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It’s Monday and, here at the dVerse Poets Pub, we are writing Prosery, the very short piece of prose or flash fiction that tells a story with a beginning, middle and end. It can be in any genre of your choice, but it does have a limit of 144 words; an additional challenge is to hit 144 exactly. The special thing about Prosery is that we give you a complete line or two from a poem, which must be included somewhere in your story, within the 144-word limit.
It was reading Patti Smith’s poetry and autobiographical books that first sparked my interest in the French poet Jean Nicolas Arthur Rimbaud, who was known for his transgressive and surreal themes, and for his influence on modern literature and arts.
Rimbaud was an autumn child, born on 20th October 1854 in Charleville-Mézières, and he died at the young age of thirty seven on 10th November 1891 in Marseille. He started writing at a very young age, but gave up his education and went to Paris where, during his late adolescence and early adulthood, he produced most of his work, but stopped writing literature at the age of twenty after completing his last major work, Illuminations.
Rimbaud was a libertine. He had a sometimes violent relationship with fellow poet Paul Verlaine, which lasted nearly two years. It began when he wasn’t quite seventeen and Verlaine was twenty-eight.
He was quite the linguist, speaking and writing five European languages: French, Italian, Spanish, English, and German. He also knew Arabic, Amharic, Harari, Oromo, and Somali.

By the table, an 1872 painting by Henri Fantin-Latour. Verlaine is on the far left and Rimbaud is the second on the left.
I found his poem, ‘Novel’, by chance, and it took me back to when I was seventeen and living in Germany, in Cologne, a city which was much influenced by the French, who took charge of it from 1794 until 1815.

Rimbaud at seventeen
‘Novel’ is a fresh, exuberant poem, which celebrates young love, and evokes a summer evening when the scent of linden trees fills the night air and the pavements are littered with its tiny flowers – anything is possible. Very different to Rimbaud’s other works, which often deal with darker themes, it is less experimental in form and language, with a more traditional rhyme scheme and meter.
I have chosen the following lines to include in your prose:
“There you can see a very small patch
Of dark blue, framed by a little branch,
Pinned up by a naughty star”
I love the idea of a naughty star!
Here’s how to take part in Prosery:
- Write a piece of flash fiction of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line in the order in which it has been given. You may add or change punctuation, but you may not add words in between the given ones.
- Post your Prosery on your blog and link back to this post.
- Link it up to our Mr. Linky.
- Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy
- Visit other blogs. Enjoy some amazing writing, and don’t forget to comment – and have fun.
Good evening poets! Please take a seat and I’ll be round to take your orders. We have a selection of hot and cold drinks, as well as bar food and, of course, flash fiction.
Hi Kim! Many thanks for hosting. I enjoyed learning about this French poet and somehow….his lines took me to the dark side. Will be fun to see what others come up with! And oh yes: LOVE thinking about a naughty star up there 🙂
Thank you, Lill! As Melissa pointed out to me, there are other translations of this poem, in which the naughty star is interpreted as ‘sinister star’. I prefer the naughty one!
Me, too! The “sinister” sort of ruined it for me.😞
Hello Kim and All. Interesting back story on Rimbaud. Done writing by 20 and passed on by age 37 is horribly too soon on both. The age difference between he and Verlaine made my stomach hurt, which is perhaps why my mind took a darker turn with my story. A mug of hot cocoa sounds perfect to sip while I visit the poetry trail, please.
A mug of Belgian hot chocolate, thick and creamy, coming your way, Lisa! I’ll see you on the poetry trail.
Ahhhh just right, thank you. Cheers!
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I’m bellied up to the bar. Do you have any coffee?
Is that black, white, with cream or some liqueur?
I won’t complain if you add Kahlua and cream.
Coming up!
The bar is empty….looks closed,,,well, as its raining outside I’ll stay and do some reading…thank you for the very interesting prompt Kim..they say Rambo was named after Rimbaud, but I am not sure how true that is..
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Hi Kim and everyone! Loved the Rimbaud quote you provided! Just had time to post and run and now I’d love some hot chocolate to round off the day. Thank you. 🙏🏽💖
Hi Dora! I’ve just got up this morning. I’m so glad you love the quote. An Italian hot chocolate for you, thick, rich and spicy!
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Thanks for the prompt, Kim. I appreciate it. Prosery… Bless you all.
You’re most welcome, Selma. I hope you enjoy reading all the flash fiction.
Yes I have enjoyed the bulk I’ve read. I always enjoy reading dVerse poets works who wow the socks out of me. When that happens I usually let them know, even if just with a simple “wow”
Bless you. It’s a great inspirational prompt.
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Good day and sorry for not writing to the prompt. Yesterday evenening we went to a playwright reading which means that actors read the script without any scenery or other thing… It is really fun, but we came home too late for me to write.
This is the play we “listened” to:
Dig by Theresa Rebeck
You could write on for OLN. I’m glad you enjoyed the play. I’ll check it out.
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I do love a line or two of Rimbaud, thank you Kim.
You’re welcome, Paul, and thank you!
🙂
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Late to the party as I have just got back north for a couple of weeks. Hope to resume the Musery once i’m back in Cambridge for the winter, and perhaps even venture out to your coast, Kim! Now, for peppermint touthpaste and a good sleep, dreaming not of Arthur’s transgressions but of the naughty star… *
Never too late, Kathy! The prompt is still open. It’s not too bad on the North Norfolk coast at the moment, it’s still quite warm, with only a few showers. Sadly no naughty stars as it’s cloudy.
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