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American poet, Chinese Poetry, Japanese Poetry, poets against the war, Sam Hamill, The Tableau, zen poetry
“Only the fish who leaps
sees the moon on the water"
The Oracle – Sam Hamill
As writers and poets, reading the works of others is de rigueur and one resource I’ve been using recently is The Literary Birthday Calendar, a list of writers by birth date which I then follow up. Thus today is the birthday of Sam Hamill (1943-2018), an American poet I admit to not having read before and yet he was highly lauded in his lifetime, publishing more than a dozen of his own poems and translating volumes of Chinese and Japanese poetry (hence he has been mentioned on dVerse before under Haibun Monday prompts).
Hamill’s poetry is absent on rhyme and heavy on unadulterated lyricism. He talks his poetry to the page as here in “After Morning Rain” which switches between his personal loci and wider, world issues:
“...It is September, the end of summer.
My backyard maples turning orange
and red and gold. From my high window,
the great mountain looks
painted on the horizon line,
small mountains at its feet, then
headlands and the Salish Sea below.
I can read no more today
about the agonies of this world,
its desperate refugees, the men
of arms and gold whose death tolls
are as numberless as the stars.
I’ve grown weary, impatient,
as I’ve grown old...[more].”
Hamill was a poet both in the world and of the world, being the leading light for ‘Poets Against the War’ and still his poetry does not stray far from what he sees, feels and knows directly, as in this autobiographical poem “Of Cascadia”
“I came here nearly forty years ago,
broke and half broken, having chosen
the mud, the dirt road, alder pollen and
a hundred avenues of gray across the sky
to be my teachers and my muses.
I chose a temple made of words and made a vow.
I scratched a life in hardpan. If I cried
for mercy or cried out in delight,
it was because I was a man choosing
carefully his way and his words, growing
as slowly as the trunks of cedars
in the sunlit garden. [more]”
His immersion in classical Chinese and Japanese poetry could only have added to his keen pictorial observations and mastery of the succinct as here in “After Po Chu-i”
“winds toss up white wavecaps
like ten thousand flowers
dark geese against a clear, blue sky
as if written in Chinese”
And today we are going to write ‘The Tableau’ created by Emily Romano in 2008:
Poetry Style:
- 1 or more verses
- 6 lines per verse
- 5 beats/syllables per line
Poetry Rules:
- title should contain the word ‘tableau’
- poem should aim to be pictorial
- no rhyme scheme
Hint: Its optional but you could let your tableau reference the poet Sam Hamill, a poem of his, or his style of poetry.
Useful links:
The Tableau poetry style
‘Gratitude’ – poems by Sam Hamill – google taster
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Hello Poets from a cool blustery evening in the UK – I’ve been enjoying Sam Hamill’s poetry – hope you do too. The Tableau is an easy style to ease us into September so pull up a bar stool and place your orders.
Hot chocolate and peach pie please. Thank you for hosting.
sounds delicious so here it is
Thank you Laura.
Hi Laura! Thank you for recommending Sam Hamill’s poems. I loved his poems. Also The Tableau is an easy style as you said. Happy September and wishing everyone a good week.
the hosting gives me the motive to explore and expand my poetry reading – Hamill was a welcome discovery so am glad you share this Grace – Echoing your happiness wishes
Hello… liked the Tableau… easy as said. I interpreted the beats as accentuated syllables so maybe my lines became a bit long… but hope it works.
beats are literally syllables – I should have made that clearer but copied out as from the Tableau link below
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/tableau.html
Ha.. maybe I have just invented a new form…. I actually tried not to write pentameter, but focusing only on the beats which made it much harder. The reason for my missunderstanding is that I thought the concept of beat was established and I did use it in my prompt on alliterative verse…
words can be confusing but also I liked the rhythm of your poem
Good afternoon! After my self-imposed poem-a-day, I fell back off the wagon! Catching up on all the prompts I skipped!
that can be a marathon –
I can’t keep a straight face. Literally. Send wine and enjoy!
wine and smiles 🙂
Thank you for introducing me to Sam Hamill, Laura. I picked a poem at random and 😮💨 it made me all emotional. I have my coffee already so I’ll see everyone in poems.❤️
Hamill is masterly at the understated emotional in his poems- glad you found one to inspire
I cannot join in tonight – I have been in Accident and Emergency all afternoon. I will try to read some poems tomorrow when I feel better
sorry to hear this -come back when you feel well enough
I especially enjoyed his anti-war poetry … a man whose birthday I will celebrate today. Two years my junior and gone too soon. I would love a glass of pinot gris today. Cuddle up and stay warm.
might need that Pinot myself as today continues cool and windy – will be over to read your poem sometime soon
Thank you for hosting Laura. Interesting prompt, but I don’t understand it. It has confused me. My mind may clear later, maybe tomorrow. ✌🏼
maybe you are overthinking this Rob – reading those who have linked up already should help
Good Evening – interesting prompt, I gave it a try but, not sure how I did.
will come and see…
Good morning poets. Thank you for introducing me to he poetry of Sam Hamill and to the Tableau, Laura. I got back from Hampshire yesterday afternoon and was too tired to link up last night but I didn’t sleep very well and got up early, so here I am! I hope my poem fits the bill.
nice to see you back Kim
Thank you, Laura!
Good morning all and yes Laura, it is very blustery here – not so far from you! I love the blending of personal and wider world themes in Hamill’s work and it is a place I often find myself in albeit not so understated as Hamill in this particular poem…
I try to avoid the political in my poetry as it can be so divisive and errs on the hegemonic these days but Hamill manages to steer a line that is not and hence crosses that divide so we can all appreciate his poems though I love his personal the best and his haikus etc
That seems to be his special ability and sometimes I can stick to that line also but sometimes, Laura I am overwhelmed by inequity and fall away from that ideal…
I know what you mean (I too rage, rage ) but its never white hat/black hat so I avoid the inferences and influences of one sided mainstream media
Thanks, Laura. I was just going to steal the idea and not actually join in here (having so little time to spare these days) but after all can’t resist seeing what others did with this prompt. Also I must thank you for introducing me to the lovely poetry of Sam Hamill. I plan to read more of it!
hi Rosemary glad you joined and that Hamill appeals
Thank you Laura, such an interesting form, happy to have a go and see what happens 🙂
hi Paul – had to edit your link as it was broken so now others should be able to read too
Thank you, Laura for introducing an interesting form. 🙂
glad you found it so 🙂
Apologies for late visits to your posts but for 2 day times have been without electricity and wifi
Many thanks for the prompt, Laura, and for introducing Hamill’s poetry!
you are more than welcome with that poem!
Laura, a lovely intro into a new form and poet. A great combination. This poet lived to see a lot and spoke out. I liked him. Happy birthday. Have written and scheduled mine for a good 4 hours before prompt expires. Thanks for making the closing time precise. Bless you. In the meantime I’ll be reading…
lemonade? I’ll have one, please. No sugar. Thanks.
will look out for your link up Selma
thanks, Laura, for introducing me to yet another form of poetry! i played along (and followed the rules!). linked and loaded ❤