Lillian here, delighted to host today’s Quadrille session at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe.
The quadrille is a poetry form created by folks here at dVerse. It’s a poem of exactly 44 words, sans title. The pub host (me today) provides one word that must be included within the body of the poem. Folks may use a form of the word or the word itself. A synonym for the word does not fulfill the prompt.
Thinking about our lives today, we’re faced with a 24/7 news cycle. Our cell phones ding with updates and we sometimes face folks who shoot from the hip with their words, rather than taking the time to listen, analyze and then respond. We’ve all heard the phrase “silence is golden”. But for some who lose a spouse or partner or child – someone close to them – silence can be deafening. Emily Dickinson said “Saying nothing sometimes says the most.” Abraham Lincoln purportedly said “It is better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to speak and remove all doubt”. Many poets have written about silence, or at the very least, included that word in their poem.
Silence by Billy Collins
There is the sudden silence of the crowd
above the player not moving on the field
and the silence of the orchid.
The silence of the falling vase
before it strikes the floor,
the silence of the belt
when it is not striking the child.
The stillness of the cup and the water in it,
the silence of the moon and the quiet of the day
far from the roar of the sun.
The silence when I hold you to my chest,
turn away.
And there is the silence of this morning
which I have broken with my pen,
a silence that had piled up all night
like snow falling in the darkness of the house–
the silence before I wrote a word
and the poorer silence now
So – if you haven’t guessed it by now, the word I’d like you to include in your quadrille today is “silence”. You may use a form of the word, for example “silent.” You may not however, use a synonym for the word.
New to dVerse? Need to be refreshed on the rules? Here’s what to do:
- Write a quadrille (a poem of EXACTLY 44 words, not including the title) AND include the word “silence” or a form of the word within the body of the poem. A synonym for silence does not fulfill the prompt. It must be the word, or a form of the word.
- Post the poem to your blog AND add the exact URL for your poem to Mr. Linky below.
- REMEMBER to either TAG dVerse in your post, or include a link at the end of your poem that leads readers back to dVerse (https://dversepoets.com).
- If you do not TAG or include a link to dVerse at the end of your post, I will gently remind you to do so. After all, this will increase your readership and comments, and others will find dVerse and hopefully join in the fun. If you do not add the TAG or link after my reminder, I will remove your post from Mr. Linky. I do not want to do that! So please do include the TAG or link!
Hello dVersers! Pub is open with chocolate ganache cupcakes, lemon bars, and cranberry oatmeal cookies. Beverages of your choice!
Hope you enjoy a spot of silence today….a time of personal retreat when you can just be! In today’s busy world, that’s always nice to have.
Looking forward to readig your poems today! Boston is a bit chilly….especially after being spoiled by the San Diego sun for 2+ months. But…it is good to be home.
Good evening poets and thank you, Lillian, for hosting with a quiet prompt. As you can see, I’ve had the laser procedure and I am able to read small fonts and drive again! Silence is a great word to inspire a quadrille. A camomile tea and a chocolate ganache cupcake would be lovely, please.
Good to see you here, Kim! Cupcake and tea coming right up! I had cataract surgery about 3 years ago….it’s interesting isn’t it? You can’t really turn back the clock in terms of aging as in wrinkles, grey hair, the body losing collagen and getting a bit stiffer etc….but you REALLY can turn back the effects of aging on the eyes! I was SO amazed how much better I could see. So glad it worked well for you!
Hello Lillian and All. Happy Monday! The sun is trying to peek out every once in awhile even though still chilly.
Yes….we arrived home late Thursday night after 2+ months in sunny San Diego. I woke up this morning to trees covered in snow and George just walked home from the grocery store in sleet and ice pellets raining from the sky! I just must keep repeating….spring is on the way…..spring is on the way!
Love the silence of Billy Collins and the chance to hear for myself – thanks for hosting this Lillian – just a cup of hot choc for me please
Hot chocolate coming right up! Glad you enjoyed the Collins poem…it struck a chord with both myself and Kim as well. Nice to have you at the pub tonight, Laura.
I love this prompt, Lillian, and your illustrations and music are wonderful. Some of my favorite poets for sure! I will work on this one and see what I can come up with for the prompt. I think I will sit back and sip on a cold root beer float and enjoy the Sound of Silence! Thank you for hosting!
So glad you like the prompt, Dwight! Mmmmm I may have to make myself a rootbeer float while I”m making yours! They are so good! 🙂
Yes, so refreshing!
hi lillian
hi poets
have you heard the disturbed version of a sound of silence. WOW what a stunningly beautiful version.
great choice of word for the quadrille.
thanks rog
Have not heard that version…will have to search for it. So good to see you here! Glad you enjoyed the word choice!
Hi Lil, hi all… Thought it might be a great day for a hot air balloon ride. Come on, join me! Hold on, don’t fall out — or… 🪂
Good to see you here, Rob! Will let others join you in the hot air balloon….although if your poem is about that, I can keep my feet on the ground while reading so I’d be in for that!
OKay folks. Time for me to call it a night. As always, I’ve left the pub key under the mat to the right of the door. Please come on in and help yourself to a treat and a libation. No fee or tip necessary, other than a poem at Mr. Linky! I’ll be back in the morning with plenty of coffee and also some pistachio croissants! See you then….