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“Poets use colors to paint pictures with words, allowing readers to visualize scenes and emotions” [source]
After my last MTB look at the Ubi Sunt motif, I’m continuing with the concept of the motif in poetry. For some of us, it might be helpful to learn more of this literary device, for others, practice makes perfect! So first to definitions:
“motif” comes from French and means a pattern. Unlike big ideas called themes, motifs are specific details, concepts, or structures that show up over and over again in a literary work, adding layers of meaning…” [source]
Often cited as example are the repeating greens in Fitzgerald’s novel “The Great Gatsby“. The green of the harbour light, the green cards of invitation, the green car of the accident, whereby “greenness” is the motif which reinforces the broader theme of the unattainability of the American dream as well as the symbolism of jealousy.
Thus the motif is the tangible element that gives feeling and meaning to the more amorphous theme as well as having symbolic significance.
The Imagists use these tangible motifs in their poetry precisely because it fits their rules for directness, economy of language, and avoidance of generalities. And despite Lowell being derided as one of them by her contemporaries, her 5 sectioned “Towns in Colour” goes full colour motif mode:
“Red slippers in a shop-window, and outside in the street, flaws of grey, windy sleet! Behind the polished glass, the slippers hang in long threads of red, festooning from the ceiling like stalactites of blood, flooding the eyes of passers-by with dripping colour, jamming their crimson reflections ….screaming their claret and salmon into the teeth of the sleet, plopping their little round maroon lights upon the tops of umbrellas…”
IV – Afternoon rain in State Street
“Cross-hatchings of rain against grey walls,
Slant lines of black rain
In front of the up and down, wet stone sides of buildings.
Below,
Greasy, shiny, black, horizontal,
The street.
And over it, umbrellas,
Black polished dots
Struck to white…”
By now you’ve guessed that today’s MTB prompt is poetry with a colour motif:
- take one or more literal colours (not a fancy colour name)
- repeat the colour word(s) throughout the poem (e.g. refrain; anaphora, epistrophe)
- use colour synonyms
- employ colour with its specific meaning to the poem’s theme
- let your colour motif(s) also become symbolic
Your poetry style is optional but you may want to experiment with Imagism. If so these are the guidelines:
- Use language of common speech. direct and economical, using common words and phrases.
- Embrace free verse. Disregard poetic meter but rather, focus on the rhythm of your phrases
- Your choice of subject should reflect real life
Some Useful Links:
- Lit Charts – Motif
- What Colour is Poetry
- Colours and Emotions in Poetry: The Poet’s palette
- Preface to Some Imagists Poets (Amy Lowell)
Once you have written and posted your poem, according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Please also TAG dVerse in your post, or include a link at the end of your poem that leads readers back to this dVerse prompt
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Good evening Poets from the UK -The bar is open for drinks and snacks as I’m only just back from France in time to read some colourful imagist poetry.
Hi Laura. I hope you had a wonderful time in France.
Great prompt. Will be back tomorrow to read.
see you then and thanks, Punam
fun! penned and posted! thanks for the prompt, laura. ❤
and thank you for joining in the pink
🙂
Sorry. I got nothing tonight, and my creativity is zippo– so I popped this oldie into Mr Linky: Caloriyum | Scrambled, Not Fried
sorry about the zippo, Ron but they are good lighters so maybe something will ignite from your Caloriyum
Hi Laura, great prompt. Are you doing ModPo this year? If not, your prompt was serendipitous, because it’s imagist week in ModPo symposium mode.
thanks for that Maria – I knew nothing of ModPo so this is doubly fortuitous
take two. xx, ren
your white is so striking
Laura, thank you so much!
Thanks for this prompt. I loved it. See me via Mr. Linky.
I see you Judy in full colour mode though black was fave
Thanks, Laura.
Great prompt Laura – I am at a meetup of old (we are all old) schoolfriends of 53 years ago but I couldn’t resist penning a poem before breakfast…
a healthy breakfast Andrew!
thanks so much for the prompt Laura. Not sure if I understood it well but I posted my piece. Anyway, i was excited to work on it. Regardless. Again thanks.
thanks Selma for joining in and taking the chance for a repaint!
Thank you for this challenge Laura, something to engage me.
very engaging, Paul
Hello Laura and All. Way late to the party but not too late. Can’t wait to read the poems generated from your prompt.
well you rode in fast at the end there Lisa!
🙂
Thanks, Laura–looking forward to reading the colorful offerings!
thank you Jennifer for intriguing us with your enigmatic colour poem
Hi, Laura! Thanks for hosting. I’ve submitted my poem, I hope you’ll enjoy it.
glad you were able to join in time / I’m just catching up today