.”
Edgar Allan Poe, A Dream Within a Dream

Good afternoon, my poetry virtuosos! Melissa here from Mom With a Blog, welcoming you to Monday Prosery here at the Pub. I was elated after searching through our archives and finding we have not (yet) used any of Poe’s work for a prosery prompt. That changes today!
What is prosery? A very short piece of prose or flash fiction that tells a story with a beginning, a middle, and an end. It can be any genre you choose, but it does have a limit of 144 words. Somewhere within your story, you must include given lines without changing word order or adding any words. You may add or change punctuation.
Born in Boston, Massachusetts in 1809, to parents David and Eliza, Edgar {Allan} Poe was given no middle name at birth. When Poe was a baby, his father abandoned the family and his mother died shortly thereafter. Poe was taken in by John and Frances Allan of Virginia, and the surname was added.
Although he garnered acclaim through winning writing contests, publication of his work, and serving as editor and literary critic, Poe’s work did not bring him much income. His drinking was also a hinderance for him throughout his life. His romanticism of the macabre and mysterious probably served as its own form of escapism.
Poe was nothing short of lyrical genius, emphasizing mastery of language. “Experimenting with combinations of sound and rhythm, he employed such technical devices as repetition, parallelism, internal rhyme, alliteration, and assonance to produce works that are unique in American poetry for their haunting, musical quality” (source). Enjoy the following selections.

from “Fairyland”
Dim vales — and shadowy floods —
And cloudy-looking woods,
Whose forms we can’t discover
For the tears that drip all over.
Huge moons there wax and wane —
Again — again — again —
Ev’ry moment of the night —
For ever changing places —
And they put out the star-light
With the breath from their pale faces;
from “The Haunted Palace”
Wanderers in that happy valley,
Through two luminous windows, saw
Spirits moving musically
To a lute’s well-tunèd law,
Round about a throne where, sitting,
Porphyrogene!
In state his glory well befitting,
The ruler of the realm was seen.
“Hymn”
At morn — at noon — at twilight dim —
Maria! thou hast heard my hymn!
In joy and wo — in good and ill —
Mother of God, be with me still!
When the Hours flew brightly by,
And not a cloud obscured the sky,
My soul, lest it should truant be,
Thy grace did guide to thine and thee;
Now, when storms of Fate o’ercast
Darkly my Present and my Past,
Let my Future radiant shine
With sweet hopes of thee and thine!

It is believed that Poe suffered with delirium for days up until his death, and that one of Baltimore’s oldest bars was one of his last stops. He was found in a gutter at Fell’s Point, and is buried at Westminster Hall, a historic architectural landmark.
For today’s prosery prompt, I am taking lines from Poe’s “Sleeper”, which may be read in its entirety here. Your lines are as follows:
I pray to God that she may lie
Forever with unopened eye
If you’re new, here is how to join us:
- Write a piece of prosery of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given lines in the order in which they have been given. You may add or change punctuation, but you may not add or delete words.
- Enter your name and a link directly to your post into Mr. Linky. Remember to check the box to accept use/privacy policy.
- Read other writers’ work as they enter their links into Mr. Linky. Check back as more will be added.
- Please link back to dVerse from your post.
- Have a wonderful time!🎉
Mr. Linky will remain open until 3pm EST on Monday, June 10, 2024.
I was nearly napping… who is that rapping at the pub door? Hello everyone, and welcome to Prosery here at the pub. I hope you’ll ponder into the midnight dreary and enjoy this Poe-licious prompt. We have Poe’s favorite egg nog on the menu tonight. We also have a vegan version. Or try The Raven, a drink of vodka, rum, blue curaçao, and Chambord. If you’re hungry, try the Sepulchre by the Sea Scallops with Charred Scallions and Romesco; or we have Fried Butterfly Shrimp with three different dipping sauces. Enjoy, indulge! I can’t wait to read everyone’s Prosery!🐦⬛
This comment made me laugh, Melissa!
Thanks, Merril! I’m happy to know my humor doesn’t go to waste.😆
You’re welcome! 😂
Good evening Poe-ts, and thank you, Melissa, for hosting with a classic poet’s words. I might not hang around for long as I’m suffering from a stiff neck – I might go to bed early. But I will be back in the morning to read and comment.
You’re welcome, Kim! I hope your neck feels better and you get some rest.🛌
Thank you, Melissa.
“By My Hand” is exactly 144 words now Kim. Thank you for calling that oversight to my attention… 🙂✌🏼
Cheers Rob. I knew you could do it!
Hello Melissa and All. Love the prompt. Even though early afternoon, The Raven sounds too tasty to pass up. One Raven please.
I’m happy you enjoyed it! It’s midnight somewhere.😜 One Raven coming up.🐦⬛
LOL, indeed! Thank you. Cheers!
Hello Melissa, with Poe you have to go very dark and make it darker as you go… so please be warned my prose may be very unsettling to read.
Hello, Björn, I am intrigued.🤔
Not quite midnight… but please don’t read my story right before midnight.
Hi Melissa. Thanks for hosting today. You have come with a humdinger of a challenge. Poe is a most interesting poet. I will have to dig deep and see what I can come up with.
When i first read the prompt line I thought is read… Forever with one opened eye! Now that would be really weird! :>) How about a chocolate root beer float on this hot afternoon!
Hi Dwight! You made me laugh with that one. That would be weird!👁️ One extra large chocolate root beer float for you!🍺
Ha ha… Wonderful!
I am afraid I could not get my head wrapped around this one. I have a hard time getting into the dark side.
No worries! I’ll make my next Prosery prompt happier.😉
:>)
Hello, Melissa and all. This one was quite a challenge! I might have to taste The Raven. I’ve probably bored everyone with this bit of trivia before but the raven was based on Charles Dickens’ pet raven Grip. He is stuffed and “living” at the Free Library of Philadelphia now.
Not boring at all! An interesting fact, Merril. And one Raven for you!🐦⬛
😊
Thank you for hosting Melissa. 🙂 This will be a tough one. 🤔 The essence of the two lines create a pretty closed loop and focus — but hell… nothing ventured nothing gained. 🤷🏻✌🏼
I’m still writing mine.😬 You could always insert a “never” or “I’d be a fool if”. I’m sure there are plenty of ways it can be spun.😉
My muse led me in an unusual direction on this one Melissa, but I am pleased with the result. It is dark, but beautiful in its spirit. A reflection of mercy. ✌🏼♥️
Can’t wait to read, Rob!❤️🙏🏻
Enjoy a good Poe prompt. Nice choice. And I say that not just because I’m from Baltimore. 😁
Always a good choice! I used to go to Inner Harbor during the summer. Definitely home to lots of Poe memorabilia. The Orioles is a good time, too. Though I prefer the beach.🌊
True. Haven’t been to the Inner Harbor in a while. Still have family there but I don’t get that way too often.
It is I who is rapping at the pub door! Gimme a large Raven please. 🐦⬛ Great prompt, Trips. I love Poe! Hope I can rise to the challenge. 🖤
Ahah! I knew I wasn’t hearing things. I’m glad you like the prompt. Here is a drink for you to enjoy.🐦⬛
In Poe style, a whiskey please 🙂 thank you for hosting us with Poe Melissa.
You are welcome, Paul. Whiskey coming up.🥃
This is so intriguing, Melissa, and I’ll be giving it my best shot! The Poe Cottage, where Edgar lived for a short time with his wife Virginia, is only about a 30 minute drive from my house. It is part of the Historic Registry of The Bronx, NY and a quaint little place. I have visited many times. Stepping inside is other-worldly …. an inspiration and a writer’s dream come true!
Thanks for coming up with a fabulous theme this week!
~ Nancy
It sounds like a dream. I’d love to visit. Can’t wait to read what you come up with!
It’s a very special place, for sure. Thanks for the encouragement, Melissa!
This was an intriguing one. The only way I can write a piece with limited word count is to write it and then condense, word by word. This one shrunk to about 1/3 of its original length–like cleaning out a stuffed closet! Now where did I put all those words I pulled out, just in case I need them later??? Thanks for the prompt!
Glad you enjoyed it!😆
Just did the linky thing! This was great fun, Melissa. Thanks for the invitation to meet up at the pub! 🐦⬛
Awesome! Can’t wait to read yours.🐦⬛