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Byron, Lord Byron, lover, Nature, Parallelogram de Crystalline, Shakespeare, Sonnet 18, the Bard
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Here we are almost at the solstice with summer in the Northern Hemisphere now not far away and having selected the theme for this prompt, my thoughts immediately turned to the Bard and Sonnet 18:
“Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm’d;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature’s changing course untrimm’d;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade...”[more]
So too did Lord Byron write of his lover in likened terms:
“She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that’s best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
Thus mellowed to that tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies..."[more]
And so for this MTB challenge we are writing as per the poetry form devised by Karan Naidu, which he called a Parallelogram de Crystalline (apparently dedicated to his soulmate, Crystal Rose)
Poetry Rules: Despite the titular length it is quite simple and short!
• 12 lines in total (each Capitalised but without punctuation)
• 4 verses
• 3 lines per verse
• syllable count per verse 3,6,9
• unrhymed
Poetry Theme: the beauty of a (real or imaginary) lover as compared with and described in images of nature.
(Crystalline literally means very clear or bright, therefore, keep the complementary images crisp.)
Details & Example:
Future Trends in Poetry with Crystalline Poetry (scroll towards the bottom of page)
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings. Please also TAG dVerse in your post, or include a link at the end of your poem that leads readers back to dVerse (https://dversepoets.com).
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Good evening Poets from the UK – the bar is open and I’m sure there will be some great poetry going down. The speciality drink to match the poetry theme is ‘A Part time Lover’ – tequila and elderflower just 2 of the mixes or just name your poison. A selection of Tapas goes down well with the drink
Good evening poets, and thank you for hosting with a new form, Laura. I’m not sure if mine adheres to all the rules, but I tried. Elderflower cordial with fizzy water would be lovely, please, with a slice of lemon.
Fizzy elderflower coming up Kim – I’ll leave out the tequila and am sure your poem will pass muster.
Cheers Laura!
I should really serve you something that better suits your wonderful heavy metal poem
Surprise me!
1/2 oz Jagermeister herbal liqueur
1/2 oz Goldschlager cinnamon schnapps
heavy metal cocktail!
Genius!
Ask me if I follow instructions…… Coffee, please!
Many thanks Laura ..I decided to go naughty…ha! So I need Tabasco in my drink…
PS..oh Laura, have new Substack .unbelievably forgot password for my ultra secure email AND password for site..so had to start new site..
😦 oh ok I will sign up to the new
Ta!
wish I could comment on your hot lover poem Ain but cannot see anywhere to do so
Aha! Am sorry..is entirely connected to the level of my ignorance…am v strongly encouraged to make sure no electronic signals come to my phone at times, eh messages as nasty little technical beasts follow the trail. I assumed comments on a post would also apply, but am too dense to know for sure. I should have put it in words after the post but is a bit presumptuous. Will try not to repeat.
I second your dilemma but your poetry is too good to miss
I will need a cold shower then before reading – back tomorrow
V healthy.
Interesting form for tonight. I decided to play along as romantic poetry is one I enjoy. I will be back tomorrow to read as it is getting late. Thank you for hosting.
thanks Trudessa – you certainly know how to twine some romance
As always, Laura, your prompts demand serious thought and careful editing to stay within the rules but I like a challenge and could now do with something refreshing – a cold glass of Blood-Orange Sangria perhaps…
I’ll join you in that drink and thank you for staying with and within the prompt guidelines with some semi-dangerous imagery of a lover
Thank you for this introduction to an interesting form Laura, new to me which is always good, I like the stimulus. 🙂
thank you Paul and for such a tender poem
ugh, late to the party, but participated and posted on my site. thank you for the prompt, Laura. appreciate the new form!
more ugh. i didn’t do this one right (deleted). perhaps there was a good reason why i missed the deadline! next time …
I missed the cutoff 😦
I’ll be more careful next time!