Already we are in the 8th month and today is the birthday of Sara Teasdale (8/8/1884). In this extract from her August Moonrise the poem alludes to this in a very existential, other-end-of-the-telescope way:
…O Beauty, out of many a cup
You have made me drunk and wild
Ever since I was a child,
But when have I been sure as now
That no bitterness can bend
And no sorrow wholly bow
One who loves you to the end?
And though I must give my breath
And my laughter all to death,
And my eyes through which joy came,
And my heart, a wavering flame;
If all must leave me and go back
Along a blind and fearful track
So that you can make anew,
Fusing with intenser fire,
Something nearer your desire;
If my soul must go alone
Through a cold infinity,
Or even if it vanish, too,
Beauty, I have worshipped you.
Let this single hour atone
For the theft of all of me
Love, life, beauty and death are the hallmarks of much of Teasdale’s poetry which is unsurprising given that she lived through wartime as a young woman. Even so she avoids the maudlin in an upbeat way as in this 2 octet poem “The Answer”
“…Be still, I am content,
Take back your poor compassion—
Joy was a flame in me
Too steady to destroy.
Lithe as a bending reed
Loving the storm that sways her—
I found more joy in sorrow
Than you could find in joy.”
And for today’s MTB prompt we are going to write an Octameter – designed by Shelley A. Cephas in 2007
Poetry Style:
- 16 lines
- 2 stanzas of 8 lines each
- 5 syllables per line
- rhyme scheme a/b/c/d/e/d/f/d; g/h/c/g/i/g/d/d.
(N.B. watch out for those repeat rhymes and where they fall; 2 in the first stanza and 3 in the second stanza)
Poetry Topic: There is no set theme but if you wish to try and write in the style of Sara Teasdale or dedicate a poem to her, with or without epigraph, here are some more of her poems
Reference:
The Octameter Poetry style
(Strictly speaking an Octameter is a line of poetry of 16 syllables and 8 feet so ideally this style should be renamed for the sake of clarity)
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Good evening dVerse Poets, and thank you, Laura, for hosting with a form I hadn’t tried yet.
nor me Kim but I enjoyed reading more of Teasdale
Hello Poets – its turned cold and wet here in the UK so it really ought to be hot drinks at the bar though many of you are in warmer climes and may want something cooler.
p.s. the prompt was a challenge to me but enjambment helps
Hi Laura,
I cannot post on your lovely poem. There are a couple of WordPress accounts that I have trouble posting on. Anyway, here is what I would have posted.
A beautiful read – my favorite line
I’ll praise tomorrows
Time to me is now but, I am grateful for each new day…so tom
Hello Laura and All. I like the form and can see it being used for song lyrics. It’s close to 80F and so will skip a hot drink (even though I’m sipping on tepids coffee right now.) If you have any shortbread biscuits, I’ll take a half-dozen or so of those, please.
your comment is particularly interesting Kim as my daughter is writing songs for her music degree – she may join this prompt later.,
And I’ll open the shortbreads for us to share as you have tempted me!
Laura, awesome about her daughter. Now I want to see what she does with the form 🙂
Yummy on the shortbreads. Cheers!
she’s considering how challenging it is Lisa (not Kim- oops)
p.s. one line has one too many syllables, which can be edited to fit if needed
that’s ok Lisa – cant be too pedantic and I would not have counted – I found the 5 syllable bit the hardest but liked the rhymes ordering
OK cool. I also found the 5 syllables pretty challenging especially with having to rhyme them also. I also liked the rhymes ordering and am happy you pointed out how it changes from the 1st stanza to the 2nd.
yes it was a bit of a conundrum
Hi Laura and all! It’s rainy and dreary here in Pennsylvania. I’ll have a spiced chai latte if you have it.☕️
all yours Melissa – we are sharing the weather
Thanks for this prompt, Laura—the “octameter” (which I agree should be renamed) was an intriguing, if difficult form to work with this time!
well you made it look easy with your carousel
Still getting over a cold so an Irish “hot one” would not go amiss, thanks Laura. I find writing in such a tight form, syllable and rhyme-wise, can lead to slightly archaic word forms but as this is a homage, it seems appropriate…
hope the hot Irish helped – certainly did not need it for your amazing poem to Teasdale
Hi Laura. Thank you for hosting and for the prompt. I wasn’t going to write to it, but then this morning, I decided to give a try–always fun to procrastinate with poetry! 🙂
so glad you did – such joy you conjured!
Thank you very much!
This is a challenging prompt but, I decided to see what I could create. Thanks for hosting.
you certainly mastered it Trudessa
Hello Laura! I am busy preparing to attend a wedding in the family over the weekend. But I couldn’t resist writing to the prompt. Very challenging as I don’t enjoy counting syllables but the brain does need some calisthenics.😉
and what a worthy subject too!
Enjoyed writing to the prompt, Laura. Thank you. 🙂
thanks for joining in
Hi, I’m the one drinking water. The one staring at the menu on their 21st birthday, still trying to figure out the difference between a jar of cherries and a cherry bomb shot.