
Hello dVerse Poets! Today we’re writing prose instead of poetry. This is a dVerse prompt called Prosery. To participate, you take a line of poetry that I give you and insert it into your prose. I would prefer using a poetic line as inspiration, but that is not the prompt! So, do make certain you give attribution for the line and the poet.
For Prosery, your prose—fiction or nonfiction—may be up to 144 words, not including the title. Some people like to make it exactly 144 words, but that is not required. You must not alter the words, change the word order, or insert words into the line. However, you may change the punctuation.
Got it?
OK. So, here’s the line:
“The granites and schists
Of my dark and stubborn country.”
–Nan Shepherd, “The Hill Burns”
from In the Cairngorms (Edinburgh: The Moray Press, 1934)
https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/hill-burns/
I learned about Scottish poet Nan Shepherd in this fascinating essay by Oliver Teale in Interesting Literature,
https://interestingliterature.com/2025/12/first-female-writer-british-banknote/
This line made me think of the winter darkness those of us in the northern hemisphere are experiencing now in December, but the line can also be used metaphorically. It’s short, so it will not take up many of your 144 words!
If you’re new to dVerse. Here’s how to participate:
Write a piece of prose, fiction or non-fiction, up to 144-words, using the given line.
–Post your story on your blog and link back to this post.
–Enter your name and the link to your post by clicking Mr. Linky below (remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy).
–Read and comment on your fellow storytellers’ Prosery pieces. We all like to have our work appreciated. There will be a great variety of wonderful stories, I’m certain!
It’s a delight to write prosery again… always fun to capture the mood, and darkness suit me so well.
I’m so pleased you enjoyed it! I’ve offered your mulled wine tonight.
Hellooo! Welcome to the dVerse pub. It’s cold, dark, and dreary here in southern New Jersey. We still have Björn’s special mulled wine on the menu, along with hot vegetable soup, and an assortment of cheeses and fresh baked bread. Of course, we have anything you want to eat and drink! Take a seat by the fire while you sip and read.
Hello, Bjorn and Merril and All. I was stumped for a story at first but when I let my grip go, the story came to me. A bowl of hot veggie soup with fresh-baked sourdough bread sounds perfect, please. Maybe a small glass of mulled wine for dessert.
Hi Li. I sent you an email. I think you posted the wrong page, but I’m intrigued!
Veggie soup and sourdough bread coming up, and mulled wine for after!
Hi Merril, I just emailed you back. Thanks for bread and soup with the wine for after. Cheers!
Nan Shepherd! I don’t know if I’ll make it back or not with a story but what a delight to see you featuring Nan Shepherd. I didn’t realize she was a poet but I did enjoy her poetic prose work “The Living Mountain” which I read after reading Robert Mcfarlane’s amazing “Underland”. What a cool place this pub is!
That is cool, and Robert McFarlane is amazing. Black Bough poetry did two issues of poetry inspired by his work. The prompt is open all week, if you want to write to it.
A bit late to the pub….but….I’m back! November was amazing with time in Athens, Croatia, Montegengro, France, Italy, the Canary Islands, Morocco, and ending with a few days in Barcelona. So wonderful to experience different cultures and see different parts of the world.
This line was a bit difficult….but I did come to a story line…completely fiction although written in the first person. Good to be back…and that mulled wine sounds wonderful!
I’m glad you had a great trip, Lill! Sorry you found the line difficult. I think they always are, but I try to keep them short and not too flowery. 😊
Greetings Everyone! Mulled wine for this lady, I need to shed poundage. A most intriguing challenge Merril. As Lisa remarked, I was stumped for a bit and then decided to use our current political situation as fodder. Cheers!!
Hi Helen! Mulled wine coming up. I would have gone with current events, if I wasn’t continuing my on and off again spy story!
I’m a bit later than planned today, and I think it’ll just have to be tap water for me. I absolutely loved the prompting lines for this one Merril, even if I did have all on to stay at 144 words!
A glass of water for you! I’m so glad you liked the prompt!
I love Nan Shepherd’s work, both poetry and some of her prose too. What a great line to choose – thank you Merril.
I’m so pleased you like it, Paul!
A great prompt thank you, Merril, and it spoke to my inner geologist, managed to fit it in before bed as I didn’t want to miss the deadline, so a drop of Single Malt, something peaty and very Scottish as a nightcap please…
You’re very welcome, Andrew. We have some great scotch at the pub. Well, I can imagine. 😉
Once again, I didn’t make the deadline- but I did write a piece so here’s a link. I do enjoy this prompt so much- but I have a posting schedule and will never make it on time! Thanks so much for providing it though.
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You’re very welcome! Thank you for writing to the prompt.
Posting schedule! You sound very organized. 😊