
Hello, dVerse Poets! Welcome back to dVerse! Some of you have taken a break from writing while we were gone, and others (like me) have continued to write. Either way, I hope you’re feeling rejuvenated and ready to join us here.
This is dVerse Poets Pub’s anniversary week–thirteen years! The first formal dVerse post debuted on July 19, 2011. Woo hoo!
We’re starting July with a crowd-pleaser, the Monday quadrille. This is a poem of exactly 44 words (excluding the title), which must include the word supplied by the dVerse host. The poem can be written in any style, form, no form, rhymed or unrhymed.
My husband and I recently celebrated our 46th wedding anniversary. It was a beautiful day in between the days of heat and humidity, and we decided to spend a few hours on the beach. We took a long walk, and we saw so many crabs, little ones and bigger ones scurrying across the sand and dropping into holes as we approached. Very cool, and I felt the opposite of crabby!
I’m sure you’ve guessed today’s word is crab. I thought it might be an odd word to find in a poem, but I was surprised by how many poems I found with the word crab in them.
For example:
Dylan Thomas, “Especially When the October Wind”
“Especially when the October wind
With frosty fingers punishes my hair,
Caught by the crabbing sun I walk on fire
And cast a shadow crab upon the land,
By the sea’s side, hearing the noise of birds,
Hearing the raven cough in winter sticks,
My busy heart who shudders as she talks
Sheds the syllabic blood and drains her words.”Full Poem Here.
Christina Rossetti, “Goblin Market”
Melons and raspberries,
Bloom-down-cheeked peaches,
Swart-headed mulberries,
Wild free-born cranberries,
Crab-apples, dewberries,
Pine-apples, blackberries,
Apricots, strawberries–
All ripe together
In summer weather–
Morns that pass by,
Fair eves that fly;
Come buy, come buy;”Full poem here.
Mary Oliver uses the word crab only in the title (You must use the word crab within your poem)
Mary Oliver, The Hermit Crab
So to be clear: for this prompt, you must write a poem of exactly 44 words AND make certain it includes the word crab, or some form of the word—crabby, crabapple, crabbing, etc. Bonus points if you want to include anniversary and/or thirteen, as well. I’m certain there will be a wide variety of responses, both literal and metaphorical–because we have a diverse group at dVerse! Post your poem to your blog, place the link in Mister Linky below, and then read and comment on others’ poems.
Hi Merril and everyone here! Happy to be back!🎉
Hi, Melissa!
Welcome back, fellow poets, and thank you Merril for the first quadrille prompt after the break.
Hi Kim! Thank you!
Hello, dVerse Poets! Welcome! I’m ready to read your crab-inspired poems. The pub is open with all types of food and beverages. There’s crab dip and crab cakes for those who eat seafood. We’re into blueberry season here in New Jersey, so we have blueberry muffins, blueberry pie, blueberry cake, cobbler, crips–and a salad with goat cheese, blueberries, and blueberry balsamic dressing.
Love seafood, prefer crab to lobster and such an interesting prompt (and doesn’t Dylan Thomas use crab in that very inventive adjectival way of his)
Hi Laura. I’m so pleased you liked the prompt. I just read your poem–SO good! Yes, I agree about Thomas.
A great post for the beginning of the new year at d’Verse. Thank you for hosting, Merril. A cold glass of Cider would taste really good on this hot day. I wonder if they make crabapple cider?!
Hi Dwight. Thank you. I’m glad you like the prompt. I just looked it up, and yes, crabapple cider is a thing! I’ll pour your a tall glass.
How interesting! Thank you for sharing this fact! Sounds delicious and a bit tart!
You’re welcome, Dwight!
Welcome back dVerse Poets. Thank you for hosting Merril. I look forward to reading the crab-inspired poems too. I would love the blueberry cake and that lovely salad of cheese, blueberries with blueberry blasamic dressing.
Hello, happy anniversary dVerse Poets!
Blueberry pie for me please, Merril! Loved the prompt. Will be here today and tomorrow to read and comment 🩷🩷
Hi Sanaa! Here’s a big slice of blueberry pie. Enjoy. I’m pleased you could make it. 💙
Hello Merril and All. Glad to be back in the dVerse saddle again. Will link up in a short bit. Happy 46th anniversary to you and your hub, Merril, and happy 13th anniversary to my favorite poets pub.
Hi Li! Thank you for your kind thoughts, and I’m pleased you’re with us today! 😊
Hi Merril. It’s wonderful to be back at the pub. Happy anniversary to you and the pub.
Interesting prompt for sure!
Hi Punam! Welcome back and thank you!
You are welcome. It seems we will have a full house. 😊
Maybe so!
Good to see everyone again! Love the prompt, Merril. I think I’ll join Sanaa and have a slice of blueberry pie with a tall glass of iced tea, please. Cheers!
Hi Dora! Blueberry pie and iced tea coming up!
happy anniversary dverse
welcome back to all
crab apple tart would hit the spot today
thanks rog
Hi Rog! Welcome! Crab apple tart it is!
nom nom nom thank you
You’re welcome! Enjoy!
I won’t crab about this prompt! https://medium.com/@nolchafox_14571/such-a-crab-2896b0778f74?sk=d7493a1bdd378333741bd26c2c851cb1
I’m glad you like it!
Thank you for hosting. Thank the stars for the other prompt sites. Helped stave off withdrawl. Cool prompt Merril. I bypassed the more obvious, and moved from the bugs and went to the blues. Nice to see the lights back on here at dVerse! 👍🏼🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
Hi Rob! I’m happy you enjoyed the prompt!
Thanks for this fun prompt, Merril, and happy anniversary to you and dVerse!
Thank you very much! 🙂
Hi, Merril. Happy Anniversary to you and to d’Verse!
Hi Cris–thank you!
Hi everyone. Good to be back writing to the prompts
Congrats to Merril and her husband as the celebrate their 46th anniversary
much🤍love
Hi Gillena. Welcome back and thank you! 💙
Thank you for hosting, Merril. Happy Anniversary to you and your husband and congratulations dVerse on celebrating your 13th anniversary. Good to be back. 🙂
Thank you so much! 🥰
Happy anniversary everyone, and happy anniversary Merril, thank you for gathering us again.
Thank you so much, Paul–and you’re welcome!
Good evening, poets! Thanks, Merril, for hosting the anniversary #Quadrille Monday!
Good morning, Frank! You’re welcome. Pleased to see you here!
I finally remembered to get a link in on time!
Wonderful! I’ll be by to read in a few minutes!
Merrill is there a time limit on this one? I’d love to join in!
Hi. The linky is still open, and I think it will be open until tomorrow.
I’m not sure how cheeky you allow these, so if I comment and this is considered inappropriate you can just delete it. I’m also a bit unclear on the Mr Linky thing.
There was an old salt who went fishin’
Hoping for something delicious
That poor ole coot
Caught nought but a boot
His dinner, he was a-missin’
So instead he called on Miss Abby
To cheer up his mood, which was flabby
That buxom young lass
Had a mighty fine…uh… figure
But alas! They parted quite… crabby.
Hi! I think the “cheekiness” is OK, but I believe it’s over 44 words? You post your poem on your blog, and then add the link to the post to the Mr. Linky. Click on Mr. Linky, and you will see all the other poets who have written to the prompt.
Yeah, I couldn’t cut it down to 44 words and keep the limericks. I ran outta words at “buxom young lass, which kind of spoilt it if I stopped there. 🤪
Well, the whole point of the quadrille is to use the prompt word AND write a poem in 44 words.