After our summer break, we’re beginning again, beginning afresh, like a new dawn perhaps. Unsurprisingly that first light is the subject of many poems, and Campbell McGrath’s eponymous pithy 3 liner made me smile:
5am: the frogs
ask what is it, what is it?
It is what it is.
Whilst Louise Glück makes her Dawn a very intimate and personal moment:-
…They’ve just met, now
they’re sleeping near an open window.Partly to wake them, to assure them
that what they remember of the night is correct,
now light needs to enter the room,also to show them the context in which this occurred…
And in the final stanza of September Is, something begins to dawn on Mary Jo Bang:-
Memory is deeply not alive; it’s a mock-up
And this renders it hateful. Yet, it is not a fiction,
Is a truth, indeed a sad and monstrous truth.
I was assigned to you, together we were
A beautiful and melancholic picture.
This last picture is the realization
Of the overwhelming moment
In which the acute eye perceives you as a now
That is over. A now that is fixed
In the swept past.
And now for todays MTB prompt we are writing in the poetry style of the A L’Arora, a form created by Laura Lamarca:
Poetry style:
- 4 stanzas (or more)
- 8-lines per stanza (can split with line break after 6)
- only lines 6 & 8 are to rhyme as x,x,x,x,x,a,x,a; x,x,x,x,x,b,x,b etc
- no syllable count per line
Poetry Subject: Lamarca’s A L’Arora derives from “Aurora” – Italian for “dawn”:.
- Write about the dawn – literally, metaphorically, objectively, personally or however it strikes you
- OR
- Write of dawn as a verb (dawns/dawning), a slow or sudden realization
Useful Links:
A L’ Arora
More Dawn poetry
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST but Kim’s Poetics tribute to Sarah Connor remains open for a further 2 weeks]
Hi everyone. At the moment there is no Mister Linky, but we can add our urls later. In the meantime, here is mine:
https://writinginnorthnorfolk.com/2024/07/11/i-dreamed-of-you/
there now
Apologies, I’ve just spotted it!
Lovely prompt, Laura! xx
thank you Kim and for being so prompt with the prompt and giving me the prompt I needed
Good evening Poets – the cold weather here seems to have addled my brain temporarily – looking forward to all your links ups.
Meanwhile the drinks are on the house with the usual pub snacks.
Hi Laura, Thank you for introducing us to this new poetry form. Love the dawn inspired theme for this prompt. I will be reading in a bit, including reading the poems for our tribute to Sarah (prior prompt).
that’s good to hear Grace – of course the poem can hover around the dawn without it being totally focused there
Thanks for hosting, Laura. I tried a decidedly minimalist A L’Arora and what fun! Appreciate the introduction to this form.
such maximus though in your minimalist Dora
Hi Laura. A new form and I enjoyed writing to it.
its shows – Bravo!
Hello Laura and All. Love the Mary Jo Bang poem. It resonates deeply with me. Will be weaving words to this prompt in the near future and linking up. Happy Thursday!
look forward to it Lisa and glad you noted the poem choice
What a fun and intriguing form, can’t wait to try it! I will combine it with an artwork I’ve done for one of the stories I got to work with, named ‘Dawning’, hopefully that is ok! Looking forward to reading everything as well!
yes your artwork will be welcome
Many thanks for this interesting prompt and challenging choice of form, Laura. The day has long ended here in New Jersey, but I look forward to reading everyone’s contributions at the break of dawn!
I so much enjoyed reading yours though a while after dawn had risen and no cardinals curving the sky
Glad to hear it, Laura—though the absence of cardinal curve in your time of reading is a bittersweet thought!
Fascinating challenge Laura. I will give it a run my friend, see where it takes me. Thank you for hosting… 👍🏼🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
great metaphor Rob ❤
Hello, Laura, happy Friday. This is lovely, thank you.
hope to read yours soon Roberta
I write best first thing in the morning, dawn even, so I went to bed letting this wonderful prompt steep in my brain overnight, Laura. I enjoyed the form too – two rhymes feels enough sometimes…
I agree about the rhymes – not my fave aspect of poetry and hence I liked this Dawn form and I can tell by your poem that it is a time for some remarkable inspiration from your Muse
This is a tough one, but I gave it a shot.
and it worked!
🤗👍
l love these prompts! Thank you so much for hosting! I thought the rhymes would sound dumb, but they actually work well (I hope!)
thank you for joining in too and with rhymes that work so well!
No slacking off here Laura, a solid challenge, I enjoyed learning about the form and welcome the prompt.
certainly no slacking in your poetry Paul – 🙂
Ha, I did enjoy throwing myself into this one for sure. 🙂
Thank you for hosting, Laura. Enjoyed writing to this prompt. 🙂
thank you for adding your dawn too
Woosh, just in time! I had exceeded 3 pm in UK time and luckily your EST let me creep in … Saved by the Rotation of the Earth from Missing the ‘Dawn’ Deadline
Really enjoyed meeting this Challenge – the writing took me off into my own auroral archives. Thank you, Laura!
Off to eat a single dawn-ripened strawberry from my “kailyard” (as featured in my poem, with its attendant municipal streetlight that dims the clarity of my astral and phenomenal viewings)…
yes its 8pm UK time Kathy – so glad you had time to join with your astronomical poem,