MARK YOUR CALENDARS NOW! dVerse LIVE will be Saturday, August 17th from 10 AM to 11 AM EDT.
The link to join with audio and video will be embedded in the OLN prompt on Thursday, August 15th.
It’s Monday and, at the dVerse Poets Pub, we are writing Prosery, the very short piece of prose or flash fiction that tells a story with a beginning, middle and end. It can be in any genre of your choice, but it does have a limit of 144 words; an additional challenge is to hit 144 exactly. The special thing about Prosery is that we give you a complete line or two from a poem, which must be included somewhere in your story, within the 144-word limit.
When I was a teenager, I became enthralled with the poetry of Leonard Cohen, and I still have four of his collections. I knew he was also a singer, but wasn’t that taken with his voice or the style of his songs. At the time, I was already in love with Joni Mitchell, but didn’t know much about her personal life, or that she had had a relationship with Cohen. But I found traces of Cohen in her lyrics.
One poem that I thought was very lyrical was ‘Take this Waltz’, and I was interested to find out that he had put it to music.
One of the things I liked about this poem is that it was ‘after Lorca’, which sent me on a search for the poem that inspired Cohen, and I noticed that he had imitated some of the structure and imagery from Lorca’s ‘Little Viennese Waltz’.
So it’s down to Lorca that this poem is set in Vienna, one of my most favourite places in the world, and that it’s a waltz.
However, Lorca’s poem is much darker than Cohen’s. For example, the little girls in Lorca’s poem become pretty women, and the ‘book of death’ becomes a scrapbook.
The lines I have chosen for you to include in your Prosery are:
“And I’ll bury my soul in a scrapbook,
with the photographs there and the moss.”
Here’s how to take part in Prosery:
- Write a piece of flash fiction of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line in the order in which it has been given. You may add or change punctuation, but you may not add words in between the given ones.
- Post your Prosery on your blog and link back to this post.
- Link it up to our Mr. Linky.
- Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy
- Visit other blogs. Enjoy some amazing writing, and don’t forget to comment – and have fun.


Good evening poets and welcome to the pub, where we are serving summer cocktails, Viennese coffee and Viennese whirls, and fruit wine. I’m anticipating some fine prose. All that remains is to say, ” May I have this dance?”
Hi Kim, and hi everyone else! I will have some of that Viennese coffee, please!☕️ I’ll be back later to read.🤓
Coffee on its way – see you later!
Hello all! Thank you for hosting, Kim….and yes, I would love some coffee and a whirl around the pub’s dance floor! This was a tricky line to incorporate – started out with different plots and ended up where I did. Looking forward to reading others’ responses.
Coffee and a whirl! Be prepared to do battle with my two left feet!
PS: Hoping to see lots of folks at dVerse LIVE Saturday from 10 to 11 AM New York time!
I’m going to set an alarm clock this time!⏰
No hurry, Melissa. As a mother, you need your sleep.
I’ll be there!
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Hello Kim and All. I had to sweat a little to find a spark to build a story around these lines, but once an idea sparked, it rolled out nicely. I’m sipping ginger ale right so skipping the drinks. Happy Monday All.
A little sweat hurt no one, Lisa, and look at the result!
🙂
right = right now
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Fascinating connections of Cohen and Lorca. I am inspired by the moss and all the taking of photos we do these days. What really becomes of them when there are no more scrapbooks to put them in. Whose lines are these Lorca’s? Thanks for the inspiration and a coffee on ice needed in this heat.
One tall Iced coffee coming up!
Thank you for hosting Kim. Interesting prompt. At the moment, I am not certain even how to approach this, but Perhaps something will come. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
Welcome to the dance, Rob. You have plenty of time, and I wait with anticipation.
Thank you for the prompt! I’m ready to waltz.
I hope you have your dancing shoes on, Nolcha, the Blue Danube is about to play.
🤣🤣🤣
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Yes, Kim, you may have this dance. A lovely prosery prompt that took me all morning to fit just right into that 144 benchmark. What relief when achieved. Thanks so much. Mine will publish in a few hours. I will be reading.
From the bar, perhaps a lemonade–no sugar. Thanks so very much.
Hello, All. Summer greetings.
I’m so glad you like the prompt, Selma, and that you achieved 144 words. A sugar-free lemonade is on its way!
oh oh, my goof. Prosery is prose.
I missed that part. Only realized while reading others’ gems. Wrote a sonnet. I’m really embarrassed. 🙈
no cookies for me.
thanks for the fun though, Kim. It was hard. Bless you. I’ll read prompt details more carefully next time 🥵 😵💫 . 🤗
No need to be embarrassed, Selma. You could rewrite the sonnet as prose. It’s a useful exercise. ❤
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Kim – you may dance me to the end of time with this prompt! Although a quick turn around the bar before work fuelled by a morning coffee as the cleaners go about their business is more realistic, please…
I’m delighted you like the prompt, Andrew! You’re an early starter!
Day job – 2.5 days, 9-5…
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You can never go wrong with Leonard Cohen. Now I will play him all day long 🙂
I hope you have a wonderful day!
What’s not to like about this prompt, Cohen and Lorca, a feast, thank you Kim 🙂
I’m glad you like it, Paul!
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Good afternoon, poets! Thanks, Kim, for the inspiring prompt. I’ll take a bottle of burgundy, when you get the chance! 😉
A whole bottle? You must need it!
🤣
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Thank you for hosting, Kim! It’s been a busy week, and I didn’t have a chance to respond earlier. I thought the link was still open, but I missed it. Oh well. Here’s my response, if you want to read it: https://merrildsmith.org/2024/08/15/prosery-a-revelation/
Better late than never, Merril, and you weren’t the only one. I think I might have closed the link too early, although tonight is Open Link. I’ll pop over to read yours in a while.
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