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every day unfurls as it must
–from Oolong, by Adrienne Su
Good evening, Pub Poets! Lisa here to welcome you to Prosery: the prompt where we write prose based on some given lines of poetry. This can be flash-fiction or creative non-fiction, but it cannot exceed 144 words in total (not including the title) and must not be poetry (no versification, line breaks, metre, etc.)
Before getting into the nitty gritty of today’s prompt, a reminder:
OLN LIVE for July will be on this coming Saturday, July 20th, from 10-11 a.m. EST (New York Time.) Come to the dVerse home page on Saturday and click on the given link that will take you to the live session. All are welcome across all time zones! Come to simply listen and meet poets from around the globe OR come and read a poem of your choice. We’re a very friendly bunch so we hope you’ll join us. Mark your calendars now!
I know I am not the only one reading this who enjoys drinking tea. Back as a child, there was only one kind of tea in our household to choose from, Lipton’s orange pekoe, pre-bagged, in boxes of 50-100 bags, and bought at a very reasonable price. With pekoe, you have to be careful not to steep too long or it becomes bitter. Another way to prepare was few bags put in a gallon jug and set out on the porch for “sun tea,” which could be easily diluted in a glass with ice cubes.
The next incarnation of tea for our home was green tea, also pre-bagged, and even more sensitive to being bitter if over-steeped.
It was a revolution of the best kind when Celestial Seasonings started marketing herbal tea. There was no more danger of bitter with the lovely chamomile, and Sleepy Time blends. The variety pack was an adventure to be enjoyed.
Fast forward many moons. I learned about looseleaf tea from a boyfriend. I learned about oolong when I started fermenting kombucha tea. I learned about rooibos tea somewhere along the way and found the best place to buy it at a reasonable cost. Same with peppermint. Tea has become a daily beverage for me, where a nightly hot pot of rooibos/peppermint is brewed, and what isn’t drunk hot in the evening is used the next day to sip as iced tea.
I admit that tea has become a way of life for me. Looking for a good line for the prosery prompt, Adrienne Su’s poem shows a fine appreciation for tea and shows that way so simply and beautifully — and how preparing and drinking it can be a model for living.
Oolong
By Adrienne Su
From strong to weak, a single cup
can carry me from waking up
to the mild hush of the bedtime snack.
Fresh hot water brings it back
from depletion, or threat of such.
What ancient genius gained so much
from roasting pieces of a shrub?
I watch it change, as daylight flags,
from strong to weak,
ending with the faded touch
of flavor that was once robust.
faintness helps the mind relax,
but part of me remains perplexed
that every day unfurls as it must
from strong to weak.
Poem copyright©2021 by Adrienne Su, “Oolong” from Peach State, (University of Pittsburgh Press, 2021)
Now that you know a little about my tea drinking habits, it’s time to decide if you want to meet the challenge of writing prosery to Adrienne’s following line of poetry:
every day unfurls as it must
Here’s how to take part in the Prosery Prompt:
• Write a piece of flash fiction or other prose up of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line from the poem.
• Post your Prosery piece on your blog and link back to this post.
• Place the link to your actual post (not your blog url) on the Mister Linky page.
• Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy.
• Please visit other blogs and comment on their posts!
Howdy All. The bar is open!
Good evening all, I hope you had a good weekend, and thank you Lisa for hosting with a poem by a poet who is new to me. I look forward to reading a wide range of flash fiction.
Welcome, Kim. My pleasure on hosting. When I was tagging this, I see another host used one of Adrienne’s poems but didn’t look to see who. I also look forward to reading on the flash fiction trail.
Well I rarely write for Prosery but being a life-long tea drinker I just had to join in – and tonight a cup of Assam from the bar please Lisa – thank you for the prompt. Looking forward to what others take from Su’s ‘Oolong’.
Welcome, Laura. Assam is a new tea for me, I think I will pour two cups, one for you and one for me. Cheers!
it’s strong and dark so does not need to brew for very long – cheers!
Thanks for hosting Lisa. I think I’m gonna give this one a try my friend, but I’m tied up for the next couple hours, but I’ll get back to it if all goes well. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼How come there’s no schedule for the future listed.🤔
Welcome, Rob. My pleasure on hosting. Take your time, my friend, and link up when/if you can. Hope whatever it is goes well. Not sure on the schedule but will send a note out to see if that can be remedied. Thanks for the heads-up!
There’s a tab at the top of this page that says D’schedule.
that’s where I always check Merril, but mine only goes up to July 5th, so it’s not been updated, at least as of right now — I just checked, and that’s at 7:18 PM July 15 here in Seattle.
Ahh–you’re right. It hasn’t been updated. Well, today (Tuesday) is Poetics, Thursday is Open Link Night, Saturday morning is Open Link Live, and the following Monday is Quadrille.
Helllo all! I like your collage, Lisa. I had fun writing to the prompt.🌿
Welcome, Melissa. Thanks much and pleased that you did 🙂
Hi Lisa, Thanks for hosting this interesting prompt. There are so many great varieties of tea.
Here in the South, Sweet Ice Tea is the tea of choice for the common man/woman. It is us usually so sweet it is like drinking candy! For me it is Unsweetened Ice Tea, which I make and drink most days. Two family size Lipton tea bags and one Boston Mint steeped in a quart of hot water then added to the jug of water to make a half gallon. This mint takes away the bitter flavor of plain unsweetened tea.
I also grow green mint tea and steep it to make ice tea as well. So good!
I will see if I can conjure up a story for the prompt!
Welcome, Dwight. I love hearing how you make/take your tea. Never considered using mint to take away the bitterness. Now you have me wanting to give it a try. Will be looking for your story and hope it shows up.
It is very refreshing! It is up now.
ok 🙂
Hi Lisa and all–thank you for hosting.
I drink coffee every morning, but I do enjoy an occasional cup of tea–but more often in the winter.
Welcome, Merril. My pleasure on hosting. First cuppajoe is essential for me too. Tea in winter is comforting isn’t it.
It is. 😊
I love a cup of tea! Right now, I enjoy some teas that taste like coffee (from Teecino). Sorry I had to bring in politics with my prosery but maybe it’s good to discuss over tea…might bring some civility back!
Very interesting on teas that taste like coffee. Do they have caffeine in them? No need to apologize on politics. Speak your mind. We’re going to all need to talk about healing the rift at some point, and as you said when better than over a cup of tea. I haven’t read your poem yet btw 🙂
A little late, but writing done, and thank you for a glorious prompt!
Welcome, C4Y2. Happy you could join us with a story. You are very welcome 🙂
Li we are peas in a pod, I do love my coffee, but as for tea, well, so many varieties and so little time. I love the poem, which I have read before, an anthem for tea drinkers. And the line is fabulous. All that has made me thirst for a double shot of whiskey, tea comes later. 🙂
Welcome, Paul. What’s your favorite tea to drink? Glad you are familiar with the poem. Setting up 2 double shots of whiskey, one for you and one for me. Heading to Meijer Gardens with fam in a bit and may stagger, but so be it! 🙂
Lisa what a fragrant prompt!
I wasn’t intending to join in today – but scribbled a heart-blurt to That Man and it came to 147 words, so very little pruning required… Now I’m off to have a cup of …. coffee actually, and to read Oolong first…
Welcome, Kathy. I’m glad the fragrance of tea drew you in to the prompt 🙂 About to visit the poetry trail in a minute. Happy you joined in.
that poem is so beautiful, and i had to attempt to use that stunning line somehow, so joined in this week – better late, right?
Vidya, I just finished reading your poem and commenting. No worries, you had plenty of time 🙂
I enjoyed this poem 🙂
Welcome, John. And yes, it’s a good’n.
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